check it and stuff.

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check.............

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wanna drop early?

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you wanna early drop, well here you go fagget

ya styles weak...ppl are gon wittness a slaughter fail
an see this bitch leave more half-off...than a furniture sale
left jabs i'll send....i wont stop punchin' till
U turns,
...the right direction on the road down hill
ya aint gangsta,now lbl gotta real bitch on our hands
Threatened to pull his semi,
.......dude please keep ya dick in ya pants
son your all talk, you aint never drop any dope shit
this woulda been the battle of the week, until u posted
Man you really think ya gonna win...don't get up ya hopes
i didnt drop early....so you can get a chance for some d/r votes
i'ma knock you out here...then take you on ya own truff
didn’t wana hold your ground...but still got left huggin the Earth
ya in the paper, thats the day i popoff at all the wack dudes
editors'll have nuthin to do wit a...bulletin the top of bad news

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i may be a lil bit past the deadline, but im droppin tonight.

i'll edit this with a verse, yo.

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ya disgustin as shit, 'n not bringin the heat raw, bruh
ur so gross, this is one Trey i wouldn't wanna eat off of
bitch ur not tough, so theres no way this gays hard
hoe, ur one TM, whose style NO one would wanna trade mark
i'm a be sure to cap this fool, cuz this failures tasteless
so u'll think i was an addict how i shoot meth up on a daily basis
no one thinks u'll win, son! so its obvious i'm better with the fame
cuz these Odz are more against ya, then the last 3 letters of ya name
yea i wanted to drop early cuz ur an impitent, grimey bitch
cuz the early bird gets the worm.. so u better be hidin ya tiny dick
ur chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish

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ya styles weak...ppl are gon wittness a slaughter fail
an see this bitch leave more half-off...than a furniture sale
^aiight,but the wording was a bit off here..sorta misdirect'd a bit.
left jabs i'll send....i wont stop punchin' till
U turns,
...the right direction on the road down hill
^ok.but meh.
ya aint gangsta,now lbl gotta real bitch on our hands
Threatened to pull his semi,
.......dude please keep ya dick in ya pants
^lmao.
son your all talk, you aint never drop any dope shit
this woulda been the battle of the week, until u posted
^played as shit.
Man you really think ya gonna win...don't get up ya hopes
i didnt drop early....so you can get a chance for some d/r votes
^statement,er.no
i'ma knock you out here...then take you on ya own truff
didn’t wana hold your ground...but still got left huggin the Earth
^umm seen this before...but tsill decent
ya in the paper, thats the day i popoff at all the wack dudes
editors'll have nuthin to do wit a...bulletin the top of bad news
^Good.I liked this..pretty witty chappy.

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ya disgustin as shit, 'n not bringin the heat raw, bruh
ur so gross, this is one Trey i wouldn't wanna eat off of
^cool nameplay..an pretty simple but good opener.
bitch ur not tough, so theres no way this gays hard
hoe, ur one TM, whose style NO one would wanna trade mark
^Naw.
i'm a be sure to cap this fool, cuz this failures tasteless
so u'll think i was an addict how i shoot meth up on a daily basis
^ouch.
no one thinks u'll win, son! so its obvious i'm better with the fame
cuz these Odz are more against ya, then the last 3 letters of ya name
^w0ot.lol.but not harsh.
yea i wanted to drop early cuz ur an impitent, grimey bitch
cuz the early bird gets the worm.. so u better be hidin ya tiny dick
^ha.I dont really like these type of punches..but both of u had good ones.
ur chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at
^ok.a lil over used.
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish
^ha.good closer.

overall/-pretty good battle..Trey had alot of average but decent lines..while Un came out the box..with funny witty harsh punches..no diss to none..but Un got this..

V/-Un.

an Yeah,Im in this league too.

ya aint gangsta,now lbl gotta real bitch on our hands
Threatened to pull his semi,
.......dude please keep ya dick in ya pants
ya in the paper, thats the day i popoff at all the wack dudes
editors'll have nuthin to do wit a...bulletin the top of bad news

v.s.

ya disgustin as shit, 'n not bringin the heat raw, bruh
ur so gross, this is one Trey i wouldn't wanna eat off of
i'm a be sure to cap this fool, cuz this failures tasteless
so u'll think i was an addict how i shoot meth up on a daily basis
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish

v/Untold

ya styles weak...ppl are gon wittness a slaughter fail
an see this bitch leave more half-off...than a furniture sale
ya aint gangsta,now lbl gotta real bitch on our hands
Threatened to pull his semi,
.......dude please keep ya dick in ya pants
i'ma knock you out here...then take you on ya own truff
didn’t wana hold your ground...but still got left huggin the Earth
ya in the paper, thats the day i popoff at all the wack dudes
editors'll have nuthin to do wit a...bulletin the top of bad news


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ya disgustin as shit, 'n not bringin the heat raw, bruh
ur so gross, this is one Trey i wouldn't wanna eat off of
yea i wanted to drop early cuz ur an impitent, grimey bitch
cuz the early bird gets the worm.. so u better be hidin ya tiny dick
ur chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish

i'm a be sure to cap this fool, cuz this failures tasteless
so u'll think i was an addict how i shoot meth up on a daily basis
^LMAO i liked this except i seen it before thats the only reason i aint qoute this.

Well i got it tied with 8 quotables so im gunn have to think about it for a minute and read them over again.

Untold. Your verse was good ten out of your fourteen lines where good and qoutable but i couldnt qoute the one i stated above cause i've seen it before so that took the direct win away right there. Your punches was funny and concected very well... shit even made me laugh in some places. Your flow was good and you whole verse was very solid and consistant.. very good job

Trey. Your verse was also good you had eight outa your fourteen lines that was quotables and they connected fairly welll for the most part. Your structure seemed a bit construed but structure doesnt really matter unless its topicals aslong as it isnt strecerdh like whoa... Yoour punches hit for the most part and your verse was solid aswell. good job

This was a closer battle then most probably will think..

Vote=Untold ...
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ps if you cant see who i voted for... Highlight the space between = and ...'s
Good battle again to boht of you...

if ytou could return the favor on mine and spul's battle would be appriciated.

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son your all talk, you aint never drop any dope shit
this woulda been the battle of the week, until u posted


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no one thinks u'll win, son! so its obvious i'm better with the fame
cuz these Odz are more against ya, then the last 3 letters of ya name
ur chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish



V/ Untold
he had a better rhyme scheme, better punchlines and more quotes that I thought stood out

ya aint gangsta,now lbl gotta real bitch on our hands
Threatened to pull his semi,
.......dude please keep ya dick in ya pants

v.s.

ur chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish

overall Untold just came much harder IMO. cool shit tho. Trey had some played shit, like that Bulletin line, I did one last week in 1-2-1, and some other shit. so ehh....

V/Untold

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i'ma knock you out here...then take you on ya own truff
didn’t wana hold your ground...but still got left huggin the Earth
ya in the paper, thats the day i popoff at all the wack dudes
editors'll have nuthin to do wit a...bulletin the top of bad news

vs.

ya disgustin as shit, 'n not bringin the heat raw, bruh
ur so gross, this is one Trey i wouldn't wanna eat off of
bitch ur not tough, so theres no way this gays hard
hoe, ur one TM, whose style NO one would wanna trade mark
no one thinks u'll win, son! so its obvious i'm better with the fame
cuz these Odz are more against ya, then the last 3 letters of ya name
r chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at

v/ untold. pretty easily imo.