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Old 10-01-06, 10:14 AM   #1
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5. Roger Glocks (8-3) vs 6. Te Ora (2-0)

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Old 10-01-06, 07:06 PM   #2
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Old 10-01-06, 11:03 PM   #3
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ok i got you

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Old 10-04-06, 10:48 PM   #4
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holla

i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake
'cause you aren't a gankstuh. you'll lose, what i'm spittin shocks
and considering your not a g i’ll prove i got shit on lock
you must be hood. a ghetto cat with a hobby for guns
if your real gully.. it's fitting i leave your body in one
it's time to run. you ain't seeing none you just lying son
in all likelyhood.. you've never stepped foot inside of one
you don't fire gats and should be giving up on these claims
getting mentioned in the mag..
was the closest you've come to living up to your name
and i read the predictions. apparently you'll come 1st & defeat
i agree that you'll be in contendorship.. for wackest verse of the week
i'm airing you out.. when the flights over you gon here the sound
of everyone saying "roger that" dude flying to the ground
i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.
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Old 10-05-06, 06:40 PM   #5
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^^ umm ok ?

U wrote that shit quick as hell n I read that shit coughing, very awkard
If this how gay a Te' Key gets...then Barber needs to come out closet
I know you act hard. talk shit about me, but i get pussy often
while girls are like a unsolved cases to u...he cant put his finger on it
with ya generic punches and bullshit personals. it gets boring to read
cuz ppl only feel wut your saying. if they touched the monitor screen
ur ugly ass cant hold on to a girl, its funny how hard you wanna be
....tryin to be a mack when Te gets dumped more then Boston party
I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there
i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot

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Old 10-05-06, 07:13 PM   #6
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i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake
^^iight
'cause you aren't a gankstuh. you'll lose, what i'm spittin shocks
and considering your not a g i’ll prove i got shit on lock
^^played
you must be hood. a ghetto cat with a hobby for guns
if your real gully.. it's fitting i leave your body in one
^^nah
it's time to run. you ain't seeing none you just lying son
in all likelyhood.. you've never stepped foot inside of one
^^nah
you don't fire gats and should be giving up on these claims
getting mentioned in the mag..
was the closest you've come to living up to your name
^^nah
and i read the predictions. apparently you'll come 1st & defeat
i agree that you'll be in contendorship.. for wackest verse of the week
^^nah
i'm airing you out.. when the flights over you gon here the sound
of everyone saying "roger that" dude flying to the ground
^^nah
i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.
^^dope



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U wrote that shit quick as hell n I read that shit coughing, very awkard
If this how gay a Te' Key gets...then Barber needs to come out closet
^^iight... worded bad
I know you act hard. talk shit about me, but i get pussy often
while girls are like a unsolved cases to u...he cant put his finger on it
^^don't rhyme
with ya generic punches and bullshit personals. it gets boring to read
cuz ppl only feel wut your saying. if they touched the monitor screen
^^blah
ur ugly ass cant hold on to a girl, its funny how hard you wanna be
....tryin to be a mack when Te gets dumped more then Boston party
^^nah
I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding
^^dope
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
^^coo
hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there
^^lmao
i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot
^^iigh


IMO roger just came better


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Old 10-05-06, 08:10 PM   #7
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i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake
i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.
^This was nice... you should have put this much effort and wit into all your verse instead of the first and last punches. I mean i know you can come better.. shit you have before. but just try bein more consistant.. you prolly would have won with 1 mabye 2 more good punches

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I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there
These punches was the best outa what you had... you also could have put in more focus cause i know you can do better..

V/ Roger Glocks

More consistant verse and overall better punches...
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Old 10-06-06, 10:23 AM   #8
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i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.
i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake

vs

bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there
i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot

te came aiight roger came harder
lol at the te nameplays
v/ rog
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Old 10-06-06, 12:26 PM   #9
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i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake
i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.

