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06-07-06, 05:21 AM
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Lol flow is nice and easy to read, multi's were pretty good...overall i really like this piece because its good balance..lol has the slighttest emotion and i really like it... all i gotta say is you can still improve on the flow even though it was damn near perfect here, plus a little more Complexity in General and it will be perfect..but for what it is, and in my opinion on what you wanted it to be (which i dont know for shure) but its good...lol..
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06-15-06, 03:12 AM
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damn. that was dope. i fuckin saw everything you said omb. i miss topicals. hehe. i used to be semi-dope at em
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