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05-29-06, 02:21 AM | #1 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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::Another Day::
IP: 4381 3163
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2753480
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2753491 Words travel like the wind, but are quiet like the breeze My world is looking dim; I can’t put my mind at ease I’m surrounded by a crowd and I still feel lonely Those who I thought were my closest friends hardly even know me And just when I think there’s someone in the world who understands They can’t relate to how I feel, and fate switches hands But beyond what most call that charm and charisma Most people consider me to be an enigma They can’t figure me out; my mind’s surrounded by doubt I can’t find the road to riches cuz I took the wrong route But who’s gonna be the one to point me in the right direction Those who feel imperfect are sometimes closest to perfection Reflections of a past self remain constant reminder Of the way I was, but now the days seem kinder So I live my life to the fullest, I can’t dwell in this sorrow The things we do today will be our memories tomorrow I'll just wait another day... I tried to escape the loneliness through the wrong door And it backfired, showing me all that I longed for I remember when someone special walked hand in hand with me That thought single handedly made an uninspired woman of me I’d find a song that I’d connect with, but then I’d play it out Emptiness turned me into a shiftless lay-about A motionless pen arose, forced me to take all this And paint a picture, refining the rawness But slowly it happened, my brush strokes weren’t the broadest My mind envisioned the twilight beach skyline in August I walk along the water across the wide beach While always staying slightly out of the tide’s reach My life was like the sand, it transformed with each step I wrote, and my pen told the secrets it kept Remembering footprints behind me, seagulls flying by I taste the air; the ocean wind, and the salty sky The breeze caressed my face and made me wanna run away To wherever it was going, I’d return another day I'll just wait another day... |
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05-29-06, 04:10 AM | #2 | ||||
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP: 6BB6 E242
cool shit girl I liked it.
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05-29-06, 05:14 AM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4381 3163
thank you guys for the feed...i'm in your sig and all cuz you thought i was fake. at least now ya know. haha. well i'll def drop some more...pz
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06-02-06, 05:33 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: EF84 9DAE
This was pretty much all tight....you had a flow that alot of peep's dont have when you write...an all around good drop
. . . this was what i thought of as the best part.... . I’d find a song that I’d connect with, but then I’d play it out Emptiness turned me into a shiftless lay-about A motionless pen arose, forced me to take all this And paint a picture, refining the rawness |
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