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Old 06-18-06, 08:17 AM   #1
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19. Ghost W. Riter (1-0) vs 20. Ace Heratoga (1-0)

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Old 06-18-06, 08:24 AM   #2
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check.............................
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Old 06-18-06, 11:35 AM   #3
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yessir... why can't i have a short check in message? =*(
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Old 06-20-06, 01:54 PM   #4
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12...

I ain’t politiking, but I think its kinda funny dude
Ask around the boards about this pussy and they all say…
Quote:
Originally Posted by Any_RV_Member
Fuck GW…

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229828
ayo the leauge likes punches, that means you done boss
Glocks said his piece and left…
Shit that explains why your battle verse almost lost to gun talk
Get your peoples to write, I don’t care I got a hundred better lines
Watch Riter get stuck with Spears like he was Kevin Federline
Vets and rookies, step to ace and end up in the dead zone
You so wet behind the ears, you short circuted ya head phones
Run em down, this young buck can die between my high beams
Your whack as fuck
And that’s a bold understatement like ya fuckin rhyme scheme
Bush is prez and I’m facing you instead of Muffs quotes
Weird how GW’s only get win through fucked up votes
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Old 06-21-06, 06:15 AM   #5
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no need to focus it's clear - kid you're just a joke to ya peers
if you're a head of your time.. ya watch musta been broken for years
I'm takin the title in this league.. you had fun.. now it's my turn.
this battle's gonna get hairy. cuz I'ma punch ya ribs til ya sideburns
get chalked quick.. won't even talk shit. you're just a con bluffing
hoe you never mouth-off.. cuz I always see your mouth ON something
now you lost ya net respect.. cuz you prefer to be a bitch
n' we know it really tears you up - if you refer to me as 'it'
Kid, u're pathetic, I still can't understand why kempo let u in
But I'll punch your ass thru the roof, just to say I'm ceiling my win
could call u wack all i want, that doesnt mean u'll punch me harder
cuz face it, u couldnt raze eyebrows if u were a clumsy barber

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Old 06-21-06, 10:39 AM   #6
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Ace Heratoga

best line
You so wet behind the ears, you short circuted ya head phones

note: you started off good with the personal but faded away from it...seriously punches and personals win a battle , also your flow was choppy work on your wordin to level off your lines at the same spot it'll flow better...

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Ghost W. Riter

best lines
this battle's gonna get hairy. cuz I'ma punch ya ribs til ya sideburns
cuz face it, u couldnt raze eyebrows if u were a clumsy barber (nice closer)

note: no personals, but your wordplay was there and flow structure was decent
makin you punches hit on time decent verse if you had a couple of personals in there it would've been murda

vote: Ghost W. Riter (for better punches, metas, flow structure)
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Old 06-21-06, 11:24 AM   #7
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I'm takin the title in this league.. you had fun.. now it's my turn.
this battle's gonna get hairy. cuz I'ma punch ya ribs til ya sideburns
get chalked quick.. won't even talk shit. you're just a con bluffing
hoe you never mouth-off.. cuz I always see your mouth ON something




I COULD SWEAR I SAW THOSE EXACT LINES ON RB SOMEWHERE
I'LL GO LOOK FOR IT
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Old 06-21-06, 11:36 AM   #8
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Word. Thanks for the heads up Tavarez.

Ghost W. Riter = BITER = BANNED.

He bit a lot of his verse from $pitacular and I can't be bothered to search for the rest.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...281&postcount=5

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Old 06-25-06, 10:54 AM   #9
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Ghost W. Riter is a biter and is banned. Ace Heratoga wins.

Ace Heratoga wins (2-0)
Ghost W. Riter loses (1-1)
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