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Second Coming
IP: 07C1 FE69
Second Coming
Regular – First ComingItalics – Second Coming I was conceived on the eve of indecision,
With the world unfurling like a pin-less cushion There was chaos and pain, Deranged killers, torture and rape Corruption; insane, people being slain By the hands of the kind that I came to save I was a slave to the world Engraved in the brains of all things to hate I gave victims a chance to relate To all the rareness that made them great Fate led me here; it’s where I stand Holding your life in the palm of my hand I watched the world pass me by Doves learned to love, learned to fly I gave sight to the blind I was aesthetic to the apathetic mind People loved me; I was king in my head I even raised the dead to bow by their beds I shed but a tear for those men As I led my people to put them under again They listen to me, the works that I speak Don’t have to justify the things that I seek I prayed for the weak, but I was betrayed So I gave all my pain to the people I saved I carried the burden up a mountain Felt the accusing eyes I was, tossed aside as I prayed to God And I, thought about life… As my palms were nailed to the cross I thought of what could be, not what was lost I’m back with a cause, To remind the world of the hate and suffer; How I tried to guide, and how they held me under Now I’ve risen again, and there’s nothing to do Call me Hitler, new king of the Jews Back to reclaim this crown of thorns Reborn; Now Nobody knows if I’ll ascend or descend but I’ll avenge my deaths and be here to the end. Regular – Jesus Christ Italics – Adolf Hitler Terumoto - Dream Life. Chryme Syndicite - Short of a Second Chance
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05-08-06, 05:57 PM
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IP: 42C1 58F2
up.............
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05-10-06, 03:06 PM
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IP: 8D10 03C1
no feedback?...
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05-10-06, 05:20 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
i always liked ur pieces. and this was interesting cus we lookin at 2 great guys.... well adolf wasnt great but he was evil and thats wut made him such an ass. but anyways u had alot of internal rhyming and that really flowed with this, the structure was pretty good and shit too. jesus helps and adolf wanted to be a leader. lol pretty good piece man. keep it up
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05-10-06, 05:47 PM
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lol ^ thanks, but i dont think you understood it.
It's about jesus living his life and getting betrayed by the jews, so he comes back as hitler and avenges himself by killing millions. The end just contrasts the good and evil in the world...
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05-10-06, 05:52 PM
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-da prophit-
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ying yang. i kinda got that. but wasnt sure lol i didnt wanna say somethin then look stupid. lol could u check out some of my pieces. there all alone and shit......
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05-15-06, 06:59 PM
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IP: 4378 210B
done.;..........................
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