Listenin', beat i heard alot..nice choice..intro I cant hear what you sying..

Vocals are WAY too low...sounds like yall jus whispering lightly..which makes delivery and presence way low too...I can tell flow is nice and I can tell you have a lil energy..so talk louder..get the confidence up..turn yourself up...

You can't hear much all I rlly heard was that puff line...mosta the shit was not hearable..

Hook is not good, like ysdat said not atall hyped, ure verse gotta be much more hyped...

Things to work on:

- Delivery
- Presence
- Emotion
- Flow (not as much)
- Energy
- Mixing

keep up..

RTF on this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386

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