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Old 09-17-06, 02:22 AM   #1
Krackmittens
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drunk ass keystyle

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cats seem to forgot about krack's temperament
when i spit these lyrics i cause cranial disfigurements
quick to grab you by your neck and break ligaments
i set pressadance stack presidents and piss on your residents
your flow is still irrelevant still get stomped like a herd of elephants
been pissed ever since i changed my residence shit wasn't what it seemed
never fufilled the images in my dreams everyone on a constant scheme
shady trifling despiteful rivals coming at all angles with assault type rifles
of the verbal kind all cause time isnt something i can rewind now my mind
is making statements of displacement why i type this shit in my basement
so much time why did i waste it getting wasted for me society has no placement
its been debated broke down chopped and screwed im drunk as hell and im through
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Old 09-18-06, 12:24 PM   #2
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lyrically started off cool but got kind fo weak
alot of multis
flow i dont even know how to jsut text flow to be honest lmao
the beggining part seemed to flow well for the first 4 bars
then your lines got mad stretched and threw the flow off
overall ok
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Old 09-18-06, 04:10 PM   #3
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