lol yeah i know. its basically two incomplete songs put into one

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aight wassup lil niggy.



first joint

the intro was ill. When she was singing at first shit was hot, but the hook.. she need some help on lol...

yea about the that *BOOM* when the beat come in lol.. that needed to be chilled out :P ..

lyrics was aight in my opinion. real simple like, thats coo. i like them type tracks. but rhyme schemes need to be payed more attention to when you spit a simple joint yah'mean ? jus real talk. Flow was gravy, ya dig. a few times you almost fell off but you was back at it like bunnies and shit yah'mean ?


second joint

i thought this was the best of the two. some aight punches/wordplay in there. Flow was on point. a it short, but i do the same shit so its aight :P.


overall a nice lil collage and shit. keep it pimpin

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the girl sounds hella sexy....
but she needs to polish her overdubs

the production needs work learn to pan my ninja
parametric EQ, De Esser, Chorus, Synth Boost
L40, Center, R40 pending

lol flows a lil off but you'll get there
what's with the change of beat?
didn't really understand that

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ok and the feedback on the actual track ^ LOL. but yeah i appreciate the feedback

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good track kontro keep it up

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wait wait. what does this panning do? you could use this on cool edit?

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kontro...aint heard u in a min kid...but anyways typign as I listen...singing in the opening is a nice touch fits build of beat...I heard this beat before its tight son..ncie choice here kid...liking how you opened....you delivery has gotten ALOT!!!better...lyrics is tupac simple but has that tupac writing style kinda pacish flow...but shit is working with ya flow...hook is ncie shawtie can sing...ok going into next beat..ok spitting on a mid 90's west coast beat...got that slow pronounced flow going it was alil robotic...u miscounted ya syllables in spots but all in all it was tight...good delivery u def stepped ya game up kid.....1


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appreciated it famz. i will get at that track in a few and i appreciate the feedback

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