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Old 06-07-06, 06:40 PM   #1
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new jsummz joint on some crazy flow ish wit dis one..
jsummz on first and hook
breezy on second
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left feed on q's track and jay and enygmas
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Old 06-07-06, 07:01 PM   #2
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ohh yea this that one you was talkn about..

damn j you comin in real nice......shit...that grindin beat should of went to you and breezus not hte clipse...hahaha nice shit.....here j......

lets see what big breezus got going...comin in nice.with that laid back flow fo sho.....nice lyrics and delivery as well.

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Old 06-07-06, 08:37 PM   #3
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good shit....gettin on that slow drawn out shit like me. haha, turn your dubs down.....n your good.....now get me them accapella like woah, i need to put our song together
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Old 06-08-06, 02:02 AM   #4
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imma punch u right inthe face... make that rock simbyle nail u in the face likc a carpenter
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Old 06-08-06, 04:48 PM   #5
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huh? I'm scratchin my head at how you came in...didn't know who or what was rappin

flow is good

not sure bout this voice action...unusual, if not distinctive


lyrics are average

is this the hook? doesn't come in different from the main vocals...hard to tell them apart

make the separation more discrete


2nd cat...I feel what he was tryna do with his delivery, but it was kind of sloppy with the tongue

not bad with the flow tho


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Old 06-08-06, 05:33 PM   #6
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okay okay grindin
eww yoru voice sounds horrible on this beat
.....lol the hook needs work along with quality
ahhh stop that slurrin nigga fuck
but the styles good you just don't have the voice
your you choose the wrong takes on the real
...it's iight nice try
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Old 06-09-06, 01:06 PM   #7
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this is the exact opposite of how i actually spit... cant hate tryin some new shit
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Old 06-09-06, 01:38 PM   #8
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Feelin the Grindin beat......lol. I think you need to up your vocals a bit....too low. Flow was nice. LOL @ the lyrics....all about the honeys, huh. Good shit though man....keep it up

Breezus - delivery's kinda monotone. Maybe it just seems that way cause you have a deeper voice. You should probably raise your vocals a bit too and fuck with the EQ

Good shit fellas.....and J Summers....sup wit that collab? I'm down for whatever...
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