i like the anger and emotions you put into this but some of it didnt rhyme or make sense

like when you said
u cant kick my ass ur legs as skinny as my arms
u aint gon be my dad i'll use your ass for darts

but overall i liked it so keep it up and give me feed back on mine

still n da struggle-wiley d

normally ur legs are bigger than ur arms right
and my arms are skinny as hell but his legs are just as skinny
thats why i said it cuz he's a scrawny muthafucka

and im sick of him threatning me he gon whip my ass like he's my father
and i just said i'll use him for darts for humour

make more sense now??

anyway thanx for the feed appreciate it

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