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Old 05-27-06, 02:03 AM   #1
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DJ Danger - 1 Life!

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I got a new hit out called "1 Life!" Shit is crazy from some of the reviews i got. Come check it out. Let me no wat u think, havnt gotten 1 bad revirew yet. '1'

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=417942

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Old 05-27-06, 02:07 AM   #2
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ummm decent i really dont like this beat all that much flow is aight cuzz but ya libs seem off slightly in spots ide rtather see you on a baller beat .......but overall im likin ya posative vibes u kickin holla at me in pms cuzzin
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Old 05-28-06, 12:02 AM   #3
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yo thanks homie, I'll keep in mind 2 do a baller type track 4 ya '1'
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Old 05-29-06, 05:32 AM   #4
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beats kinda gay

emotion is good here...


come in is nice...dubs r good...lvls seem nice...coke lines kinda played..lyrics iight...emotion real nice here...hook fits well

come in on 2nd nice...think u need noise reduct...better mixing...end of 2nd verse nice..

hooks still cool

jump jump delevery was kinda weak...hit the gas line was nice....

nice song here tho..some "pick me up shit"

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Old 05-29-06, 10:42 PM   #5
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thanks homie, i got more recording time this weekend, I'll b sure 2 drop 1 of my tracks.
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Old 05-30-06, 12:19 AM   #6
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intro's ok, beat sounds like a playstation game or some shit. Timing on this first hook is slightly off, nothing to big.

Flow in the first verse, quality is good, nice production behind this, can tell were you start stopped recording, but its cool.

Hook again, same as first comment. Dubs are good.

Again, cant stand this beat, fucking annoying, emotion comes thru a bit better in second verse, effects level are good, if it wasnt for the hook this track would be very boring and have a slight monotone.

very simple track,but you get what you have to say across. Enjoyed the listen.
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Old 05-30-06, 10:55 PM   #7
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thanks homie, will do.
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Not feeling the beat or the little into hook...Emotion is good as is flow..This isn't my type of song though..Lyrical wise, it was meh, so you can work on that.

RTF on my track with Past Tense
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