check..18 lines good?? if too many let me kno...i kno u like to drop early like me..ill prob be droppin soon...g/l fam

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18 is fine...Rematch!!! Good Luck...

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hes mostly playin it Safe...but im startin to lose my trust...
cause i bet flippin lines like that leaves him feelin Danjurous..
dont care about ya goin 20 cuz ill drop you like all your fans did..
Sueing you for everything u got is only way ill come out empty handed..
battle wounds from last match, ill leave sours on your sours..
rells stayin Office Meds so much...he got a desk and his name on the door..
from GA, but hes never gettin cheers from his home...
last time he got a Big Hand was a Foam Finger at the Georgia Dome..
cut him off at the Ankles and show him where his streak ends..
till hes Leavin his Feet more then jump shooters on all star weekend..
was more popular 5 weeks ago, hes losin his fame, right..
cause he cant Stack up against opponents like mavs in game 5...
got me the first time.....now it seems ur runnin out of that bitch luck..
said he'd win but thats while Holdin his breathe so long it Cured his Hiccups..
when ya girls suckin me, her hands and toes touch..
must be a def leppord fan...seein how ya Love Bites sooo much..
rell got rocked last week, everyone knew he got'em..
his reps gonna mock his Loss column...and Gopha the bottom..
it wont take much for me to make him give in..
cuz wack lines r right up his alley...the one he pays rent to live in..

Man you suck, F'Real no joke, don't drop...BITCH PLEASE!
& Evidence to show your gahbage you flip shit used in this League.
^that shit wasnt even a flip doggie
Cize-Up ngga, If you win then Voters need to straighten doubt.
Maximum Prison Security couldn't keep your Acne from Breakn-Out.
this was straight
...Fake is out, Quit yappn fuckah all your talk is cheap.
& your Careers got a Tilt that makes Pinball Machines Obsolete.
nice
...Pop this creep, You call me whack? ngga, FUCK YOU!
Now it's in God's Hands...
& I'm bettn that he's got his Middle Finger up too.
nahhhh
Do I have to even rhyme I mean this guys So battered.
You don't fuck girls, so you always hear "Cize Don't Matter!"
wtf a size dont matter line?
...So Shattered, Last Week=SONNED...Now you think your hot stuff.
How could your Creativity Run Dry? Muhfuckah your Washed Up.
nah
You have a few visits from Luck, but stay? Never you dood.
Skill Wore Out it's Welcome...
& quite frankly...I think it Rocks Gear better than you.
the punch was weak. skills dont wear clothes
Be Real ngga, I lost the Champ Match twice, It ends there.
But if you think about it, thats more times than you've been there.
hahaha wordd.
...Win Where? "I'm gonna beat Rell" - NEGRO PLEASE...Quit it.
He got it Twisted & damn near Strangled himself with it.
nah, wasnt feeling
I K.O.-ed you last time, so I don't need to waste all this energy.
So Fuck a Title Run^^That alone just Jogged his Memory.
played

straight verse. had a couple nice lines.


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hes mostly playin it Safe...but im startin to lose my trust...
cause i bet flippin lines like that leaves him feelin Danjurous..
ehh, it wasnt a flip just the same concept.
dont care about ya goin 20 cuz ill drop you like all your fans did..
Sueing you for everything u got is only way ill come out empty handed..
nah.
battle wounds from last match, ill leave sours on your sours..
rells stayin Office Meds so much...he got a desk and his name on the door..
good flip, feeling it
from GA, but hes never gettin cheers from his home...
last time he got a Big Hand was a Foam Finger at the Georgia Dome..
nah, not feeling this one. didnt connect, weak punch.
cut him off at the Ankles and show him where his streak ends..
till hes Leavin his Feet more then jump shooters on all star weekend..
ehh, this one has to be decent at BEST
was more popular 5 weeks ago, hes losin his fame, right..
cause he cant Stack up against opponents like mavs in game 5...
coo, but im getting tired of heat/mav punches
got me the first time.....now it seems ur runnin out of that bitch luck..
said he'd win but thats while Holdin his breathe so long it Cured his Hiccups..
nope
when ya girls suckin me, her hands and toes touch..
must be a def leppord fan...seein how ya Love Bites sooo much..
hahaha, word. feeling this one
rell got rocked last week, everyone knew he got'em..
his reps gonna mock his Loss column...and Gopha the bottom..
lol
it wont take much for me to make him give in..
cuz wack lines r right up his alley...the one he pays rent to live in..
nah, this wasnt very heavy at all yet alone effective.


v/precize. the verses were about evenly stacked. both had lines that did damage but precizes verse was more rounded. both brought some played shit but so.rell's didnt have the consistent verse like pre did. this could go either way.

pz.

