V/ Datrushurtz
I aint finna break this long ass battle down. JTR really didn't heat up until the verse after the girl pic. Hurtz keep it harsh from the begining with the personals and plus I LOL @ the shower line, the red riding hood thing and the line about his girl wearin saftey googles. Not that the other guy didn't have some lines Cause he did, but they didn't stand out as much as Hurts did.

aaahhhhh........ wtv, I would like a little more detail, but wtf @ you guys being lazy, it's the champ match and prolly one of the best reads this week and you're gonna turn ya head cuz it's 60 lines...? WTF? Yo it's not even a page long... it takes 10 minutes MAX to read both verses. Wtv...

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Nah it took me like 10 minutes for each verse... lol. but its whatever ill give quoatables.

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This fake aint known, for heavens sake get owned
Cuz Ripple drown ya ass til ya struggle and make ya own
Just take the hard smack, dawg, know you are wack
So in this fight i'll draw blood, like a goth in art class
And ya girl loves ta fuck me, she's never gettin fed-up
So i'll give ya girl a bone like...
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Fucka fake personal after see'in that please disregard my earlier set up!
I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day
This baffling hoe's got bags under her eyes, i'd creep right by her
But if I was dating you I wouldn't be able to sleep at night either
You shy now? Dun' worry I also take what I can get whenever I browse
And i'm sure she really floats ya boat with those paddle lookin eyebrowse
But even your girl ignores ya, I doubt she's takin your time
The only way'd you'd get a lap dance is by shakin your thighs
I got pride, you suck D, not to mention that this guy is ugly
So don't gimme any lip! Or you won't have any left to hide ya buck teath
And fuck working a job i'll take the reward for saving our folk
Cuz I swear Osama might be hiding inside that cave in his nose
Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
I'm the best so fear it, you lookin' at best a queer kid
And ya facial features ugly like it was makin a guest appearance
She's rockin those black bags, are you clockin her man?
I'm sure you tried to Popeye... wich also explains why she's rockin his chin

(24)

v.s.

I checked RV's HOF, n' bitch u'll get slapped fast
Legends never die?
... LEGENDS SHOULDN'T NEED HALF A YEAR TO MAKE A CHAMP MATCH
25 fuckin' battles? Ur not a threat, queer
Neil Armstrong coulda went to the moon in the time it took u to get here
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
I'll set this shit straight, u rip lines from Resin n' greats,
Ur so under the influence, ur verses wobble all over the place
Ewwwwww Jack, ur gruesome, n' RV, this dude's done
My opponent last week was at a baby shower...
... my one this week could use one
She ain't stable, n' this whore's been given a label
Of havin' so many elements of ugly, she could form a periodic table
'm no fan of this gay, see i'm bein' candid today
Ya girl is so prop'd up, she could be a trash can in a play
I glanced at ur girl's bed, n' that bitch's yellin' in grieve
Cuz she bought a comforter... just to fuckin' tell u to Leave!
You were in love with the hoe, but now your spark is gone
U guys have so little chemistry, ya girl put safety goggles on
See I'm rippin' these queers, ya hoe's been consumin' some tears
With such fuckin' bug eyes, she could feed Timon and Pumbaa for years
(20)

This was a long ass read but dope..... JTR was pretty consistent. Had some dope lines. my two personal faves were the feature one and stroke one those were ill. While DTH came out with flames, I thought he took it seriously. From that first section before pic. so dope really. Then after that he fell off a little, picked it up a lot in end. But that middle section was ehhh to me. My favs were your first 2 lines on him taking to long and the baby shower. lmao those were ill. Overall tho this was an ill champ match. The 60 lines helped. But uhh JTR was more consistent, iunno I guess DTH didn't expect the 60 so after a while he kinda started slippin'. But overall, ill battle props to both. enjoyed the read a lot.

v/JTR

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We're both getting under-quoted, but votes are votes so I can't complain, =\

So it's 1-1 or 2-1 for DTH

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JTR

This fake aint known, for heavens sake get owned
Cuz Ripple drown ya ass til ya struggle and make ya own

Just take the hard smack, dawg, know you are wack
So in this fight i'll draw blood, like a goth in art class

You not hard at this crap, get sonned cuz I fathered ya crap
The way you drop wack enforced wordplay, cops started to rap

And ya girl loves ta fuck me, she's never gettin fed-up
So i'll give ya girl a bone like...
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Fucka fake personal after see'in that please disregard my earlier set up!

