checky, slecky.

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How bout like 20, post before wednessday. If your dope like that?

Match Me. 20. I hope your not pussy and you can post soon.


Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull

i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up

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get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull


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urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up


Damn good battle.. its a pretty close one so i gotta go to the rest of the verses.


Urmom:

Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
^^Decent opener, didnt feel it was quotable but still good
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
^^this was filler, no punch just garbage
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
^^ i was really feelin this bar but shell toe lines are played as fuck and u kno it
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
^^this was another filler bar, basically something to give your verse length


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i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
^^wasnt feeling this, i get the punch and personal but it was worded wrong
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
^^filler, u tried a nameplay but it came out gay
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
^^same as last bar just a flip on the concept, wasnt feelin it
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
^^decent try at wordplay in this bar but it just didnt work



So after all that ima have to give it to ... Urmom. For one reason, he had the same ammount of quotables as untold but the rest of his verse was slightly better than untolds.


So


Vote/ Urmomsuxdixx

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Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
ehh.
get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
this came out too plain for me man
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
lol, pretty decent, even though it sounds pretty gay
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
lol, decent
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
funny.. but i seen a couple of those lines used on him
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
ehh
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
this was pretty dope
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
nahman.. this was wack
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull
this was okay.. coulda been worded better, in your first line you shoulda said biased instead of sides again, idk.. but that woulda worked better for me.

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i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
ehhh
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
lmao. funny
urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
decent wordplay
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
decent use of cliche, i felt it.
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
dopeness
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
ehh, kinda weak nameplay.. i saw alot of those urmom things at the cyph this week
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
once again.. same as before
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
decent
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up
kinda stretched, but i sorta liked it. sorta

v- untold. he had harder lines, and more lines that i felt. that sex line piece was butter.

--urmomsuxdixxx--

Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
>>Okay opener - could have been better.

get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
>>Really bland.

ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
>>I've seen this type of line before - and I still don't like it.

or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
>>I like...

I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
>>Ha.

Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
>>I think it could have hit a lot harder but I like the concept.

Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
>>Sick.

His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
>>Don't like...

I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull
>>A bit redundant and could have hit a lot harder but not bad.



--Untold--

i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
>>Nah, I don't like this.

if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
>>Nice.

urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
>>I think it could have hit harder but good.

ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
>>Once again, it's a good concept but not hitting too hard.

plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
>>Sick.

you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
>>Too predictable.

plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
>>Not bad... but not really that good.

ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
>>Okay.

i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up
>>A tad forced but not bad.



Vote: Untold
I think both verses were pretty even - it really came down to urmom's sketch line and Untold's sex one. I think the sex one just edged it. Other than that, both verses were equal.

uh, upz on diz shit!

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Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch

Vs.

if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up


basically, Untold won this easily with some good/decent lines...urmom, some of your concepts were decent but really it wasnt a strong verse, I mean one bar was just plain gay n hilarious because of that:

ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month

the bar I quoted was dope tho, but this was no contest IMO

Vote - Untold

Fucking 20 line battles...why?

urmomsuxxx
Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
Didn't like this name play punch
get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
good punch but the first line spoiled it for me.
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
weak
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
ehhh
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
Good name play
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
another good punch
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
sounds like a dr. sues rhyme but it ok.
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
3 decent nameplays in one verse. ok.
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull
good punch with a nice set up.

Your verse had decent average flow and shit. Some of your punches were kind of weak and seemsed like you were going for quantity over quality man. You hit good with the name plays but I thought those were your most strong points.

Untold
i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
Good punch and nice set...but it didn't really rhyme
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
could have been worded better but ok.
urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
Nice punch
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
good punch but worded wrong i think
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
I think this is one of the best lines so far in the battle
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
weak nameplay punch
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
losing hypeness..this was bad...
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
ok punch
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up
Good punch...Even better since you havent used it on me...lol

This was an ok battle...Only a few quotablez. Both came ok but I thought the battle shouldn't have gone 20 lines but w/e. My vote goes to Untold for more consistant punches. He also had the best punches in the battle which really won it for me. please RTF in my battle with PP2.

v/Untold

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ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch

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if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up

lol, i liked this battle. both came pretty nice. both had some cool lines and shit. uuntold you became a bit repetitive with the suck dick lines na sayen. but i think untold was wayy more consistant that your mom, and had the harsher punches. both came nice though, but your mom just couldnt pull it off.

vote untold

-dont sleep

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get ya grave set up, basically cause fate said you need it
Untold's name in stone, with bible passages and dates underneath it
I'm a 10 out of 10 type nigga, and i thought it's clear
I see you Met-A-4, your poor ass finally bought a mirror?
Look at this powderpuff faggot, man i'll end him so quick
found my way to his heart, n came out wit it clenched in my fist
Watch me eat this nigga food, and start gnawing his text
have him missing without a trace.... drawin' or sketch
I'm flauntin my techs, im not pickin sides, not at all
because my dude i'll leave a hole in BOTH sides ya skull


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urmoms's good for brains and whats under her blouse
'n since her headquarters.. i always stay close to ur house
ur a bitch whose mouth'll hang, cause u like to shout 'n play
behind every male is a female.. so tell ur man to move out the way
plus girls don't think ur ballin so put away ur wallet
hell, i'd drop a sex line.. but urmom would try to call it
ya here just to lose, so i'm tearin this, dude
only way you'll step ur Game up.. if u was wearin his shoe
i have faith 'n believe in god, but this fags a hoe bruh
cause you say Amen.. in hopes more than one will show up


Damn good battle.. its a pretty close one so i gotta go to the rest of the verses.


Urmom:

Yo i got word on this one dude with a horrible flow
even though i heard it through the grapevine, the stories Untold
^^Decent opener, didnt feel it was quotable but still good
ya see kid? i roll dirty like cheap weed twist in a blunt
and i'll get in ya ass so bad you wont shit for a month
^^this was filler, no punch just garbage
or i'll go country western, make ya ass dance with the heater
shoot up ya sneakers til ya got 'shell toes' like they was adidas
^^ i was really feelin this bar but shell toe lines are played as fuck and u kno it
His verses unnoticed, but i know all of em shit
and his names Untold, but i'm still callin him Bitch
^^this was another filler bar, basically something to give your verse length


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i got mathematics to a science, numbers.. i crunch more, son
so how u gonna count on a win, when even 20's to much for ya
^^wasnt feeling this, i get the punch and personal but it was worded wrong
if urmomsuxdixx, it'd be till her face is practically red
wait, i DO remember ya mom.. well, atleast the back of her head
^^filler, u tried a nameplay but it came out gay
you've fallen, i'm risin on bitches who blow fa show
but ur momsuxxdix.. the best out'a any other hoe i know
^^same as last bar just a flip on the concept, wasnt feelin it
plus ur fresh here, while i'm a vet in the studio
to this league ur a New Edition..
..to them, urmom's just another groupie hoe
^^decent try at wordplay in this bar but it just didnt work

Overall This was the DOPEST battle I have read this weak so Far but anyway I think that Yourmomsuxdixxx took this mainly bcuz they way he/she set up thier bars and the concept of his/her verse was more original

so my v/ urmomsuxdixxx

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