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Old 06-24-06, 12:55 AM   #1
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Fuck this battle, your wack son – n gay, don’t even try to fake...
& how the fuck are you a king...when royal just be the guy you date???
But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon

I’m serious, your not dope at all...while I’m just a raw soldier
I was thinking of running away with the win...
.................................................. but then I realised your just a walkover!!!!
^^^even though I thought it could have been worded better,tha concept was dope

Vs.

Cuz Ur loses has been choreographed like a kid’s recital…I murk every one in ur age bracket….
This kids a fag…that’s probably why he leans to the side when u put em in a str8 jacket…

Slic got this pretty clearly IMO, not bad Raw King, some lines felt a lil too fillerish, and the brail/feel lines are sssssoooooooo played

vote- SlicKnife
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Old 06-24-06, 09:49 AM   #2
SlicKnife
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Good lookin 1-0......

Keep votin
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Old 06-24-06, 10:21 AM   #3
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Raw King

Cuz unless I stick my foot up ur ass…then I doubt ud ever have it in u…
So get a handle, u lose ur grip and get ate like kids launches
Id type my words in brail then cough on em just so u could feel some sick punches…

stand out bars

not really a good structure you punches was there but some of em are popular
choppy flow...no personals

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SlicKnife


Crude but its true n your name isn’t confusing the truth...
‘Cause your raw...in the sense we’ve unearthed the biggest ever loser in you
nice

But then you got your soundclick, must be building up that rep too...
‘cause yeh its smashing...not that accomplishment but your fucking head soon
good personal

nice verse overall, personal punches wordplay an actual battle verse

vote: SlicKnife (this was one sided)
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