here match who goes first

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The Scholar

its the same shit. stop complaining when im aiming my fist
im not even talking celebrity status when people say Faime's a bitch
i can tell you never fought in your life. this kid wont hurt me
faime's last 'heat'd exchange' was a shaq for dwayne wade jersey
your weak in my eyes. so I 'll drop knowledge and ur croppin dust
....ill 'under estimate' U on purpose like a 'honest mechanic' does
this dudes a hater. I can tell he wants to follow up later
he's got bedroom eyes n my fist are comming in for room raiders
I would said match this fiyah. but the trail will burn you into submission
....my inferno has you ''thinking bout ur Burns' more then Mr. Smithers
most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun
whoever wins this battle will be in the contendership match
true
but word your nose will crack the championship match before you do
I could say ''i got more rep on your home site'' and mean it ,right?
^^but this goes without saying like a mime during a green light

over and out

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2780641

Roger, you might have some skills, but you just dont spit with it.
so treat the Contendership like pussy. .
.....dont even think about it, cause ya not gettin it!
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Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!
Who you think you teaching with ya text? Please, you got it shook
only time you 'kicking knowledge' is 'playin soccer with college books'
You not a crook, yet rapping about crimes? This emcee's fake.
only 'fell on E/felony you got' ...is your 'gas meter on an empty tank'!
Just quit, you're never making a change with what ya spittin, dude
only way you 'making Em pack/impact'. .
.....is forcing Slim Shady to take a trip with you!
It's pitiful, ya girl know this, u don't hit it from the front or back, man
you gettin pussy's like you 'defeating N.Tavarez'. .
.....you can say you could, but it didnt happen!
All the sites you battle on, you lose, thats what the fact is.
ya 'feeling defeat in many places', so it filed for sexual harrassment!
You always the last, never number 1, not even on your own team.
even 'during radio communication', 'Roger, comes after everything'!

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The Scholar

Faime S. Quotez

pros
Roger, you might have some skills, but you just dont spit with it.
so treat the Contendership like pussy. .
.....dont even think about it, cause ya not gettin it!
You always the last, never number 1, not even on your own team.
even 'during radio communication', 'Roger, comes after everything'!


cons(these couple of bars don't rhyme homie...
Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!
All the sites you battle on, you lose, thats what the fact is.
ya 'feeling defeat in many places', so it filed for sexual harrassment!

note: it got to rhyme holmes...couple of nice punches...stretch the flow a tad bit...but step it up homie

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Roger Glocks


pros
its the same shit. stop complaining when im aiming my fist
im not even talking celebrity status when people say Faime's a bitch
most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun
I could say ''i got more rep on your home site'' and mean it ,right?
^^but this goes without saying like a mime during a green light

cons(this bar didn't rhyme but it finish with nice wordplay..that sucks)
I would said match this fiyah. but the trail will burn you into submission
....my inferno has you ''thinking bout ur Burns' more then Mr. Smithers

note: nice verse overall...decent with a rhyme scheme...fell off on a bar but you picked it up...step it up kidd

vote: Roger Glocks (more direct and more effective bars out of the two)

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I would said match this fiyah. but the trail will burn you into submission
....my inferno has you ''thinking bout ur Burns' more then Mr. Smithers
^see this? its a good concept, just terribly worded.. also didn't rhyme well, either.
I could say ''i got more rep on your home site'' and mean it ,right?
^^but this goes without saying like a mime during a green light
^another, pretty good concept, but also worded badly

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Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!
Who you think you teaching with ya text? Please, you got it shook
only time you 'kicking knowledge' is 'playin soccer with college books'
You not a crook, yet rapping about crimes? This emcee's fake.
only 'fell on E/felony you got' ...is your 'gas meter on an empty tank'!
^thats nice, but we get the felony nameplay. don't do this(fell on E/felony) again. looks newb'ish.
Just quit, you're never making a change with what ya spittin, dude
only way you 'making Em pack/impact'. .
.....is forcing Slim Shady to take a trip with you!
^u did it again, but not bad.
You always the last, never number 1, not even on your own team.
even 'during radio communication', 'Roger, comes after everything'!
^nice concept, but could've been worded alot better.

well, this was really one sided. i expected alot better from roger, whose supposed to be this awsome battler. honestly, i wasn't feelin shit from his verse. shotty wording, old concepts and just an all around lack of a verse. but on the other hand, Faime did well. good concepts, better wording and just an all around better verse, imo. good job to that.

v/ Faime

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faime: dude had too much shoddy play of words. it was rele bad u need to stop that noob forward slash thing like the guy above said. there were no punches i thought rele hit well... the glocks name play is PLAYED man... jeez step away from the glocks nameplays tis obvious

glocks: you half assed but it was enough to win u the battle. more creative punches but i seen u drop alot better so i wasnt very impressed lmao, but u took it quite clearly for me, not dead easily but yeah. u were consistent but there were no woah lines, and no whack ones either.

vote/ glocks

i can tell you never fought in your life. this kid wont hurt me
faime's last 'heat'd exchange' was a shaq for dwayne wade jersey
this dudes a hater. I can tell he wants to follow up later
he's got bedroom eyes n my fist are comming in for room raiders
most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun LOL LOL LOL


vs


Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'! *NICE!!
Who you think you teaching with ya text? Please, you got it shook
only time you 'kicking knowledge' is 'playin soccer with college books'
Just quit, you're never making a change with what ya spittin, dude
only way you 'making Em pack/impact'. .
.....is forcing Slim Shady to take a trip with you!
All the sites you battle on, you lose, thats what the fact is.
ya 'feeling defeat in many places', so it filed for sexual harrassment!
You always the last, never number 1, not even on your own team.
even 'during radio communication', 'Roger, comes after everything'!

VOTE: Faime S. Quotez

Def got this one with more consistent punches that connected
but roger glocks had a few of hes own good punches just need it to be slight more consistent nice battle here fellas good luck to ya!!

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Who you think you teaching with ya text? Please, you got it shook
only time you 'kicking knowledge' is 'playin soccer with college books'


no no no. i know no one quoted this, did they?


i mean thats madd old.

get street with it nigga.

i ain't voting just sayin dang at shit like that bein quoted.

its the same shit. stop complaining when im aiming my fist
im not even talking celebrity status when people say Faime's a bitch
i can tell you never fought in your life. this kid wont hurt me
faime's last 'heat'd exchange' was a shaq for dwayne wade jersey

^^liked this lol


most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun

^^line of the battle

cool verse. some shit missed didn't like your flow..but your punches here were nice

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All the sites you battle on, you lose, thats what the fact is.
ya 'feeling defeat in many places', so it filed for sexual harrassment!


other shit was mad old. i mean kicking knowledge why u explaining lines. i thought roger took this battle with hard punches and just better punches

vote-roger glocks

Up over no-shows.

its the same shit. stop complaining when im aiming my fist
im not even talking celebrity status when people say Faime's a bitch
most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun

vs.

Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!

this battle was so much less then I expected.

v/Roger Glocks

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its the same shit. stop complaining when im aiming my fist
im not even talking celebrity status when people say Faime's a bitch
most rappers want girls. but this dude will spit at shows for fun
and then go in the stands wanting balls like it was his first homerun

vs.

Not 1 current punch from u, dust on every bar you typed, somehow
with text, 'Glocks, is a thing of the past'. .
.....like 'gangstas who turned their life around'!

Glocks edged this one barely...I guess Glocks didn't try...

Vote - Roger Glocks

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