im goin ten lines match me dood.
its passed link deadline. thats a DQ homie.



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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806818
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806819
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806820
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806822

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ok...

check nasty

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kickin dem dumb cuts, ill put a foot in yuh, sucka
N you kno im on tha come up, so look for muh, bruva

listen dude..

Everyone knows I aint sweatin you, pay attention cuz
..I'd hate to be a dick about it but you'd love it if I was
You ranks outside the big ten, my concepts'll blow ya
..aint from Minnesota so aint shit golden bout this gopha
That broke down style wont work, I'll school your ass
..it's back to the drawin board like u was teachin class
I bone hoes bro, Erel hits it til their eyes look slanted
..B.e.t couldnt even get your ugly ass access granted
So read the next line slow, lay down & consider it done
the number of W's im gettin, L's for u & me sayin peace

.....One

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quickie...

ive seen your pic, and I know you aint havin sex now
cuz tha only time bitchez need A-vent... iz if their stressed out
he jussa fake thug, and you aint messin witchya dawg gopha
kid claims he chops up rocks... cuz a couple got stuck up in lawn mower
Duke has a poor social life, so dont act like you hittin up parties
cuz the only way your owning in 'Beirut' is if you joined tha Isreali Army
your status on this site isnt somethin id be braggin about brotha
cuz all your known for is talkin mad shit N gettin whored by butler
honestly this whole site really juss hates this writer...
cuz when your 'high is-steamed'... itz only cuz you smoked witta vaporizer

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kickin dem dumb cuts, ill put a foot in yuh, sucka
N you kno im on tha come up, so look for muh, bruva

HmMm. when will they learn.

votes.

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Up over no-shows.

Everyone knows I aint sweatin you, pay attention cuz
..I'd hate to be a dick about it but you'd love it if I was
You ranks outside the big ten, my concepts'll blow ya
..aint from Minnesota so aint shit golden bout this gopha

the second bar was a strech, but i like the concept
i was tryna word that same concept when i battled gopha
a while back but the other bars were lacking hit power
still ok verse

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Duke has a poor social life, so dont act like you hittin up parties
cuz the only way your owning in 'Beirut' is if you joined tha Isreali Army
he jussa fake thug, and you aint messin witchya dawg gopha
kid claims he chops up rocks... cuz a couple got stuck up in lawn mower

same issue with gopha
the 1st bar was a stretch and even the second bar wasnt as strong
as it couldve been
verse was ok but with some misses like the vent bar

this is close to call
but based on enjoyability
i'd vote / erel avent

the contendorship needs votes so be sure to hit that up

Erel Avent-You ranks outside the big ten, my concepts'll blow ya
..aint from Minnesota so aint shit golden bout this gopha
So read the next line slow, lay down & consider it done
the number of W's im gettin, L's for u & me sayin peace

.....One

Gopha-he jussa fake thug, and you aint messin witchya dawg gopha
kid claims he chops up rocks... cuz a couple got stuck up in lawn mower
Duke has a poor social life, so dont act like you hittin up parties
cuz the only way your owning in 'Beirut' is if you joined tha Isreali Army

This battle was ehhhh nuthin jumped out at me but by a hair i gotta go wit E.A.
vote-Erel Avent

You ranks outside the big ten, my concepts'll blow ya
..aint from Minnesota so aint shit golden bout this gopha

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he jussa fake thug, and you aint messin witchya dawg gopha
kid claims he chops up rocks... cuz a couple got stuck up in lawn mower
honestly this whole site really juss hates this writer...
cuz when your 'high is-steamed'... itz only cuz you smoked witta vaporizer


overall whack battle.

vote - Gopha.

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This is a close one. Erel's verse was inconsistant, but I think he had one more quotable than gopha. The only line I really liked by gopha was the lawnmower one...that was the line of the battle. Erel's other lines besides the closer and the BET line were weak, so I'm going with gopha on this one for having the line of the battle and less weak lines.

vote - gopha

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E.A.

I bone hoes bro, Erel hits it til their eyes look slanted
..B.e.t couldnt even get your ugly ass access granted
So read the next line slow, lay down & consider it done
the number of W's im gettin, L's for u & me sayin peace

.....One

Gopha..

he jussa fake thug, and you aint messin witchya dawg gopha
kid claims he chops up rocks... cuz a couple got stuck up in lawn mower

ya closer seemed like a solid idea but just didn't work for me...

Very Close :/ battle

V/ E.A.

the last 4 lines were pretty dope...that what won the battle for em....Gopha was straight...if they met up again Im sure it may be different.

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Everyone knows I aint sweatin you, pay attention cuz
..I'd hate to be a dick about it but you'd love it if I was

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your status on this site isnt somethin id be braggin about brotha
cuz all your known for is talkin mad shit N gettin whored by butler

hmmm.

close battle. ive seen way better from erel avent. never read gopha before.

both only had one punch i liked, but of the ones i didnt like as much gophas were better and hit harded. just work on ur wording dood.

vote - gopha

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I bone hoes bro, Erel hits it til their eyes look slanted
..B.e.t couldnt even get your ugly ass access granted
So read the next line slow, lay down & consider it done
the number of W's im gettin, L's for u & me sayin peace

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he jussa fake thug, and you aint messin witchya dawg gopha
kid claims he chops up rocks... cuz a couple got stuck up in lawn mower

Gopha you didn't come hard enuff in my opinion

Vote - Erel Avent

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