chkin in homie............................................. ......................................

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18...

get out of control n i got a fuckmachine with freaks on patrol
that'll give ya wounds sniffles n send you to hell with a cold
let me mash this fuck & tuck the excess in his waistline
this gullible geek corpse get drug-ed..
..with Shakes n makes the headlines
the last time you dropped dope shit, u anal-ed a coke can
ur only fans r pooches..
..going nuts like K-9s sniffing out a sac full of shakes man
prick, your talk is old news-jaw squeaks muffle your vocals
& how the fuck u are somebody here but a nobody among da locals
i'll carve this birdman n leave more splits in your face than a dike
bitch, if your eyes could talk..
..i'll eat your lime n leave em burnin with drops of sprite
sissy, i might be nasdeey, but your body meets the gutta
ur assed out this week..
..like a plumber's pants, bent over to unclog a clutta
bitch, your life sucks, n u can't make sense out of a situation
i sense pain in your concepts..
..n i'm here to take out your frustrations
fuck boi, ur an outcast..your kin are reluctant to claim you
my talk is cheap..
..so u can afford it..wen it hits ur stand n this mag makes u an issue
you tried your best, but yet it got restrained in the loser bracket
ur flows r connoisseur of ass..
..polishing it, homo car-washers-wax it

one

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keyed w/ the quickness, but still feelin' relentless...


Ay...
Fuck'a long verse. I'm wastin' my time with this...
Yo...didn't anybody tell u that wack niggas get 12 lines or less?
I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
Skinny fuck. Go get a sandwich or somethin, mayne...
I would shoot u, stab u, but that could never match ur hunger pains
Besides, I'd kill a nigga if they ever snitched on me...
But shit, u so hungry u ALWAYS beggin' people to spill the beans
And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable
Yeah, I can see u love me. But hey, I'm fond of girls...
I'm straighter than the line thats about to be on ya heart moniter
When I saw ur skill level, I gasped in amazement...
There's no question, u are one of a kind...the last of the cavemen
Yo, u're jokin', right? Son, that's a fuckin' shame...
U'd have to pay Mad Mike overtime to bring that verse up to date
Everybody's claimin' that this league's the hottest...
But they'll stop sayin that when they notice u made it to the top 10



goodnight

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Up over no-shows.

Fuck'a long verse. I'm wastin' my time with this...
Yo...didn't anybody tell u that wack niggas get 12 lines or less?
I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable
Yeah, I can see u love me. But hey, I'm fond of girls...
I'm straighter than the line thats about to be on ya heart moniter
When I saw ur skill level, I gasped in amazement...
There's no question, u are one of a kind...the last of the cavemen

vs.

prick, your talk is old news-jaw squeaks muffle your vocals
& how the fuck u are somebody here but a nobody among da locals

Shake, ya verse seemed very effortless and like you really thought he was wack and weren't just sayin' it. Pretty cool verse. Nasdeey, flow was fine and the concepts ya use aren't necessarily that bad, just ya don't use them well and the wording always comes out very indirect, so work on that.

Vote - Shake

18...

get out of control n i got a fuckmachine with freaks on patrol
that'll give ya wounds sniffles n send you to hell with a cold
------------haha this isnt a direct punch but it flowed and was slick

let me mash this fuck & tuck the excess in his waistline
this gullible geek corpse get drug-ed..
..with Shakes n makes the headlines
-------------------naw

the last time you dropped dope shit, u anal-ed a coke can
ur only fans r pooches..
..going nuts like K-9s sniffing out a sac full of shakes man
-----------------------wtf.. naw

prick, your talk is old news-jaw squeaks muffle your vocals
& how the fuck u are somebody here but a nobody among da locals
--------------------eh.. not really dissing him

i'll carve this birdman n leave more splits in your face than a dike
bitch, if your eyes could talk..
..i'll eat your lime n leave em burnin with drops of sprite
------------------------haha.. this is weird

