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Old 07-16-06, 11:51 AM   #1
KempoMRK
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45. Malicious (0-0) vs 46. Revelationz. (0-0)

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Old 07-17-06, 05:59 PM   #2
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check.

Is 10 straight?
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Old 07-18-06, 09:24 AM   #3
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check, yup 10 is good
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Old 07-20-06, 11:18 PM   #4
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This kids blowin the dirt off his rhyme book, its makin me cough,
the kids shit has always been cutting edge, but this is were he's gettin cut off,
Nobody likes you or your shit kid so wont u stop spittin, FUCK!!!,
When i first seen you spit, i had to gag,.......
Not myself, just when i found dat money talk, i had to shut you up,
Nobody on da site likes u, or thinks about u, it aint even funny,
So i finally decided to pay em some mind and got to keep all my money,
you know your lyrics cant cut it kid why not just forfiet,
Hell i'd ghost u some lyrics myself, but i dont think u'd be good for it
Fuck this kid man he's taken an L from everyone on dis site like rover,
so why not just call him a text whore, since he's constantly gettin fucked over,


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Old 07-20-06, 11:55 PM   #5
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quick ass key
keyed it in 23 minutes

you aint cool,n' you gotta hang out with important peeps to get recognized about
but I admit that you are around Stars when your getting Knocked The Fuck Out
Malicious is new to this site, he hates to be called a newb so leave him alone
There's hope after all,after his first loss, he'll be 46th RANKED, n' be clearly Known
Knock you to the floor with my punches, and make you eat em pound for pound
Im his rolemodel, but he truly looks up to me.... cuz he's so stuck to the ground
your a sorry fuck, im gonna rob this fag n' again and not be charged with theft
but LBL is your home, n' you belong right here once you move over to the left
10 sorry lines is all I need to own you, if you say your good, then your bluffin
tears is pouring down ya face, your verse is shit, so why are u cryin over nothin



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Old 07-21-06, 10:55 AM   #6
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uppin dis shit.
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Old 07-21-06, 12:14 PM   #7
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Nobody on da site likes u, or thinks about u, it aint even funny,
So i finally decided to pay em some mind and got to keep all my money
THIS WAS GOOD BUT YOU SIS A MONEY BAR RIGHT BEFORE IT SO IT TOOK AWAY POWER FROM THIS ONE
you know your lyrics cant cut it kid why not just forfiet,
Hell i'd ghost u some lyrics myself, but i dont think u'd be good for it
THIS WAS ALSO MISSING, THERES NO REAL PUNCH IN IT EXCEPT SAYING YOU'LL GHOST HIS VERSE
Fuck this kid man he's taken an L from everyone on dis site like rover,
so why not just call him a text whore, since he's constantly gettin fucked over,
DECENT LINE HERE

MOST OF YOUR BARS HAD STATEMENTS INSTEAD OF PUNCHES AND THE ONES WITH PUNCHES WERENT WORDED AS EFFECTIVELY AS COULDVE BEEN

VS

Malicious is new to this site, he hates to be called a newb so leave him alone
There's hope after all,after his first loss, he'll be 46th RANKED, n' be clearly Known
DECENT BAR HERE NOT REALLY HITTING BUT THERE IS A PERSONAL IN IT AND ITS RELEVENT
Knock you to the floor with my punches, and make you eat em pound for pound
Im his rolemodel, but he truly looks up to me.... cuz he's so stuck to the ground
THIS IS EHHISH.
10 sorry lines is all I need to own you, if you say your good, then your bluffin
tears is pouring down ya face, your verse is shit, so why are u cryin over nothin
THIS IS EQUIVALENT TO MALICIOUS CLOSER IN TERMS OF POWER

REV HAD AN OK VERSE
BOTH YOU CATS AINT TEXT IN A BIT SO WITH THAT IN MIND
YOU'LL BOTH BE DROPPING BETTER ONCE THE RUST IS OFF
I FEEL LIKE IT WAS CLSE BUT IM LEANING TOWRDS REV FOR MORE
HITS IN HIS VERSE
V/ REV

RTF ON MY BATTLE ITS BEING SLEPT ON
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Old 07-21-06, 12:28 PM   #8
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are u stupid, damn this is the reason i hate rv your levels of intellect are shitty
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Old 07-21-06, 12:50 PM   #9
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This kids blowin the dirt off his rhyme book, its makin me cough,
the kids shit has always been cutting edge, but this is were he's gettin cut off,
Not feelin it^^
Nobody likes you or your shit kid so wont u stop spittin, FUCK!!!,
When i first seen you spit, i had to gag,.......
Not myself, just when i found dat money talk, i had to shut you up,
^^str8
Nobody on da site likes u, or thinks about u, it aint even funny,
So i finally decided to pay em some mind and got to keep all my money,
ummm kinna played
you know your lyrics cant cut it kid why not just forfiet,
Hell i'd ghost u some lyrics myself, but i dont think u'd be good for it
^^^gay
Fuck this kid man he's taken an L from everyone on dis site like rover,
so why not just call him a text whore, since he's constantly gettin fucked over,
not feelin it

vs

you aint cool,n' you gotta hang out with important peeps to get recognized about
but I admit that you are around Stars when your getting Knocked The Fuck Out
^^not rly feelin this
Malicious is new to this site, he hates to be called a newb so leave him alone
There's hope after all,after his first loss, he'll be 46th RANKED, n' be clearly Known
^^^not rly feelin this either
Knock you to the floor with my punches, and make you eat em pound for pound
Im his rolemodel, but he truly looks up to me.... cuz he's so stuck to the ground
^^same as above
your a sorry fuck, im gonna rob this fag n' again and not be charged with theft
but LBL is your home, n' you belong right here once you move over to the left
ok
10 sorry lines is all I need to own you, if you say your good, then your bluffin
tears is pouring down ya face, your verse is shit, so why are u cryin over nothin
^^ok

vote: rev......close battle
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Old 07-21-06, 02:01 PM   #10
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Nobody likes you or your shit kid so wont u stop spittin, FUCK!!!,
When i first seen you spit, i had to gag,.......
Not myself, just when i found dat money talk, i had to shut you up,


vs.

your a sorry fuck, im gonna rob this fag n' again and not be charged with theft
but LBL is your home, n' you belong right here once you move over to the left
10 sorry lines is all I need to own you, if you say your good, then your bluffin
tears is pouring down ya face, your verse is shit, so why are u cryin over nothin

this was kinda weak, mal came with statements & not really good punches there was 1 that was meh but other then that u had nothing else, rev came kinda weak to but had 2 ok punches which won him the battle

V/Rev
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Old 07-23-06, 08:29 AM   #11
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Revelationz wins 3-0. Revelationz, if you don't vote next week you will not win. Same goes for you Malicious.

Revelationz wins (1-0)
Malicious loses (0-1)
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