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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...480&postcount=7
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233710

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Artistik.=2 links

If you don't do required number, it's a deduction of ONE vote for each missing link

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this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
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I'll make you a fashion statement, rush lingo? wha kinda name is that
n last time i checked.. RL been worn, washed up, played n wack
this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
i lack respect for you dude, but hear what i'm spittin is tru, u geek
so 's kno doubt u'll make the top 10.. punches for the mag this week :/
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact
get this kid off my dick, 1 punch n his vision is blurry
so fuck, why rush?.. when i can take this win in a hurry

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Axe

you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out
watch me take this. you were decent, now ya flows lost it
i'm a Baller.. and to be honest you just the wrong Artest
it's nothing to me, i'ma leave this niggas ass slaughtered
artistik. said he tap ass.. please, he can't even tap water
i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage




from all of ya lines i can tell ya cluless on ya words duke
this nigga BEGGIN me to drop like him losin got a curfew
and on another note i really hated quotin this queer
that's reppin a crew, that ain't even been dope in a year

this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
I'll make you a fashion statement, rush lingo? wha kinda name is that
n last time i checked.. RL been worn, washed up, played n wack
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out
watch me take this. you were decent, now ya flows lost it
i'm a Baller.. and to be honest you just the wrong Artest
i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage

this battle was pretty even, i got Rush taking this, by his punches being a lil more harder and they made me laugh, Art had some nice lines though, he impressed me.

vote-Rush Lingo

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this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out

v/ artistik, pretty one sided in my opinion.. rush dropped pretty weak, some really forced wordplay.. like the artest line and the poem line they just didnt work out. Art had decent punches though... and that turn for the worst line was the best of the battle.

this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
I liked this line...wouldv been a lot better with out the Congrats part
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I'll make you a fashion statement, rush lingo? wha kinda name is that
n last time i checked.. RL been worn, washed up, played n wack
Good name play
this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
decent punch
i lack respect for you dude, but hear what i'm spittin is tru, u geek
so 's kno doubt u'll make the top 10.. punches for the mag this week :/
This might be the personal of the battle for me
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact
really good punch
get this kid off my dick, 1 punch n his vision is blurry
so fuck, why rush?.. when i can take this win in a hurry
ok nameplay...all rush lingo nameplays are played but you did ok with it

All in all. this verse was tight....I read through the entire thing and didn't think not one line to be meh or wak at all.....really good verse with a good flow and ill punches and personals. Also had the punch of battle

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out
Good nameplay but not as hard hitting as Id like it to be
watch me take this. you were decent, now ya flows lost it
i'm a Baller.. and to be honest you just the wrong Artest
Kinda wak nameplay...it was too simple
it's nothing to me, i'ma leave this niggas ass slaughtered
artistik. said he tap ass.. please, he can't even tap water
ok wordplay but It felt a bit forced
i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage
could have been worded better
from all of ya lines i can tell ya cluless on ya words duke
this nigga BEGGIN me to drop like him losin got a curfew
Dukes gay ass net word...the punch was mehh.
and on another note i really hated quotin this queer
that's reppin a crew, that ain't even been dope in a year
Queer is a played word to use really and the punch was kinda dead

Rushes verse was ok but it wasn't as good as I know he could do...there were a few forced lines and missworded punches...He had good concept but just not better material then Artistik in this battle. Shouldv came a bit harder in my oppinion but still a str8 battle

V/ Artistik

RTF later in the week when I drop my verse on my battle with Y.I.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out

Yeh...I got Artistik taking this, he was more consistent, and had better punches - Rush, you had some forced lines man, but that quote was pretty good...

Vote - Artistik

this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago

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you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out
i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage

Overall this was ehh battle. Y'all came way better in past matches. Artistik verse was ok. The shit I didn't quote wasn't all wack, they was just like ehhish or decent shit. so not that bad a verse. Rush was aiight too. The sell out one was tight, I think that won it for him. Poem was pretty nice too, could be a lil forced but iunno I Still liked it. So Overall I got rush edging this out

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Artistik's shit I liked:

I'll make you a fashion statement, rush lingo? wha kinda name is that
n last time i checked.. RL been worn, washed up, played n wack

pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact


Rush Lingo's shit I liked:

you talk tough, but once the tools and the shells out
Art can be bought for a penny just to prove he's a sell out

i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage


Based on those lines alone, Rush has this...both verses were lackin' in places imo...but, Rush, as it seems, took more of a chance at creativity (except for the Artest line)...any bar I didn't quote from Artistik was seen plenty of times before...hell, even I'VE used the dizzy/flipped line concept...

...all in all, it WAS a close battle...but I'm gonna have to vote for Rush...

this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact

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from all of ya lines i can tell ya cluless on ya words duke
this nigga BEGGIN me to drop like him losin got a curfew

watch me take this. you were decent, now ya flows lost it
i'm a Baller.. and to be honest you just the wrong Artest
im not quotin this, jus sayin it's played out the ass

that garbage line was just too forced to quote imo
i really dont even see this battle being close, dunno how rush got any votes

v/ artistik

ps.....artest line....bitten....???.....maaaaybe

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I'll make you a fashion statement, rush lingo? wha kinda name is that
n last time i checked.. RL been worn, washed up, played n wack
this guy talks alott ah shit, so i won't stop till i fracture his hip
n u must be dizzy as fuck.. accounting for all the lines that u flipped
i lack respect for you dude, but hear what i'm spittin is tru, u geek
so 's kno doubt u'll make the top 10.. punches for the mag this week :/
pussy i'm take'n my place back, so just face it you've been wack
n if this punch take's a turn for the worst.. U should be bracin for impact

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watch me take this. you were decent, now ya flows lost it
i'm a Baller.. and to be honest you just the wrong Artest
and on another note i really hated quotin this queer
that's reppin a crew, that ain't even been dope in a year

decent battle, both had some harsh lines and shit but i think artistik was more witty and creative. seriously he took it by a fair margin. that turn for the worst shit was pretty funny. RL only line i REALLY liked from you was the artest line, which wasnt as good as artistiks.

vote artistik.

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this bitch'll make a fool of himself, so thinks for providing the show
congrat's..
your the man of the hour.. twenty three minutes, ten seconds ago
get this kid off my dick, 1 punch n his vision is blurry
so fuck, why rush?.. when i can take this win in a hurry

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i know you write ya girl letters cuz ya goin through a hardship
but all ya sweet haikus, she told me she poem in the garbage
and on another note i really hated quotin this queer
that's reppin a crew, that ain't even been dope in a year


Vote: Rush

Close battle but i felt rush had a few more lines that if they were worded better could have been quotables where as i wasnt feeling arts verse.

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