sissy, i might be nasdeey, but your body meets the gutta
ur assed out this week..
..like a plumber's pants, bent over to unclog a clutta
------------------eh

bitch, your life sucks, n u can't make sense out of a situation
i sense pain in your concepts..
..n i'm here to take out your frustrations
------------ok.. nice line

fuck boi, ur an outcast..your kin are reluctant to claim you
my talk is cheap..
..so u can afford it..wen it hits ur stand n this mag makes u an issue
------eh

you tried your best, but yet it got restrained in the loser bracket
ur flows r connoisseur of ass..
..polishing it, homo car-washers-wax it
-------------wtf.. this is your worst line.. both gay lines in your verse were the 2 worst
you seem like your real creative.. you just gotta make it punch more

SHAKE

Ay...
Fuck'a long verse. I'm wastin' my time with this...
Yo...didn't anybody tell u that wack niggas get 12 lines or less?
---------HEH

I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
-----------EH..

Skinny fuck. Go get a sandwich or somethin, mayne...
I would shoot u, stab u, but that could never match ur hunger pains
----------------------HEH NOT BAD

Besides, I'd kill a nigga if they ever snitched on me...
But shit, u so hungry u ALWAYS beggin' people to spill the beans
-----------------THIS DUMB AS SHIT AND ROFL

And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable
---------HAHAH ..SIMPLE BUT NICE

Yeah, I can see u love me. But hey, I'm fond of girls...
I'm straighter than the line thats about to be on ya heart moniter
-------------------OK

When I saw ur skill level, I gasped in amazement...
There's no question, u are one of a kind...the last of the cavemen
-----------HAHAH.. NICE

Yo, u're jokin', right? Son, that's a fuckin' shame...
U'd have to pay Mad Mike overtime to bring that verse up to date
------------MEH.. I DONT MAD MIKE ..THIS MEANS NOTHING TO ME

Everybody's claimin' that this league's the hottest...
But they'll stop sayin that when they notice u made it to the top 10
-------------BLAH.. TOO SIMPLE


YEAH SHAKE HAD SOME LOW AND HIGH POINTS HIS HIGHS WERE FUNNY AND EASLIY ENOUGH FOR THE WIN

VOTE SHAKE ZULA

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ghoulies

lmao @ shake's spill the beans line.

i'ma vote later. haha.

I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable

the only ones i liked from shake...

vs

i'll carve this birdman n leave more splits in your face than a dike
bitch, if your eyes could talk..
..i'll eat your lime n leave em burnin with drops of sprite

i actually liked that, it was creative but worded badly...the rest of ya verse i wasnt feeling


i felt shake took this with ease, no hate but i felt nasdeey didnt come with the flair that shake had....but good battle and g'luck in the future.

vote-shake

okay battle.

nas had some decent lines, just simppl concepts... which definitly took away from his verse..

shake had some original concepts in there which in my eyes will always do wonders for a verse.. ie spill the beans..etc,

v shake

goodstuff

Nothing

Vs.

I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable

This was one-sided, for being better overall and wittier...

Vote - Shake-Zula

links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232191
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232178
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232189

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Nas...

bitch, your life sucks, n u can't make sense out of a situation
i sense pain in your concepts..
..n i'm here to take out your frustrations

^ok...kinda played tho...but I gave it to you. I figured the "SHAKE" refrences are hella Played so...

Shake...

I lost 2 champ matches, but that aint embarrassin'...
It's actually funny, coz my losses are more impressive than ur wins
Besides, I'd kill a nigga if they ever snitched on me...
But shit, u so hungry u ALWAYS beggin' people to spill the beans
And ya attempts at nameplay are old and dull...
Till now, I didn't think it was possible to drop 18 without a quotable

^werd up to these here...that MAD MIKE reference was funny too...

V/ Shake-Zula

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Sigs cause Cancer

shake. other dood was, blah.
more of a peron to person verse, if any?
punches?...blah

v: shake

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