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Old 05-26-06, 06:22 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Bangin new joint!!!!!!!!!! "CARBINES LOADED"...Q, Tony, Tito...holla atrcha boyeesss

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Intro sample: In the beat...Tony found...hardass Army Seargeant drillin' his squad

Verse 1: Tha Q

Hook: Tony and Q

Verse 2: Tony

...There is a bridge of the army seargeant talking 1/2 way in Tony's verse...Then, he comes back with the other 8 bars.


Verse 3: Tito Bronsky


Outro: us 3


Concept: OYD...the Army...3TE...don't FUSS with us


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Old 05-26-06, 11:02 PM   #2
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Word.....Full Metal Jacket is the SHIT!!!!! lol.

Anywho.....Your flow on this isn't your usual flow. It sounds a little slower and more normal. Doesn't sound bad....just different than what I'm used to hearing from you.

Hook's not bad. I like the switch up on it

Tony comes in....good flow. Your voice is good man. I like it. You and Q are killing this man. More Full Metal Jacket.....lol. When you stopped your verse and the hook came in, I hardly noticed it until Q's part. You should try to make them a little different, especially in the quality.

Tito - I lalways love your flow man, I just don't think it was matching this beat and the feel of this track. Kinda short too.....lol.

Overall.....good fucking job fellas

O.Y.D Running This!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-27-06, 01:44 AM   #3
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word up nygma thanks fo the book cuzzin holla fo a much needed collab
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Old 05-27-06, 01:57 AM   #4
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ok ok, here we go, nice track Im liking it so far. Ur flow is very nice matchs up good on da beat. Ur lyrics run well. Im liking em. The beat is alright, quality is good. The hook seems ok, but not bad. Voice is good. Basically overall u have a very good track keep it up '1'
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Old 05-27-06, 12:34 PM   #5
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preciate the feed yall
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Old 05-27-06, 03:26 PM   #6
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sick track .. flow is pretty on point..nd tha lyrics is there..tha beat is ok..not ma kina beat tho..fits ur voice good tho..couldnt really tell where tha chorus started..overall its a nice track..nd tha lil speeches u added in fits tha beat well...good shit

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Old 05-27-06, 07:01 PM   #7
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enygma pretty much hit it on the head, i agree with his evaluation of this track, word.

nice shit.....solid piece fellas. keep up the good work gentlemen.


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Old 05-27-06, 07:02 PM   #8
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lol, nice sig infamous. i see we get our fits at the same place...lol.


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Old 05-28-06, 11:16 AM   #9
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Old 05-28-06, 01:55 PM   #10
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I like this beat, I was thinkin of goin to it...Bobby Ruckus or w/e right? Anywho, I like Q's verse, Tony was straight. I liked Tito the best though, he brought a certain energy to the track. Overall a pretty straight track. RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228655
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Old 05-29-06, 05:48 AM   #11
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lol, full metal sample...sickness..

beats kinda like "breath"

Q come in nice...flows good here...hallarious line was hot...tony come in nice here...ohh it's the hook, put together nice....

tony flow hot here...lol @ bosten strangler

nice sample...

ur quality changes a bit here...nice mini story lines here n their...gettin a lil nas on em

hooks cool

tito come in a mad energy lol, like it...flows hot...lyrics cool some "u can't fuk w me" shit like how u rush ur lines but w skill..make em sound good...

hooks cool
LOL @ ending

good stuff guys
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Old 05-29-06, 09:12 PM   #12
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werd uppppppppppppppppppppp
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Old 06-01-06, 11:34 PM   #13
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hott ass track right here kids
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Old 06-01-06, 11:52 PM   #14
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i know what you mean, i already told q, it took the spot of a track that i didnt like on the my mix tape.......and im not even on the track
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
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Old 06-03-06, 05:05 PM   #15
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cool sample
q's been switchin up his flow lately i aint mad at it i luv it in parts other parts its cool nice mutis in parts lyrics were cool
hook was tight tony kinda sounds like g deuce lol
flow was cool tony nothing that really stood out flow wise but lyrics were cool come in a little loud after the sample i like your delivery on the track made me listen
tito def brought a dif feel to the track alwas loved your flow delivery was cool dif from the rest lyrics wre cool liked you best on the track
outro was cool
this was a cool tack everyone sounded different everyone added somethin to the track props
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