I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day

This baffling hoe's got bags under her eyes, i'd creep right by her
But if I was dating you I wouldn't be able to sleep at night either

I got pride, you suck D, not to mention that this guy is ugly
So don't gimme any lip! Or you won't have any left to hide ya buck teath

Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
I'm the best so fear it, you lookin' at best a queer kid
And ya facial features ugly like it was makin a guest appearance

^^this part WAS DOPE...haha me rofl lol

She's rockin those black bags, are you clockin her man?
I'm sure you tried to Popeye... wich also explains why she's rockin his chin


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DaTrusHurtz


I checked RV's HOF, n' bitch u'll get slapped fast
Legends never die?
... LEGENDS SHOULDN'T NEED HALF A YEAR TO MAKE A CHAMP MATCH

... that don't compare to the mistake ur girl's made
I seen ur text streak, last time we faced, u were late geek
But u musta liked that verse a lot...
... cuz u recycled the SAME verse the next week
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
Fags got no where to run to, my league's talent has done grew,
In fact, I saw a work of Art...
... knock u outta playoffs in 1-2

^^this kinda was a damaging personal

I'll set this shit straight, u rip lines from Resin n' greats,
Ur so under the influence, ur verses wobble all over the place

Dude ur shit stinks, n' I dunno what this bitch thinks
But u've Pucker'd up so much, ur face could make me a mixed drink

I'm killin' the poor, n' I'm just gettin' rid of this whore
The light shed on ur face, is the only electricity u can afford
Now I coulda gave up, n' just let this be a disgrace
But I'm closin' the gap...hoody u got coverin' ur face

Now I admit dawg, ur real hood, ur not some shit scum
Ur real gutta... is OBVIOUSLY where u got this bitch from


You were in love with the hoe, but now your spark is gone
U guys have so little chemistry, ya girl put safety goggles on


damm this was really close...coulda went either way ...you both put on a really nice show ppl's...trust me this was hard but i thought JTR was gonna take this cuz his verse was better last night...but i read it today again and i think Da Trus Hurtz...you both had equal quotables...

but JTR had a little funnier verse...arghhhh.....so ill vote jtr barely

vote-JTR

Thanks for the votes, 2-2, lets get some more

wow

I would sit down and actually be the hero and breakdown everybar but unfortounately I have a life . so Ill jus say this I feel that JTr didnt do as good of attacking the actual concept of the picz while on the other hand DTH was workin welll with his he came with some solid punches and nice wordplay ...he came with decent fillers which isnt average for most lol but anyway I feel that DTH took this battle with a little ease srry

my v/ DTH

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holy shit.. 60 lines.. wtf @ that.


You not hard at this crap, get sonned cuz I fathered ya crap
The way you drop wack enforced wordplay, cops started to rap
If you let ya words stray you gon' get the pound, dog
So gopher it!.. and get burried in the fucking ground, hog
I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day
But c'mon dawg, that's and ugly bitch, i'm smashin' wit blows
Her cone shaped chin could stop traffic on roads
This baffling hoe's got bags under her eyes, i'd creep right by her
But if I was dating you I wouldn't be able to sleep at night either
She lets freaks ride her, whore, that's what she's handy for
Bitch has enough gum ontop of her teeth to open a candy store
You shy now? Dun' worry I also take what I can get whenever I browse
And i'm sure she really floats ya boat with those paddle lookin eyebrowse
And fuck working a job i'll take the reward for saving our folk
Cuz I swear Osama might be hiding inside that cave in his nose
Dudes like "help i'm shook", got a blade and i'm a helpless crook
But when my knife gives you a cleancut it'll prolly help ya look
Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
In this you'll fail bitch... then get sonned, like an orphan, kid
Your caterpillar eyebrowse look like they're going through metamorphisis
I'm whoring kids, your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace

i liked 24 out of 60 according to that. i dunno wtf you were thinking going 60.. you could've AT LEAST shortened that down to 40 imo. most of your shit offa his girls pic was cool.. but most of your opening and the shit you made off his pic was lacking imo. i noticed you getting lazy on occasion and at times your set ups weren't rhyming with your punches. thats bound to happen going 60 i guess. not a bad verse tho, let's see what he had..