So.Rell

& your Careers got a Tilt that makes Pinball Machines Obsolete.
best line to my knowledge

...So Shattered, Last Week=SONNED...Now you think your hot stuff.
How could your Creativity Run Dry? Muhfuckah your Washed Up.
let's stay away from washed up for now.......


But if you think about it, thats more times than you've been there.
decent personal

I K.O.-ed you last time, so I don't need to waste all this energy.
So Fuck a Title Run^^That alone just Jogged his Memory.
nice closer pimp

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Precize

till hes Leavin his Feet more then jump shooters on all star weekend..
decent concept

was more popular 5 weeks ago, hes losin his fame, right..
cause he cant Stack up against opponents like mavs in game 5...
your rhymin killed this... right and 5 nah homie try mavs on game night(we'll get it)

it wont take much for me to make him give in..
cuz wack lines r right up his alley...the one he pays rent to live in..
nice closer


you tried a personal with the Georgia Dome but fell a couple feet short homie

a no personal battle what a joy....this is battle rap fellas take the name and run with if either one of you would have used that concept it would have been a rap...don't get me wrong both had decent closers, nice metas and punches but this one goes to the one with a better structure...a

vote: So Rell (better stucture more direct with his punches)

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LOL

Cize-Up ngga, If you win then Voters need to straighten doubt.
Maximum Prison Security couldn't keep your Acne from Breakn-Out.

OK

...Fake is out, Quit yappn fuckah all your talk is cheap.
& your Careers got a Tilt that makes Pinball Machines Obsolete.
---COOL CONCEPT BUT THE WORDING COULD BE BETTER

...Pop this creep, You call me whack? ngga, FUCK YOU!
Now it's in God's Hands...
& I'm bettn that he's got his Middle Finger up too.
-------------NAW

Do I have to even rhyme I mean this guys So battered.
You don't fuck girls, so you always hear "Cize Don't Matter!"
-----------HEH..

...So Shattered, Last Week=SONNED...Now you think your hot stuff.
How could your Creativity Run Dry? Muhfuckah your Washed Up.
--------------------DOPE

You have a few visits from Luck, but stay? Never you dood.
Skill Wore Out it's Welcome...
& quite frankly...I think it Rocks Gear better than you.
-------------------------NAW

Be Real ngga, I lost the Champ Match twice, It ends there.
But if you think about it, thats more times than you've been there.
--------------------EH..TOO SIMPLE

...Win Where? "I'm gonna beat Rell" - NEGRO PLEASE...Quit it.
He got it Twisted & damn near Strangled himself with it.
-----------HAHAH.. NICE

I K.O.-ed you last time, so I don't need to waste all this energy.
So Fuck a Title Run^^That alone just Jogged his Memory.
--------------------NICE AGAIN



PRECIZE:

hes mostly playin it Safe...but im startin to lose my trust...
cause i bet flippin lines like that leaves him feelin Danjurous..
---------EH

dont care about ya goin 20 cuz ill drop you like all your fans did..
Sueing you for everything u got is only way ill come out empty handed..
------------------OK

battle wounds from last match, ill leave sours on your sours..
rells stayin Office Meds so much...he got a desk and his name on the door..
--------------------I LIKE THE WORDPLAY BUT ITS AWKWARD AND COULD BE WORDED BETTER

from GA, but hes never gettin cheers from his home...
last time he got a Big Hand was a Foam Finger at the Georgia Dome..
---------------HAHAHAH DOPE

cut him off at the Ankles and show him where his streak ends..
till hes Leavin his Feet more then jump shooters on all star weekend..
--------------------EH

was more popular 5 weeks ago, hes losin his fame, right..
cause he cant Stack up against opponents like mavs in game 5...
--------------------NICE

got me the first time.....now it seems ur runnin out of that bitch luck..
said he'd win but thats while Holdin his breathe so long it Cured his Hiccups..
--------------------OK

when ya girls suckin me, her hands and toes touch..
must be a def leppord fan...seein how ya Love Bites sooo much..
--------------------------EH

rell got rocked last week, everyone knew he got'em..
his reps gonna mock his Loss column...and Gopha the bottom..
-----------------------DOPE PERSONAL

it wont take much for me to make him give in..
cuz wack lines r right up his alley...the one he pays rent to live in..
-----------NO


