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Old 06-18-06, 08:23 AM   #1
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5. Butler (3-0) vs 6. Erel Avent (3-0)

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Old 06-18-06, 11:18 AM   #2
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Old 06-18-06, 12:27 PM   #3
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if i post 1st.. im goin as many as a feel like, negro
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Old 06-19-06, 03:20 PM   #4
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Old 06-19-06, 10:20 PM   #5
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Old 06-20-06, 11:36 AM   #6
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do u hav a pic onlinE? if so, pm it to me.. and ill do the same
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Old 06-21-06, 02:37 AM   #7
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yooOOO,
shuldnt of posted this one..

im from the hood. heads on my block dont even know how to act now,
saw ya pic. nggas almost hung that swoosh eyebrow on the wires in the background
first.. Ima murder you in this battle. then, im smackn ya homies dome around
til he finds out who told u its thug to rock an upsidedown visor when its snowin out
n for sendin me a pic of half ya face. while tellin me u son text...
thats fine. im more worried about seein a 20 yr old takin pics of himself starin at sunsets
yea, im rockin a T... but the teenage mug that u rockin hurts.
fuckbag, peach fuzz got E lookin younger than my soccer shirt...
shit, ya whole nasal shot from ya head. at speeds we kno that it shuldnt
tabloids hav switchd the splotlight from the LAPD to ya nose its so crooked.
rockin all black to match his contacts. he part textcee, part homeless fag
i been coppn madden since the 90s n STILL say n e thing EA sports is trash,
ya heads longer than the damn trees. the shit culd go miles
mods, Rapverse.com can fit their city, state, n cell#s on Erel Avents profile
my coach got word. n recruited this odd lookin boy for the rim..
for pressbreak; i now inbound the ball in the backcourt to the point on ya chin.
dood just bouncd from the toilet. n is tellin the board how he writes too hood...
but who wouldnt, wit a complexion like my underwear after i aint wipe too good
^^MC skidmark... im here to just keep you informed.
i deliver for UPS. but my outfits dirty... tmorrow, im rockn U as a uniform
oh, you hard wit a picket fence? in ya culdesac? ,ya just dont git it clown
countryass ngga. Im still tippin on four fours... you still tippin cows,
ill pop ya ugly ass for tryna rhyme. wit the illest tool,
im known to bus - E known to ride the small yellow 1 to middl school
u could hide a mack truck in that shnozz.. yet u claim ya hella pimp?
pleeeez, the size a' that hole's had Saddam shakin his head ever since.
it maintains a square footage, n wind power no one knows.
avent?
yea, hookdup to ya nostrls to provide my house wit central air wen u blow ya nose
nah... it aint snowin.. The Incredible Snout here is mad hard..
after that truckload of yay, he is now attemptin to take a keybump of the backyard.
good luck,

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Old 06-22-06, 02:46 PM   #8
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listen.

Ya fake personals suck, you should really stop it
only thing tighter than the niggas
holdin on to your cock ..is that necklace your rockin
plus that hairline of urs goes so far back, my pen
is startin to think cum punches are fuckin fresh again
n alot of cats idolize Will Smith, but dudes a cliche
Butlers posted up lookin like the fresh prince of Zimbabwe
rap just aint ya thing, on the corner niggas spit it all
ask B to kick somethin & he'll break out his soccer ball
ur battlin Erel Avent, not someone irrelavent, I'm hot
but I forgive you..
I know its hard to hear with them tiny ass ears u got
leave ya dead on the spot, you aint passin me
lookin like a burnt up african version of cassidy
ugly lil fuck, you aint baggin no hoes, even thou
a couple fat bitches could ride shotgun on that double barrel nose
even ya grills fucked up, i'll kick you in the mowf wit my feet
how in the hell you spose to eat me with only two buck teeth?
by lookin at our verses, i swear we should switch sites
I'll start postin over here more & you take your wack ass to Hype
everyones watchin this battle, ur gettin smashed kid
over 160 views just to see Butler gettin his ass kicked
theres no twist in ya punchlines, not to be cruel
but ur styles more up n down than them pillars behind you
big biceps, forearms & microspopic wrist, ill break ya joints
then slam ya monkey ass on that fence if you think you on point
the battles comin to a close, i got Heat to take the W again
your Dallas bitch I dont even know how you got that many wins
plus your a funny lil fuck if u think ur makin the mag
but all jokes a side .............. Butler you look like a fag
althou i can get off your pic, this much is true
it'd be the first time anyone ever got off lookin at you