Vs

I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there
i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot


V/Roger glocks...this was a good one both came wit some decent verse...te you had a couple good lines but you fell off in some parts...roger you had a more consistent verse wit more quotes...i felt his verse was overall better...good battle
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Old 10-06-06, 03:57 PM   #10
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i'm airing you out.. when the flights over you gon here the sound
of everyone saying "roger that" dude flying to the ground
i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.

vs.

U wrote that shit quick as hell n I read that shit coughing, very awkard
If this how gay a Te' Key gets...then Barber needs to come out closet
I know you act hard. talk shit about me, but i get pussy often
while girls are like a unsolved cases to u...he cant put his finger on it
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot

Te Ora came okay, not a bad verse, but not good enough for his competition. Most of his lines were executed well, but I'd seen them before. The nameplays were nice though. Roger came pretty decent. Tiki Barber coulda been worded better but still cool, Tee Bags was funny and the rest was quite nice.

Vote - Roger

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Old 10-07-06, 03:46 AM   #11
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Te Ora

i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake

you don't fire gats and should be giving up on these claims
getting mentioned in the mag..
was the closest you've come to living up to your name
and i read the predictions. apparently you'll come 1st & defeat
i agree that you'll be in contendorship.. for wackest verse of the week

i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.

Roger Glocks

I know you act hard. talk shit about me, but i get pussy often
while girls are like a unsolved cases to u...he cant put his finger on it
with ya generic punches and bullshit personals. it gets boring to read
cuz ppl only feel wut your saying. if they touched the monitor screen

I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head


Overall, I think this was 1-sided in Roger's favor. I felt Glocks was more consistent throughout his verse with harder hitting punches & personals. Te Ora had a good verse, but it seems his best punches were scattered, which made the remainder of them lose its impact. Good battle from both contenders.

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Old 10-07-06, 05:00 AM   #12
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word. thnx for the votes dudes. cool battle roger. pz.
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Old 10-07-06, 01:47 PM   #13
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Te Ora

i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake

Cool opener.

'cause you aren't a gankstuh. you'll lose, what i'm spittin shocks
and considering your not a g i’ll prove i got shit on lock

ok.

you must be hood. a ghetto cat with a hobby for guns
if your real gully.. it's fitting i leave your body in one

Good.

it's time to run. you ain't seeing none you just lying son
in all likelyhood.. you've never stepped foot inside of one

Good wordplay.

you don't fire gats and should be giving up on these claims
getting mentioned in the mag..
was the closest you've come to living up to your name

Cool nameplay.

and i read the predictions. apparently you'll come 1st & defeat
i agree that you'll be in contendorship.. for wackest verse of the week

lol, good.

i'm airing you out.. when the flights over you gon here the sound
of everyone saying "roger that" dude flying to the ground

Clever nameplay.

i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.

lol, good nameplay closer.

Overall: Nice verse. Very consistent, only had may be one line I wasn't feeling, everything else was good.

Roger Glocks

U wrote that shit quick as hell n I read that shit coughing, very awkard
If this how gay a Te' Key gets...then Barber needs to come out closet

Cool nameplay opener.

I know you act hard. talk shit about me, but i get pussy often
while girls are like a unsolved cases to u...he cant put his finger on it

Good.

with ya generic punches and bullshit personals. it gets boring to read
cuz ppl only feel wut your saying. if they touched the monitor screen

Good.

ur ugly ass cant hold on to a girl, its funny how hard you wanna be
....tryin to be a mack when Te gets dumped more then Boston party

Cool nameplay.

I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding

Nice.

bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head

Nice.

hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there

Cool.

i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot

ha, good nameplay closer.


Overall: Nice verse as well. Was barely more consistent and a couple of the best lines in the battle, real close.


Vote: Roger Glocks - Close battle. At first I thought Te Ora would get it, but then I read Roger's verse and it was equally as good. What edged him the victory was him being slightly more consistent, other than that, this was too close to call.
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Old 10-08-06, 08:17 AM   #14
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Roger Glocks wins 7-0.

Roger Glocks wins (9-3)
Te Ora loses (2-1)
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