Showin' late, not votin', the price has been paid
U've made a million fuckups...
... that don't compare to the mistake ur girl's made
I seen ur text streak, last time we faced, u were late geek
But u musta liked that verse a lot...
... cuz u recycled the SAME verse the next week
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
Fags got no where to run to, my league's talent has done grew,
In fact, I saw a work of Art...
... knock u outta playoffs in 1-2
Dude ur shit stinks, n' I dunno what this bitch thinks
But u've Pucker'd up so much, ur face could make me a mixed drink
I'm killin' the poor, n' I'm just gettin' rid of this whore
The light shed on ur face, is the only electricity u can afford
Now I coulda gave up, n' just let this be a disgrace
But I'm closin' the gap...hoody u got coverin' ur face
So fuck ur hoodie n' cap, if I wanna hear some good crap
I should listen to news more...
... I didn't know lil red riding hood could rap
Ewwwwww Jack, ur gruesome, n' RV, this dude's done
My opponent last week was at a baby shower...
... my one this week could use one
Ur eyebrows are bushy as FUCK, the hell is that crap?
I could trim them... but I'd need an anvil, machete, and axe
Now I admit dawg, ur real hood, ur not some shit scum
Ur real gutta... is OBVIOUSLY where u got this bitch from
U been talkin' a big game, but u just ain't shit turd
I got a hot bitch...
... u go out with a girl version of big bird!
She ain't stable, n' this whore's been given a label
Of havin' so many elements of ugly, she could form a periodic table
Ya girl's hairy, n' I want to know if ur tryin' to kid me
N' know how the FUCK, u started datin one of the dalmations of Disney
Ya bitch is easy to fool, u see what i'm viewing bitch
I'd pull the wool over her eyes...
... but her hair's already doin' this
I'm no fan of this gay, see i'm bein' candid today
Ya girl is so prop'd up, she could be a trash can in a play
She's flexin' it too, I checked her reflection n' dude
Ya girl's got that look... goin' in the opposite direction of you

i liked 34 outta 60 according to that. the lil red riding hood line REALLy cracked me up for some reason. i liked how you opened yours more than how he opened his. he just had random lines.. whereas you opened with personals, some bland, but personals nonetheless. you really ripped on the pics well.. i felt you two were about even on ripping on each others girls but you ripped on his picture a lot better than he ripped on yours.

v/ DTH - this was a cool battle, albiet long, but truz came more consistent overall.