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Old 06-22-06, 06:10 PM   #9
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im from the hood. heads on my block dont even know how to act now,
saw ya pic. nggas almost hung that swoosh eyebrow on the wires in the background
n for sendin me a pic of half ya face. while tellin me u son text...
thats fine. im more worried about seein a 20 yr old takin pics of himself starin at sunsets
yea, im rockin a T... but the teenage mug that u rockin hurts.
fuckbag, peach fuzz got E lookin younger than my soccer shirt...
rockin all black to match his contacts. he part textcee, part homeless fag
i been coppn madden since the 90s n STILL say n e thing EA sports is trash,
^dope...
oh, you hard wit a picket fence? in ya culdesac? ,ya just dont git it clown
countryass ngga. Im still tippin on four fours... you still tippin cows,
ill pop ya ugly ass for tryna rhyme. wit the illest tool,
im known to bus - E known to ride the small yellow 1 to middl school
(6)

vs

Ya fake personals suck, you should really stop it
only thing tighter than the niggas
holdin on to your cock ..is that necklace your rockin
n alot of cats idolize Will Smith, but dudes a cliche
Butlers posted up lookin like the fresh prince of Zimbabwe
ur battlin Erel Avent, not someone irrelavent, I'm hot
but I forgive you..
I know its hard to hear with them tiny ass ears u got
by lookin at our verses, i swear we should switch sites
I'll start postin over here more & you take your wack ass to Hype
big biceps, forearms & microspopic wrist, ill break ya joints
then slam ya monkey ass on that fence if you think you on point
plus your a funny lil fuck if u think ur makin the mag
but all jokes a side .............. Butler you look like a fag
(6)

Eh.. both tied in here, but fucka tie-vote.
I’ma have to go with Butler here, just came a tiny bit harder w/ the punches..

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Old 06-22-06, 06:34 PM   #10
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im from the hood. heads on my block dont even know how to act now,
saw ya pic. nggas almost hung that swoosh eyebrow on the wires in the background
------------OK

first.. Ima murder you in this battle. then, im smackn ya homies dome around
til he finds out who told u its thug to rock an upsidedown visor when its snowin out
------------LMAO

n for sendin me a pic of half ya face. while tellin me u son text...
thats fine. im more worried about seein a 20 yr old takin pics of himself starin at sunsets
---EH

yea, im rockin a T... but the teenage mug that u rockin hurts.
fuckbag, peach fuzz got E lookin younger than my soccer shirt...
------------NAW

shit, ya whole nasal shot from ya head. at speeds we kno that it shuldnt
tabloids hav switchd the splotlight from the LAPD to ya nose its so crooked.
-------------HAHA.. NICE

rockin all black to match his contacts. he part textcee, part homeless fag
i been coppn madden since the 90s n STILL say n e thing EA sports is trash,
-------------HAHAH.. REAL NICE

ya heads longer than the damn trees. the shit culd go miles
mods, Rapverse.com can fit their city, state, n cell#s on Erel Avents profile
-----------NAH

my coach got word. n recruited this odd lookin boy for the rim..
for pressbreak; i now inbound the ball in the backcourt to the point on ya chin.
--------------------COOL FLIP ON A PLAYED CONCEPT

dood just bouncd from the toilet. n is tellin the board how he writes too hood...
but who wouldnt, wit a complexion like my underwear after i aint wipe too good
---------------EH

^^MC skidmark... im here to just keep you informed.
i deliver for UPS. but my outfits dirty... tmorrow, im rockn U as a uniform
----------------LOL

oh, you hard wit a picket fence? in ya culdesac? ,ya just dont git it clown
countryass ngga. Im still tippin on four fours... you still tippin cows,
-------------LMAO AT THAT SET UP..

ill pop ya ugly ass for tryna rhyme. wit the illest tool,
im known to bus - E known to ride the small yellow 1 to middl school
-------------NAW..PLAYED AS FUCK N HORRIBLE

u could hide a mack truck in that shnozz.. yet u claim ya hella pimp?
pleeeez, the size a' that hole's had Saddam shakin his head ever since.
----------EH.. NOT HITTIN

it maintains a square footage, n wind power no one knows.
avent?
yea, hookdup to ya nostrls to provide my house wit central air wen u blow ya nose
--------------------------LOL.. PRETTY STUPID

nah... it aint snowin.. The Incredible Snout here is mad hard..
after that truckload of yay, he is now attemptin to take a keybump of the backyard.
------------HAHAHA OH SHIT.. DOPE CLOE

EREL:


Ya fake personals suck, you should really stop it
only thing tighter than the niggas
holdin on to your cock ..is that necklace your rockin
-----------------COOL

plus that hairline of urs goes so far back, my pen
is startin to think cum punches are fuckin fresh again
------------NICE

n alot of cats idolize Will Smith, but dudes a cliche
Butlers posted up lookin like the fresh prince of Zimbabwe
--------------LOL... DECENT

rap just aint ya thing, on the corner niggas spit it all
ask B to kick somethin & he'll break out his soccer ball
------------------OK

ur battlin Erel Avent, not someone irrelavent, I'm hot
but I forgive you..
I know its hard to hear with them tiny ass ears u got
-----------------EH.. TOO SIMPLE

leave ya dead on the spot, you aint passin me
lookin like a burnt up african version of cassidy
---------------NAW

ugly lil fuck, you aint baggin no hoes, even thou
a couple fat bitches could ride shotgun on that double barrel nose
-------------------HAHAH ..NICE

even ya grills fucked up, i'll kick you in the mowf wit my feet
how in the hell you spose to eat me with only two buck teeth?
----------------AIGHT

