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Old 09-03-06, 10:57 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
Group E: N. Tavarez (4-1) vs. SlicKnife (3-2)

IP: 2AC9 5FB1



It's week 6 bitches! Only 2 more weeks until we begin the playoffs. Slack off and your seeding will suffer. By now you all should be getting the hang of this, so lets see some dope punches this week.

Battler #1: SlicKnife
Battler #2: N. Tavarez

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.

Good Luck.
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Old 09-04-06, 05:40 PM   #2
SlicKnife
Middle Weight
 
From: England
IP: 32C4 F626

Check in.................
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Old 09-05-06, 08:54 AM   #3
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: B26C 448D

ready .
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Old 09-06-06, 08:05 PM   #4
SlicKnife
Middle Weight
 
From: England
IP: B611 E341

im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career
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Old 09-07-06, 09:06 AM   #5
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: B26C 448D

Look
My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies
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Old 09-08-06, 08:56 PM   #6
SlicKnife
Middle Weight
 
From: England
IP: 09F8 8881

you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???
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Old 09-09-06, 01:23 AM   #7
XM
Within Eternity's Wither
 
From: VA/GA
IP: 7BE2 A0A1

im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career

I actually like this bar lmao


you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???

Didn't even rhyme....you feed was weak also

My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!

Damn lol Dope punch

You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies

Nice name play lmao

v/ N. come'n completely harder N' consitant in with both punches
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Old 09-09-06, 01:19 PM   #8
Multi
Trill OG
 
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im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career
^^lol

you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???
^^iight


My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
^^dope

You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies
^^lol

V/nt...


nice second punch slick tho
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Old 09-09-06, 03:27 PM   #9
Untold
Met-A-4
 
From: Right here.
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im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career
..lmfaooo! dope man. this was deifnately nice!..
you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???
..WHAT!! sweet! i've never seen this used like this before. this was fresh/original, yet i don't feel as if peeps are gettin it???..

vs.

My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
..nice concept, but since i've used punches similar to his, it doesn't his as hard as it could, but i like how u intwined the hook in there, so that gave it some harshness back..
You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies
..HAHAHAHA! this was funny and dope. damn good line here. plus i haven't seen it yet..

damn good battle this week. best i've seen all week as well. will probably be battle of the week, to. nick, u had the cleverness and wit intwined wit ur punches. even though i felt ur second was harder than ur first, u definately came in with two solid punches. slick, u had two dope punches i was feelin alot. the groundwork wordplay was a dope idea and i have never seen play-off lines been used like that. u actually revived an old concept into somethin dope. cool battle guys but i gotta give it to slick for bein more consistant imo. g/l ya'll.

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Old 09-09-06, 04:10 PM   #10
SlicKnife
Middle Weight
 
From: England
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2-1 to N.T

nice battle man

so keep votin!!!
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Old 09-09-06, 05:51 PM   #12
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
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im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career
haven't seen a groundwork line before, pretty cool

vs.

My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
would hit harder if he was an audio head but still nice
You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies
haha, true, nice nameplay

vs.

you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???
ouch, really hard hitting personal

This was one of the best battles i've seen all season here. All 4 bars were dope and quotable and its tough to call a winner. If I had to rank the lines, I'd have to give Slick the best and worst bar of this battle and Tav the 2 in between. I'm giving this one to Slick tho, that closer hit real hard cuz it was personal and slightly gave him the edge.

Vote - SlicKnife
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Old 09-10-06, 12:20 AM   #13
Sonny Dimebags
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SlicKnife -you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???

Tavarez-You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies

Very hott battleee, madd closeee I gotta give it slightly to N.
vote-N. Tavarez
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Old 09-10-06, 05:24 AM   #14
JTR
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im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career
good bar

My braggings strong, you cant come for the ride----get dragged along
Get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
This concepts been done before
You dumb bitch, no one knows your alive
When friends bring Knife to gunfights...they leave em there n hope that he dies
Lol, so has this but the flip is fresh and it was better then any I seen

you suck kid & talk about feeding - your not a star as such...
how you gonna make it to the real thing
..............................when you couldnt EVEN playoff my bar above???
This was coo, but it was like "Ok, so he didn't feed of your verse, so?" Like the part where you say he won't make playoffs is coo, there's a diss there, but the other part makes no sense

Anyways, I actually thought this battle wasn't that great, and I know i'm deviating away from what everyone else is saying, cuz they all thought this was a tight and close battle, but my name is Jack The Ripper, wich means i'm right and everyone else is wrong.

Ok, I gotta give it to..... Slick Knife.

v/Slick Knife

His bars were fresher, imo, and I don't feel like typing anything else, so word. I hope Tav wins though despite me voting against him cuz he's cooler, lmao.
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Old 09-10-06, 08:30 AM   #15
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Maggot
 
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im keeping it clear, out in the streets is where this weakling appears...
yeh, youve got the groundwork to do well...so good luck in your sweeping career

vote sick.
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