PRETTY EVEN BATTLE HERE.. BOTH HAD SOME DOPE LINES BUT SO RELL HAD 1 OR 2 MORE I LIKED AND ENDED HIS VERSE STRONG. PROPS TO PRECIZE AND THAT FOAM HAND LINE (WHICH WAS PROLLY THE BEST LINE OF THE BATTLE) BUT I SO RELL TAKING THIS BY A LINE.

VOTE = SO RELL

Man you suck, F'Real no joke, don't drop...BITCH PLEASE!
& Evidence to show your gahbage you flip shit used in this League.
...Fake is out, Quit yappn fuckah all your talk is cheap.
& your Careers got a Tilt that makes Pinball Machines Obsolete.
Do I have to even rhyme I mean this guys So battered.
You don't fuck girls, so you always hear "Cize Don't Matter!"
^dope...
I K.O.-ed you last time, so I don't need to waste all this energy.
So Fuck a Title Run^^That alone just Jogged his Memory.

Rell... you need to word your shit better, got damn... :/

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from GA, but hes never gettin cheers from his home...
last time he got a Big Hand was a Foam Finger at the Georgia Dome..
was more popular 5 weeks ago, hes losin his fame, right..
cause he cant Stack up against opponents like mavs in game 5...
rell got rocked last week, everyone knew he got'em..
his reps gonna mock his Loss column...and Gopha the bottom..


v/ So.Rell

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Man you suck, F'Real no joke, don't drop...BITCH PLEASE!
& Evidence to show your gahbage you flip shit used in this League.
...So Shattered, Last Week=SONNED...Now you think your hot stuff.
How could your Creativity Run Dry? Muhfuckah your Washed Up.
...Win Where? "I'm gonna beat Rell" - NEGRO PLEASE...Quit it.
He got it Twisted & damn near Strangled himself with it.
I K.O.-ed you last time, so I don't need to waste all this energy.
So Fuck a Title Run^^That alone just Jogged his Memory.

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battle wounds from last match, ill leave sours on your sours..
rells stayin Office Meds so much...he got a desk and his name on the door..
from GA, but hes never gettin cheers from his home...
last time he got a Big Hand was a Foam Finger at the Georgia Dome..
rell got rocked last week, everyone knew he got'em..
his reps gonna mock his Loss column...and Gopha the bottom..


pretty close battle
both had some wording problems but for the most part the verses were good reads

that georgia dome line was dope
sorell had the washed up and twisted lines
both had one or two dope personals...
imma have to go on consistency

v-SoRell

if precize had worded some of the concepts better, he woulda got this
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Close as hell. Both came pretty nice.

So Rell had the acne line, middle finger (which was ok), wear out welcome, champ match, and strangle lines. The other lines that i didn't mention weren't very good. The wear out welcome line could'a been worded better, too.

Precize had empty handed, meds wordpay was ok, stack line was dope, and the hiccups line was nice. Everything else didn't really hit. The geogia dome line was decent, but I've seen people make that play on "big hand = foam finger" on tv too much, so that kinda took the sting out of it.


Like I said, close battle, but after reading it twice, I think that So Rell was SLIGHTLY more consistant. If precize had 1 more good line, he would'a took it.

vote - So Rell

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dcent battle..

i likd that Acne line, only cuz it resemble my style/wording.. as opposed to a verse fulla similies and watnot. good shit,

cize had a few lines, but still had stuff relating to the finals and all that.. which i feel is corny. plus, u cant str8up quote something outta some1s verse.. no matter how bit it is, unless some1 else mentions it. its just the worst kinda feeding..

regardless, good batttle

v so rell

Upping for votes.