first thing i noticed was the quality which was good.

the first verse came in with a lot of energy. your flow was a little weird but it went well with the song. lyrics are pretty cool. lines like the one about your father were cool.

chorus was STRANGE.

2nd verse comes in with that same energy. lyrically i think the 1st verse was a little better than this one. but you had a little bit of wordplay with that potato line

chorus again is STRANGE.

last verse i like the voice. i think it matches a little more with tha beat. lyrically decent and quality was good.


the only thing i would change is the chorus. other than that this song was pretty good.