30 lines

cool?

whoevr posts 1st,

the other'll match.

roflz
No.. 30s not cool

u NEED to worry bout formin a concept. you fuckin herb
^cozzzz
my setup was 10x harder then that entire punch of urs.
they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
SLick, ya 3 line approach is too long. it goes for dumb miles
reminds me of my stretchd punchlines; minus the impact, wit, wording & punchlines
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP
look, ima take it easy on U. cuz ya spits matter.
i'd still slap ya verse, but im rockn burberry.. & shit splatters
see, i ran into ya chick - slid the nut up in her tubes yungin
had his girl SO late, Rush lingo felt obligated to do somethin..
then i found out he's bi.. bentover takin it from a damn dood
Slick back aint a hairstyle, its wher he's preppin for his mans splooge
Ya fluffy kid. soft as hell. Fluffy bitch
wen i calld u a down dude
...i meant like feathers in the comfortr ya moms n i cuddle with
coz EVen she aint feelin' him. but his pops is hatin him worse
Slick the only person to put a frown on the face of the earth
theres a creed; drop iLL till every voter say ya so fly
theres another Creed; i used 4 inspiration, ..as I KO'd Sli




neeexxxtttttt

^^^ face it bitch, its obvious that whole post was of shit...
yeh you got your shit up early...but sent us all back to sleep because of it!
just admit that, but this week we must all have got a bit glad...
I never knew a verse could fall in love...
.................................till I saw the amount of weak spots your shit had
your overrated man, n your bars are like times we fight through...
so we say phew after your verses & wish thats how many lines youd write too
simple man, n I wont prejudge – that aint what my plan was...
but on the face of it your shit...is ugly as FUCK and needs a damn wash
no joke, so know that my punches will amount to hell, ugly...
n youll be in such a state...the Palestinians will count themselves lucky
fucking cunt, typing raps I expect you fighting back...
‘cause your shits a wonder...
......the way it keeps me guessing how someone can write that whack!!!

like this stretched piece of a motherfucker:


but...I wont doubt the fact you worked hard becoming a star...
I know youve gone to great lengths...all I had to do was read one of your bars!
fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with
I aint being harsh, I just hope you never live amongst me...
n Im not even close to a bitch...you live in a completely different country
seen your crooked pic & well, I wont diss it you fucking prick...
so just count yourself lucky...actually...dont...you fucking UGLY bitch!!!

they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
look, ima take it easy on U. cuz ya spits matter.
i'd still slap ya verse, but im rockn burberry.. & shit splatters
coz EVen she aint feelin' him. but his pops is hatin him worse
Slick the only person to put a frown on the face of the earth

vs.

^^^ face it bitch, its obvious that whole post was of shit...
yeh you got your shit up early...but sent us all back to sleep because of it!
fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with
I aint being harsh, I just hope you never live amongst me...
n Im not even close to a bitch...you live in a completely different country

tied on quotables.

Butler - your verse was consistent. You had some stand outs which i quoted and the rest were decent. But dont diss a stretched structure with a line thats stretched itself. It defeats the purpose and makes you like bad.
Slic - Your opener was dope.. but it seemed like you fell off. A lot of mediocre lines that had bad wording or the punch was just wack. The phew concept wouldve been hot but you stretched it out and worded it badly. You started to heat up at the end but your closer was horrid.

In the end I felt Butler was more consistent so he gets the win.

v/ Butler

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Aint That A Bitch?

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they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
look, ima take it easy on U. cuz ya spits matter.
i'd still slap ya verse, but im rockn burberry.. & shit splatters
coz EVen she aint feelin' him. but his pops is hatin him worse
Slick the only person to put a frown on the face of the earth

vs

fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with
I aint being harsh, I just hope you never live amongst me...
n Im not even close to a bitch...you live in a completely different country


Butler i felt that you pucnhes was better and you had a filler punch but slick had a couple fillers aswell so it didnt really matter... slick you are good but, ler just edged you out of this battle with a slightly better verse.

vote: Butler

Butler:

u NEED to worry bout formin a concept. you fuckin herb
^cozzzz
my setup was 10x harder then that entire punch of urs.
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP
coz EVen she aint feelin' him. but his pops is hatin him worse
Slick the only person to put a frown on the face of the earth


Vs.


SlicKnife:



your overrated man, n your bars are like times we fight through...
so we say phew after your verses & wish thats how many lines youd write too
no joke, so know that my punches will amount to hell, ugly...
n youll be in such a state...the Palestinians will count themselves lucky
fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with


Both had weak verses but slic had a ton of filler and bad wordplay so Butler got this one

V/ Butler

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u NEED to worry bout formin a concept. you fuckin herb
^cozzzz
my setup was 10x harder then that entire punch of urs.
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP

vs.


but...I wont doubt the fact you worked hard becoming a star...
I know youve gone to great lengths...all I had to do was read one of your bars!


decent battle. Slick didn't come nice at all too me, none of his punches were all that hard, everything of his was simple and just decent. Butler kept it consistant, even tho to me he only really hade 2 dope quotables while slick only had 1 one decent quoatable. Butler wins this easily too me.


vote - Butler.

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Butler-ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP.....ighttttt i c
then i found out he's bi.. bentover takin it from a damn dood
Slick back aint a hairstyle, its wher he's preppin for his mans splooge
coz EVen she aint feelin' him. but his pops is hatin him worse
Slick the only person to put a frown on the face of the earth

Slick-no joke, so know that my punches will amount to hell, ugly...
n youll be in such a state...the Palestinians will count themselves lucky
fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with

str8 battle Butler takes it to me also had the screw loose line , i hope hes ready to battle me again in the near future cuz its on
Vote-Butler

u NEED to worry bout formin a concept. you fuckin herb
^cozzzz
my setup was 10x harder then that entire punch of urs.
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP

vs

fucking homo, I can see your upset knowing I will win, shit
but your not at your wits end...when you never really had any to begin with

thought slicks quoteable was funny as shit for some reason...but anyways i see Butler taking this, he had more good punches, the ones i quote of his was good and the rest of his verse was decent.....and slick you ahd some good shit but worded wrong, cost you some quoteables. vote-butler

lmao at follow the leader...

Kempo sign me out bro, will sign back in sum time maybe for the playoffs or whenever

they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP
then i found out he's bi.. bentover takin it from a damn dood
Slick back aint a hairstyle, its wher he's preppin for his mans splooge

vs

your overrated man, n your bars are like times we fight through...
so we say phew after your verses & wish thats how many lines youd write too
no joke, so know that my punches will amount to hell, ugly...
n youll be in such a state...the Palestinians will count themselves lucky
but...I wont doubt the fact you worked hard becoming a star...
I know youve gone to great lengths...all I had to do was read one of your bars!


this was a close battle, and both had the same amount of quotables, but Butler edged this one out, cuz his lines were a bit harder and more funnier.

vote-Butler

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they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
SLick, ya 3 line approach is too long. it goes for dumb miles
reminds me of my stretchd punchlines; minus the impact, wit, wording & punchlines
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP
look, ima take it easy on U. cuz ya spits matter.
i'd still slap ya verse, but im rockn burberry.. & shit splatters

vs.

^^^ face it bitch, its obvious that whole post was of shit...
yeh you got your shit up early...but sent us all back to sleep because of it!

your overrated man, n your bars are like times we fight through...
so we say phew after your verses & wish thats how many lines youd write too

I aint being harsh, I just hope you never live amongst me...
n Im not even close to a bitch...you live in a completely different country


Slick came pretty cool and consistent... butler started dope as fuck and completely lost it toward the end of the verse.. but his first few lines were just enuff to keep the title

votebutler

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