I checked RV's HOF, n' bitch u'll get slapped fast
Legends never die?
... LEGENDS SHOULDN'T NEED HALF A YEAR TO MAKE A CHAMP MATCH
^lol.this was coo...but not harsh nor amazing.
25 fuckin' battles? Ur not a threat, queer
Neil Armstrong coulda went to the moon in the time it took u to get here
^ha.but meh.
LMAO @ that, n' there's no way this whore's clever
Ur rank's like a tracin' a fruitloop...
... it just seems to go in circles forever
^aight.
Showin' late, not votin', the price has been paid
U've made a million fuckups...
... that don't compare to the mistake ur girl's made
^ok
I seen ur text streak, last time we faced, u were late geek
But u musta liked that verse a lot...
... cuz u recycled the SAME verse the next week
^damn.
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
^w0ot.Wo0t!
Fags got no where to run to, my league's talent has done grew,
In fact, I saw a work of Art...
... knock u outta playoffs in 1-2
^ouch.
I'll set this shit straight, u rip lines from Resin n' greats,
Ur so under the influence, ur verses wobble all over the place
^pretty good,but the wording is off on the part-"the influence"..
Ur pic battlin' slim?? I see how u fight for the win
But I'm glad u brought my girl in this...
...now we can slip n' slide off ur chin
^nah.
Dude ur shit stinks, n' I dunno what this bitch thinks
But u've Pucker'd up so much, ur face could make me a mixed drink
^ha.
I'm gonna evaluate ur girl, and even if u don't care
I'll see how u've made out ...
... with ur hand and some air
^smack!
Ur scared of bein' stopped n', bitch ur gonna get dropped when
I'm lookin' forward to this...
... Ur lookin' forward like the boogeyman just popped in
^ummkay.
I'm killin' the poor, n' I'm just gettin' rid of this whore
The light shed on ur face, is the only electricity u can afford
^the wording is off 2 me,but still pretty good..I saw mim's use this concept before..but not like you.
Now I coulda gave up, n' just let this be a disgrace
But I'm closin' the gap...hoody u got coverin' ur face
^lol.
So fuck ur hoodie n' cap, if I wanna hear some good crap
I should listen to news more...
... I didn't know lil red riding hood could rap
^hee,hee..sorta kiddy like.
Ewwwwww Jack, ur gruesome, n' RV, this dude's done
My opponent last week was at a baby shower...
... my one this week could use one
^yea!
You love football, but ya girl isn't puttin' out these days
Call an audible, but it STILL won't get u any successful play
^good.but harsh or brash..but a bit witty an funny
I'm goin' overseas cuz I wanna see new bitches n' hoes
I'm set to sail... a fuckin' gigantic ship off ur nose
^nah.
Ur eyebrows are bushy as FUCK, the hell is that crap?
I could trim them... but I'd need an anvil, machete, and axe
^chea!
Now I admit dawg, ur real hood, ur not some shit scum
Ur real gutta... is OBVIOUSLY where u got this bitch from
^w0otWo0t!!!roflmao
U can't outwrite me, ur fucked, just get ready to hurl geek
Ur in such a big hole, it was prolly dug by the mole on ya girl's cheek
^Ouch!
U been talkin' a big game, but u just ain't shit turd
I got a hot bitch...
... u go out with a girl version of big bird!
^eh.
She ain't stable, n' this whore's been given a label
Of havin' so many elements of ugly, she could form a periodic table
^lol.
Ya girl's hairy, n' I want to know if ur tryin' to kid me
N' know how the FUCK, u started datin one of the dalmations of Disney
^nah.
Ya bitch is easy to fool, u see what i'm viewing bitch
I'd pull the wool over her eyes...
... but her hair's already doin' this
^ha,ha.
I'm no fan of this gay, see i'm bein' candid today
Ya girl is so prop'd up, she could be a trash can in a play
^coo.
I glanced at ur girl's bed, n' that bitch's yellin' in grieve
Cuz she bought a comforter... just to fuckin' tell u to Leave!
^lmao.
She's flexin' it too, I checked her reflection n' dude
Ya girl's got that look... goin' in the opposite direction of you
^chea.
You were in love with the hoe, but now your spark is gone
U guys have so little chemistry, ya girl put safety goggles on
^lol.this shit was nice.I had a concept like this too..But I said"u an the beat have chemistry..an you failed that class too!"-yep.
See I'm rippin' these queers, ya hoe's been consumin' some tears
With such fuckin' bug eyes, she could feed Timon and Pumbaa for years
^kiddy like,but tsill a lil corny an funny tho'.

