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Old 07-30-06, 11:16 AM   #1
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11. Yung Impression (2-0) vs 12. SPuL (2-0)

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Old 07-30-06, 08:07 PM   #2
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Old 07-31-06, 01:13 PM   #3
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Old 07-31-06, 06:17 PM   #4
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^^8 is good, since u got that tag thing.
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Old 08-01-06, 02:16 PM   #5
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here quick 8, post soon..

We all know first impressions are huge. This oppurtunity i won't pass
Fuck one impression, I'm bout to leave a hundred...
... all on your ass!
you embarass your coast. scream if you dont think that he good
shit i aint clint, but believe the whole fuckin eastwood
You got props when you started, but you ain't never get em since
You might get the benefit of the doubt, but I doubt you'll get the benefits
Yung gets whored every match. hes weak, ya cant fool dude
cause initially everyones wondering, "Y.I. even bother to battle you'

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Old 08-03-06, 11:56 PM   #6
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you a joke biter...lol, aight

^^
i'm going to keep it real. so let me make this clear.
ya didnt have to steal a joke...
...hell, you was one on RV, eva since ya been here.
and girls hate you. they wont let ya hit on any day.
treat him like everybody do...
...so once they see SPul, they just throw'em away.
but hey. ya wanted to go 8, i know the reason, ho.
David showed ya joke sites..
...and now, you don't have any more places to go.
tho. u dont never win. you on a streak?, i dont claim.
ya couldnt be on one, even if Utley gave ya his fame.

i posted, lol....i almost forgot about this.
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Old 08-04-06, 12:00 AM   #7
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We all know first impressions are huge. This oppurtunity i won't pass
Fuck one impression, I'm bout to leave a hundred...
... all on your ass!
you embarass your coast. scream if you dont think that he good
shit i aint clint, but believe the whole fuckin eastwood

VS.

i'm going to keep it real. so let me make this clear.
ya didnt have to steal a joke...
...hell, you was one on RV, eva since ya been here.
but hey. ya wanted to go 8, i know the reason, ho.
David showed ya joke sites..
...and now, you don't have any more places to go.


Word, I have it tied with quotables. This was an average battle at best. Both y'all can drop better. But I have to go with SPuL for the winner. The reason being is that his two quotables were different punches, whereas the only two bars I liked from Yung were on the same concept. So, SPuL wins for more variety.

V/ - SPuL
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Old 08-04-06, 12:31 AM   #8
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i'm going to keep it real. so let me make this clear.
ya didnt have to steal a joke...
...hell, you was one on RV, eva since ya been here.
and girls hate you. they wont let ya hit on any day.
treat him like everybody do...
...so once they see SPul, they just throw'em away.
but hey. ya wanted to go 8, i know the reason, ho.
David showed ya joke sites..
...and now, you don't have any more places to go.

vs

We all know first impressions are huge. This oppurtunity i won't pass
Fuck one impression, I'm bout to leave a hundred...
... all on your ass!
you embarass your coast. scream if you dont think that he good
shit i aint clint, but believe the whole fuckin eastwood

i thought Impression edged it in this battle, felt he came with some good personals and spul just had a nameplay and a pretty good wordplay...but idk maybe he was slackin off but YI gets my vote.
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Old 08-04-06, 12:44 AM   #9
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i'm going to keep it real. so let me make this clear.
ya didnt have to steal a joke...
...hell, you was one on RV, eva since ya been here.

v.

nothing.


kind'a weak battle to me.. its what i expected considering you both went 8. yung had one decent line and spul had nada i was feeling.

v/ yung.
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Old 08-04-06, 10:46 AM   #10
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lol ok. uppppp .
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Old 08-04-06, 11:21 AM   #11
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We all know first impressions are huge. This oppurtunity i won't pass
Fuck one impression, I'm bout to leave a hundred...
... all on your ass!
//////////ehh, ok
you embarass your coast. scream if you dont think that he good
shit i aint clint, but believe the whole fuckin eastwood
/.///////ehh, ok.. somewat creativ
You got props when you started, but you ain't never get em since
You might get the benefit of the doubt, but I doubt you'll get the benefits
/////////////ehh, cliche been done to death
Yung gets whored every match. hes weak, ya cant fool dude
cause initially everyones wondering, "Y.I. even bother to battle you'
.\\\\\\\\\\\\been don on this nig amillion times

i'm going to keep it real. so let me make this clear.
ya didnt have to steal a joke...
...hell, you was one on RV, eva since ya been here.
////////////okk
and girls hate you. they wont let ya hit on any day.
treat him like everybody do...
...so once they see SPul, they just throw'em away.
/////////////nope
but hey. ya wanted to go 8, i know the reason, ho.
David showed ya joke sites..
...and now, you don't have any more places to go.
//////////////too simmpl
tho. u dont never win. you on a streak?, i dont claim.
ya couldnt be on one, even if Utley gave ya his fame.
/////////////nah

v spul
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Old 08-04-06, 12:14 PM   #12
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SPul

We all know first impressions are huge. This oppurtunity i won't pass
Fuck one impression, I'm bout to leave a hundred...
... all on your ass!
Didn't really like this bar at all. last part was kinda worded wrong
you embarass your coast. scream if you dont think that he good
shit i aint clint, but believe the whole fuckin eastwood
I really like this one. Had a nice set up and closer.
You got props when you started, but you ain't never get em since
You might get the benefit of the doubt, but I doubt you'll get the benefits
Good word play
Yung gets whored every match. hes weak, ya cant fool dude
cause initially everyones wondering, "Y.I. even bother to battle you'
This is kinda played on em.

Young Impression

i'm going to keep it real. so let me make this clear.
ya didnt have to steal a joke...
...hell, you was one on RV, eva since ya been here.
Nice opener. Almost made me tilt my face into the form of a smile.
and girls hate you. they wont let ya hit on any day.
treat him like everybody do...
...so once they see SPul, they just throw'em away.
badly worded really, I get wat you were saying but still...
but hey. ya wanted to go 8, i know the reason, ho.
David showed ya joke sites..
...and now, you don't have any more places to go.
you should explain this one a bit.
tho. u dont never win. you on a streak?, i dont claim.
ya couldnt be on one, even if Utley gave ya his fame.
Didn't like this closer

All in all, I like Spuls lines a bit more coz he was more consistant than Y.I. and plus he had more quotables but this a decent battle.

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Old 08-04-06, 12:33 PM   #13
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aiight 3-2 me. uppin'........
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Old 08-05-06, 02:22 AM   #14
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We all know first impressions are huge. This oppurtunity i won't pass
Fuck one impression, I'm bout to leave a hundred...
... all on your ass!
you embarass your coast. scream if you dont think that he good
shit i aint clint, but believe the whole fuckin eastwood
You got props when you started, but you ain't never get em since
You might get the benefit of the doubt, but I doubt you'll get the benefits
(6)

Consistent dope until the last line

vs.

nothing

seriously man, you shouldn't have gone with joke punches, too played

v/SPuL
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Old 08-05-06, 11:49 AM   #15
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^^wtf...uppin for votes
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