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Old 10-05-06, 12:50 PM   #1
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Lampejo.

This lame will get raped, and your face on ill be cummin
Cause this kids gay like Clay, hes Aken for some cock lovin
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news

Clay Aken/achin' concept I've seen before, but it was the best line in your verse. Rest of the lines I quoted was decent. Wasn't feeling everything else.

Faime S. Quotez

^Oh, don't worry, this won't take a week.. here's evidence, chump
this battle been over since Sunday. .
....I don't know why Kemp wasted time setting it up!
Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!
You shook from the start, you skeet just from palming ass!
and you cum way too quick for chicks. .
....why you think they call you 'Flash'?
You never hit a G spot, you stick it in, think u traveled great..
turns out, you got a Long Way To Go like that song Cassie made!

I feel these were all worded and delivered better than any of Lamp's lines. Only reason I didn't list the first bar was because Lamp had a similar one in his verse.

Overall: I feel that Faime came with a better worded and delivered verse. Seemed more polished and experienced. Lamp's verse didn't come off as good as Faime's due to the way he sets up his punches.

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