like M easy said....the average track is 16 bars...first verse was only 14 I think.
Its a good sexy track that would sound good with the right voice and flow. I like the style you wrote it. people got to remeber a song ...especially a club song wont sound the same as a text song so it wont have same elements such as the structure of how you write it down the flow you use while putting it down. your flow is on from what I read which really wasnt past the hook and 1st verse. but str8 drop and it sounds liike it would be a good song ...just work on the hook though. it aint sounding too good. 1

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..