The story was cool, it had a twist and I like that.

This was my favorite part...

Eduction and a bright future, always voted most likely to succeed
Heart of a champ, even had the will to teach a blind kid to read/

This was my least favorite part...

She took part in an abusive marriage, where she learned how to grip the nine
Killed a man and her life was ruined, like glued murders she sticked[should be stuck] to crime/

You used "sticked" to force the multi. Forced multi's = not good.

Overall it was aight. Keep writin'.