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Old 07-30-06, 11:11 AM   #1
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37. Daubs (0-0) vs 38. LMAOffender (0-0)

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Old 07-30-06, 03:53 PM   #2
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Alais?

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Old 07-30-06, 09:31 PM   #3
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Old 07-31-06, 02:31 AM   #4
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I'll drop a vote on this when you both spit. rtf when I do.
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Old 08-03-06, 08:16 PM   #5
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ur favored to win??
hahahahaaa

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No matter how well u lie, its still clear as sky
that ur lines are Ass!
..and im not including the wack nameplays u'll try
i'll make it short. even with some beer, liquor and juices..
ya couldnt fuck up Offender drivin under the influence
kid, ya new to this. i'll help ya. cuz the way i pen raps..
could ghost ur verses. but whats the point? they already get Laughs
On top of that, ur plain wack. this verse'll snap ya like a twig
and give u such a graphic beating that u'll add it in ya sig
cheap bitch. couple a bars and u'd be sore in a day
the way i clock in ur jaw so much it'll ask for overtime pay
this dudes layed. so once i drop the stomps on his temple, surely..
DA will crumble under the pressure, like a nervous attorney

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Old 08-04-06, 10:10 AM   #6
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ur wiggidy wack for no-showin doooooooood.
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Old 08-05-06, 06:39 AM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by LMAOffender
this dudes layed. so once i drop the stomps on his temple, surely..
DA will crumble under the pressure, like a nervous attorney
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hotshh
How many times I gotta bend em?, turn around and befriend em
Since more people hate on DA than the fucking Defendant.........
Quote:
Originally Posted by LMAOffender
On top of that, ur plain wack. this verse'll snap ya like a twig
and give u such a graphic beating that u'll add it in ya sig
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
Even YOU recognize my skill. . while you ain't tight with the fellas
I'll make your murder so graphic your whole fucking site'll be jealous


Supposed to be an easy week battlin the weakest geek, its over my friend
cos after reading your verse its like im battlin decent heads all over again
why drop man, you dont like contact...you prefer a sensual method
so il take LMAO out, replace f's with a B and state his sexuall preference
im sick with it, i spit it slick..when rappin you aint winnin this
so how can I get the last laugh, when thats where this faggot finishes
my lines are hype when im rhymin tight, i cant even believe it
my punches make ass' crack..like where he likes to put his penis

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Old 08-05-06, 08:41 PM   #8
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LMAO...

On top of that, ur plain wack. this verse'll snap ya like a twig
and give u such a graphic beating that u'll add it in ya sig
cheap bitch. couple a bars and u'd be sore in a day
the way i clock in ur jaw so much it'll ask for overtime pay
this dudes layed. so once i drop the stomps on his temple, surely..
DA will crumble under the pressure, like a nervous attorney

^wording in the last line is shakey to me IMO...but....Ok

Daubs...

Supposed to be an easy week battlin the weakest geek, its over my friend
cos after reading your verse its like im battlin decent heads all over again
im sick with it, i spit it slick..when rappin you aint winnin this
so how can I get the last laugh, when thats where this faggot finishes

eh....ionno actually, those flips were Kinda close :/ and they were the only standouts in his verse but...Daubs verse was like eh too.

V/ Tie...Im mad undecided if I had to chose one I guess it would be DAUBS. DA thing I seen before...iono man. Daubs had the personal and a cool punch. Cat had, fuck it.

V/ Daubs
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Old 08-05-06, 09:08 PM   #9
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Decent battle here. I wasn't feeling the first 2 couplets from Offender, but he picked it up nicely until the closer, which was kinda simple. Daubs' opener hit hard. The rest was decent. The sexual preference nameplay was a little forced and the last laugh line was ok. I'm just feelin' lmaoffender's verse a little more. It's close tho.

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Old 08-06-06, 12:19 PM   #10
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alright so, this was a decent match.


im sick with it, i spit it slick..when rappin you aint winnin this
so how can I get the last laugh, when thats where this faggot finishes

v.

On top of that, ur plain wack. this verse'll snap ya like a twig
and give u such a graphic beating that u'll add it in ya sig
cheap bitch. couple a bars and u'd be sore in a day
the way i clock in ur jaw so much it'll ask for overtime pay


i'ma say LMAOffender. only because he had two quotables v. one.. i was kinda feeling both of them but Daubs had a lot of attempts that failed if you ask me.

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Old 08-06-06, 12:19 PM   #11
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LMAOffender wins 2-0.

LMAOffender wins (1-0)
Daubs loses (0-1)
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