14.

lets drop early?

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14 lines?
by when?

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lets get it done tonight.

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k...I'll try to drop by 8 or 9 pacific time man....see u then dawg....

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Here it is…I wanted to right more but we agreed on 14…good luck man….


It just got hopeless for opus...I let em die…spit heat and melt this toy soldier….
and for closure….I leave this poser draped across his boyz shoulder....
I spit it first till u perched in the ground… I spit it worst and Im versatile…
Leave u cursed wit nouns till ur chest hounds wit connected sounds that make u wanna disburse the towel…
and I’ll stomp ur face…like a squadron marching...till u start just barffin….
and u can catch 300 punches in 14 lines like a flea market bargain...
got u shaking like Harlem when I barge-in wit the 40 cal then let it rip...
I don’t mean to sound cocky...but I'll rip u quicker then mimesis ever did....
and I heard u....u cant wait to drop early so the kid can murk u...
the King is still going raw....9 months later….u one of the many niggaz my style gave birth to....
its past ur curfew...I’ll put u to sleep early…
by that I don’t mean I care…just that I leave mc’s buried….
so if u wanna really clash...I'll beat that ass unless u type something better quick....
cuz they say sperm is good for breast cancer....that explains why Opus is never sick....




(This isn’t for extra shit…I was just curious at what his name meant so here it is…..


Latin “Work of God”)
in full Prelature of the Holy Cross and Opus Dei Roman Catholic lay and clerical organization whose members seek personal Christian perfection and strive to implement Christian ideals and values in their occupations and in society as a whole. Theologically conservative, Opus Dei accepts the teaching authority of the church without question and has long been the subject of controversy; it has been accused of secrecy, cultlike practices, and political ambitions. With separate branches for men and women, the organization has been headed since 1982 by a prelate elected by its members. Priests constitute only a tiny percentage of the organization, numbering some 1,900 of the 85,000 members worldwide.

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um. wow. uhhhhh.

aiiyo.

the battles barely starting and i'm achin' to trouble you
so ur gonna have to change ur name to Ra cause I'm taking the W.
a King is to Livestrong but ur chance has been long gone
now i'll be known for passing by-King like i was Lance Armstrong.
u being an unknown dude says enough in ur own truth
and it only gives u little room to talk like Mets in a phone booth.
throwing that definition in ur verse is giving u the worst buzz
it has a better chancing of winning than ur actual verse does.
no multis, personals, punches allows me to overshadow him
so only defeating he'll do is defeating the purpose of a text battlin'.
'n all the toasters i carry will have u ducking heat
let Raw meat the nine and ask him hows that for fucking beef?
i'd feel bad to murk u out and make ur vitals roll over
with so many deadlines even ur closer is looking for final closure.

key'd. btw i still love you Mets.

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229833

and I’ll stomp ur face…like a squadron marching...till u start just barffin….
and u can catch 300 punches in 14 lines like a flea market bargain...

^^ lol i dunno made me laugh lol ..even tho i dont see the punches in the flea market

got u shaking like Harlem when I barge-in wit the 40 cal then let it rip...
I don’t mean to sound cocky...but I'll rip u quicker then mimesis ever did....

^^ok

your getting better your flow and multi's is sick...punches are still err...there getting ebtter tho

vs

opus dei


a King is to Livestrong but ur chance has been long gone
now i'll be known for passing by-King like i was Lance Armstrong.
u being an unknown dude says enough in ur own truth
and it only gives u little room to talk like Mets in a phone booth.

'n all the toasters i carry will have u ducking heat
let Raw meat the nine and ask him hows that for fucking beef?


shit was cool...nothing great but really enuff to take this battle..cool punches quoted here...but phyrme got this

vote-phryme

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3WST.

Thanks for the feed back dawg....I really bombed on our battle but we'll do it again some time dawg...I was just bullshitting alot when we did it but u got good 2wice so it wasn't no fluck dawg...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2768447
really didn't wanna vote on the same battle but I had no other choice cuz no one else droped nothing yet....

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u know u kinda fed off my lines a bit now that I read it......isnt that against the rules...I thought I wouldn't have worry about that if I droped early....

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and I’ll stomp ur face…like a squadron marching...till u start just barffin….
and u can catch 300 punches in 14 lines like a flea market bargain...

VS.

the battles barely starting and i'm achin' to trouble you
so ur gonna have to change ur name to Ra cause I'm taking the W.
u being an unknown dude says enough in ur own truth
and it only gives u little room to talk like Mets in a phone booth.
'n all the toasters i carry will have u ducking heat
let Raw meat the nine and ask him hows that for fucking beef?



Yeh, this was a bit one-sided. A lot of Raw's verse seemed more suited to audio. You are just trying to pack the multies in there and your punches are lacking because of it. The wording is everything in text, so you need to work on that. The flea market line was pretty 'meh'... but I quoted it anyway. Still though, Opus blew you away even with a keyed half ass verse. He had at least 3 bars that made me laugh.

V/ - Opus/Prhyme

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and I’ll stomp ur face…like a squadron marching...till u start just barffin….
and u can catch 300 punches in 14 lines like a flea market bargain...
got u shaking like Harlem when I barge-in wit the 40 cal then let it rip...
I don’t mean to sound cocky...but I'll rip u quicker then mimesis ever did

vs



u being an unknown dude says enough in ur own truth
and it only gives u little room to talk like Mets in a phone booth.
throwing that definition in ur verse is giving u the worst buzz
it has a better chancing of winning than ur actual verse does.
no multis, personals, punches allows me to overshadow him
so only defeating he'll do is defeating the purpose of a text battlin'


pryme took this
v/ pryme

rtf the favor in my battle with Jack

thanks for voting on this shit...^leave a link...I dont really feel like looking for it dawg...

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