by lookin at our verses, i swear we should switch sites
I'll start postin over here more & you take your wack ass to Hype
----------------NAW

everyones watchin this battle, ur gettin smashed kid
over 160 views just to see Butler gettin his ass kicked
-------------HAHAH .. SIMPLE AND DOPE

theres no twist in ya punchlines, not to be cruel
but ur styles more up n down than them pillars behind you
-------------------COOL

big biceps, forearms & microspopic wrist, ill break ya joints
then slam ya monkey ass on that fence if you think you on point
-----------NAW ..ANOTHER PLAYED POINT LINE

the battles comin to a close, i got Heat to take the W again
your Dallas bitch I dont even know how you got that many wins
--------------------------EH.. NOT ENOUGH TO BEAT BUTLER

plus your a funny lil fuck if u think ur makin the mag
but all jokes a side .............. Butler you look like a fag
----------------HAHAHAHHA... THIS IS SO SIMPLE BUT HIT TO ME

althou i can get off your pic, this much is true
it'd be the first time anyone ever got off lookin at you
-------------------AIGHT


THIS WAS A FUN READ AND A DOPE BATTLE.. EA IMPRESSED ME AND WAS CONSISTENT AS FUCK WITH SIMPLE, WITTY, HITTING LINES.. BUTLER WAS INCONSISTANT BUT HIS HAYMAKERS ARE KO PUNCHES. BACKYARD & EA SPORTS WON IT ALONE

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Old 06-22-06, 08:46 PM   #11
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2 fence leaners for butler huh, just like his pic.

roflmao.

its all good in the hood, 0-2 you duke.
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Old 06-23-06, 10:35 AM   #12
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^pointless & irrelavent..

just like the majority of that verse of urs...

roflmao

its all good in the hood, 2-0 me duke
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Old 06-23-06, 01:06 PM   #13
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butler


first.. Ima murder you in this battle. then, im smackn ya homies dome around
til he finds out who told u its thug to rock an upsidedown visor when its snowin out
n for sendin me a pic of half ya face. while tellin me u son text...
thats fine. im more worried about seein a 20 yr old takin pics of himself starin at sunsets

shit, ya whole nasal shot from ya head. at speeds we kno that it shuldnt
tabloids hav switchd the splotlight from the LAPD to ya nose its so crooked.
rockin all black to match his contacts. he part textcee, part homeless fag
i been coppn madden since the 90s n STILL say n e thing EA sports is trash,

^^LOL DOPE HERE


dood just bouncd from the toilet. n is tellin the board how he writes too hood...
but who wouldnt, wit a complexion like my underwear after i aint wipe too good
^^MC skidmark... im here to just keep you informed.
i deliver for UPS. but my outfits dirty... tmorrow, im rockn U as a uniform

LMAO HERE




it maintains a square footage, n wind power no one knows.
avent?
yea, hookdup to ya nostrls to provide my house wit central air wen u blow ya nose
nah... it aint snowin.. The Incredible Snout here is mad hard..
after that truckload of yay, he is now attemptin to take a keybump of the backyard.
good luck,

cool ending


erel avent


n alot of cats idolize Will Smith, but dudes a cliche
Butlers posted up lookin like the fresh prince of Zimbabwe
rap just aint ya thing, on the corner niggas spit it all
ask B to kick somethin & he'll break out his soccer ball
ur battlin Erel Avent, not someone irrelavent, I'm hot
but I forgive you..
I know its hard to hear with them tiny ass ears u got

^^ lol this shit was funny


ugly lil fuck, you aint baggin no hoes, even thou
a couple fat bitches could ride shotgun on that double barrel nose

plus your a funny lil fuck if u think ur makin the mag
but all jokes a side .............. Butler you look like a fag
althou i can get off your pic, this much is true
it'd be the first time anyone ever got off lookin at you

^^ok ending

erel avent had some nice lines a cool verse..but some part kinda missed butler had some haymakers had me rollin....he took this battle...dope shit tho...by both

vote/butler
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Old 06-23-06, 01:39 PM   #14
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first.. Ima murder you in this battle. then, im smackn ya homies dome around
til he finds out who told u its thug to rock an upsidedown visor when its snowin out
n for sendin me a pic of half ya face. while tellin me u son text...
thats fine. im more worried about seein a 20 yr old takin pics of himself starin at sunsets
^^MC skidmark... im here to just keep you informed.
i deliver for UPS. but my outfits dirty... tmorrow, im rockn U as a uniform

vs


n alot of cats idolize Will Smith, but dudes a cliche
Butlers posted up lookin like the fresh prince of Zimbabwe
rap just aint ya thing, on the corner niggas spit it all
ask B to kick somethin & he'll break out his soccer ball
ur battlin Erel Avent, not someone irrelavent, I'm hot
but I forgive you..
I know its hard to hear with them tiny ass ears u got

vote: butler......battle of the week
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Old 06-23-06, 01:51 PM   #15
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lol @ butler recycling that soccer shirt line


i'll edit this with a vote later.
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