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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
07-15-06, 12:18 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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Ah'ight beat is unique but good...you got a simple but efective flow the concept is the true appeal of this track becuz you can tell you coming real a real place...delivery could be a bit better, more emotion an alil better pronounciation in spots would help...also a stronger mix to bring ya vocals out more cuz also sum lines was kinda muddy sounding certain instruments of the beat was clashing with the vocal frequencies an mudding it up...the hook was ah'ight it was kinda low but the harmony of it wasn't bad jus wasn't that catchy....but overall a very good track with strong content....keep it up...1
P.S. RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231691
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