check, how many?

listen..

I come thru blazin, Im that damn amazin - no jitters..
..I'm closin Dat out with my opener like I threw a no hitter
E's goin straight mag, your a straight fag - theres no stress..
..Peep game my verse is backin the D up like a half court press
Guess who's locked in, n all out attack - yea its a bummer..
..a fuckin beach house couldnt help you escape this summer
& I dont invade peoples space, I know hospitality stops
..your just a steppin stone bitch so watch me kick rocks
I got bitches givin dome, suckin me up - i use protecton..
..while the only goin down on D is his network connection
When the votes come in son, get ready for annihilation..
..cause the only D W I know of is a fuckin driving violation
I got the nail in the coffin, wave'n it around I'll flaunt it..
..then take it back out & hang my picture perfect win on it
& if you think my first line was hot, its about to get worse..
..cause if you think your fresh to death literally
wait til after ya post ya verse


fuck outa here.

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I dunno man cuz...
I looked at that pic n' there's lots wrong with the dude
Ain't enough to diss? AKA, ya ain't dissin someone who looks JUST like you
Ur a bitch, I'm a father, you won't bury or slay me
Whateva, I'll hold you in contempt, I'm used to carryin' a baby
I'm merkin' ass, n' then cuttin' this clown in halves
Cuz you ain't a threat, little kids are known to run down Aves
Now, I seen you tryin' to go the extra yard to win this
You'd go over the top, but we all know that's kinda hard for midgets
I was at the movies dawg, n' here's news for this lame teen
I just saw Barnyard and half the girls you've hooked up with...
... ON THE SAME SCREEN
So get through ya fuckin' head, hoes don't applaud when ya chase them
They never Gopha you... and neither did the votes when you faced him
You ain't the club type, a loser, so don't try to act hard
Your idea of a Friday night is out rollin'... the navigation Bar
Ur a weak fuck n' I'm pointin' my glocks at this hoe
Your like a beginner golfer, ya NEVER land 2 good shots in a row

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233013
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233002
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233015
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233001

Uppin for some votes

I come thru blazin, Im that damn amazin - no jitters..
..I'm closin Dat out with my opener like I threw a no hitter
I got bitches givin dome, suckin me up - i use protecton..
..while the only goin down on D is his network connection
& if you think my first line was hot, its about to get worse..
..cause if you think your fresh to death literally
wait til after ya post ya verse


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Now, I seen you tryin' to go the extra yard to win this
You'd go over the top, but we all know that's kinda hard for midgets
So get through ya fuckin' head, hoes don't applaud when ya chase them
They never Gopha you... and neither did the votes when you faced him
You ain't the club type, a loser, so don't try to act hard
Your idea of a Friday night is out rollin'... the navigation Bar
Ur a weak fuck n' I'm pointin' my glocks at this hoe
Your like a beginner golfer, ya NEVER land 2 good shots in a row


V/ DaTrusHurtz


Good battle, but DTH had a couple more quotables

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E's goin straight mag, your a straight fag - theres no stress..
..Peep game my verse is backin the D up like a half court press
When the votes come in son, get ready for annihilation..
..cause the only D W I know of is a fuckin driving violation

vs.

I'm merkin' ass, n' then cuttin' this clown in halves
Cuz you ain't a threat, little kids are known to run down Aves
So get through ya fuckin' head, hoes don't applaud when ya chase them
They never Gopha you... and neither did the votes when you faced him



ehh hard battle to call here. Y'all both came with equally decent verses, Erel came consistant. Datrus on tha other hand was kinda elementry with some of his punches like, the Just like you line, carryin' a baby, and On the same screen lines. all those punches seemed kinda elementry. The quoatables I liked from your verse was dope tho, but if anything i'ma have to edge this one to Erel for coming a lil more consistant. Close battle tho.

vote - EA

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1-1, uppin for some more votes

I got bitches givin dome, suckin me up - i use protecton..
..while the only goin down on D is his network connection
& if you think my first line was hot, its about to get worse..
..cause if you think your fresh to death literally
wait til after ya post ya verse


vs

Now, I seen you tryin' to go the extra yard to win this
You'd go over the top, but we all know that's kinda hard for midgets
So get through ya fuckin' head, hoes don't applaud when ya chase them
They never Gopha you... and neither did the votes when you faced him
Ur a weak fuck n' I'm pointin' my glocks at this hoe
Your like a beginner golfer, ya NEVER land 2 good shots in a row


ehh, this was kinda close....both ahd some dope punches but both ahd some weak ass shit punches....i had this tied up but that last quote of DTH took it....i ahd yall evenly until DTH's finsiher. good shit guys

& wtf at DTH having being 4-0 and in 28th seat

Guess who's locked in, n all out attack - yea its a bummer..
..a fuckin beach house couldnt help you escape this summer
& I dont invade peoples space, I know hospitality stops
..your just a steppin stone bitch so watch me kick rocks
I got bitches givin dome, suckin me up - i use protecton..
..while the only goin down on D is his network connection


vs.



I'm merkin' ass, n' then cuttin' this clown in halves
Cuz you ain't a threat, little kids are known to run down Aves
I was at the movies dawg, n' here's news for this lame teen
I just saw Barnyard and half the girls you've hooked up with...
... ON THE SAME SCREEN
You ain't the club type, a loser, so don't try to act hard
Your idea of a Friday night is out rollin'... the navigation Bar


both had some played shit and decent stuff .. i liked the lines i quoted.. but ea's lines i didnt quote were better than dats.. overall i liked hid lines a lil more

vote erel avant

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