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Actin like ya got fans callin ya name? Nah you Su-su-suck!
Man he couldn't make a crowd of retards yell "Da-Da-Da"
^I wasnt feelin this...but still okay.
This fake aint known, for heavens sake get owned
Cuz Ripple drown ya ass til ya struggle and make ya own
^Yeah!!!!nice line.
Crowds wouldn't buy ya tickets, it'd be a loss man
We couldn't see The Truth Cel-tics watchin Pierce play for Boston
^a lil forced IMO..but still good .
I'll come frequent with blows until i've beatin' this hoe
My right uppercut to his chin'll leave him eatin' his nose
^violent,an I like this type of punch.
Just take the hard smack, dawg, know you are wack
So in this fight i'll draw blood, like a goth in art class
^harsh..
Smart ass, i'm equiped, you're in trouble now that i'm armed
So this cattle get butchered like a fucking cow at the farm
^nice wordplay..sorta simple..but tsill nice.
You not hard at this crap, get sonned cuz I fathered ya crap
The way you drop wack enforced wordplay, cops started to rap
^pretty decent.
If you let ya words stray you gon' get the pound, dog
So gopher it!.. and get burried in the fucking ground, hog
^Good.
And ya girl loves ta fuck me, she's never gettin fed-up
So i'll give ya girl a bone like...
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Fucka fake personal after see'in that please disregard my earlier set up!
^cool.
I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day
^Roflmao..
But c'mon dawg, that's and ugly bitch, i'm smashin' wit blows
Her cone shaped chin could stop traffic on roads
^nah.
This baffling hoe's got bags under her eyes, i'd creep right by her
But if I was dating you I wouldn't be able to sleep at night either
^nah.
She lets freaks ride her, whore, that's what she's handy for
Bitch has enough gum ontop of her teeth to open a candy store
^damn.
I aint fake son, i'm speaking the truth 'bout this fake slut
I thought her gums was part of her upper lip and she messed up her make up =\
^meh.:-<
You shy now? Dun' worry I also take what I can get whenever I browse
And i'm sure she really floats ya boat with those paddle lookin eyebrowse
^aiight.
Though she got some style, and it's best you guys learn
That she's rockin blue suede shoes, to go along with those Elvis side burns
^aigght..not really funny 2 me.
But even your girl ignores ya, I doubt she's takin your time
The only way'd you'd get a lap dance is by shakin your thighs
^lol.
Keep denyin it dawg, but you're fat, so you can cry and just sob
Plus ya girl must love Harley Davidson cuz she's used to ridin' on hogs
^lol.basic but funny.
I got pride, you suck D, not to mention that this guy is ugly
So don't gimme any lip! Or you won't have any left to hide ya buck teath
^made me chuckle a bit.
And fuck working a job i'll take the reward for saving our folk
Cuz I swear Osama might be hiding inside that cave in his nose
^nah.Ive seen this on other sites before..so nah aint feelin it.
No fairytale ending for you, so you better wave goodbye now
Cuz you got Neverland scared rocking Captain Hooks hand as ya eyebrow
^nah.
Dudes like "help i'm shook", got a blade and i'm a helpless crook
But when my knife gives you a cleancut it'll prolly help ya look
^chea!
I'm definatly packin, and with a face like that ya girls definatly askin
She needs to tell her jaw to get it's act together cuz it's definatly slackin
^sorta stretched to read,but good.
Get soul-clapped by my crew bitch, and this verse shows i'm ruthless
So expect me to give a left to ya girls chin so hard it'll show improvement
^naw.
Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
^OUUUCCCHHH!!!!Lmao,oamLRofl!!!
I'm the best so fear it, you lookin' at best a queer kid
And ya facial features ugly like it was makin a guest appearance
^damn...Nice.
In this you'll fail bitch... then get sonned, like an orphan, kid
Your caterpillar eyebrowse look like they're going through metamorphisis
^no.
I'm whoring kids, your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace
^harsh n witty...
She's rockin those black bags, are you clockin her man?
I'm sure you tried to Popeye... wich also explains why she's rockin his chin
^yikes.pretty good.
HAHAHA, i'm fucking sick with chicks, you aint got no game ya fucking kid
But I bet you got ya girl wanting to fall head over heals
...over that fucking bridge!
^pretty good closer..made me laugh a bit..but the flow was a lil long winded.


Overall breakdown on quotes:

I checked RV's HOF, n' bitch u'll get slapped fast
Legends never die?
... LEGENDS SHOULDN'T NEED HALF A YEAR TO MAKE A CHAMP MATCH
I seen ur text streak, last time we faced, u were late geek
But u musta liked that verse a lot...
... cuz u recycled the SAME verse the next week
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
Fags got no where to run to, my league's talent has done grew,
In fact, I saw a work of Art...
... knock u outta playoffs in 1-2
Dude ur shit stinks, n' I dunno what this bitch thinks
But u've Pucker'd up so much, ur face could make me a mixed drink
I'm gonna evaluate ur girl, and even if u don't care
I'll see how u've made out ...
... with ur hand and some air
Now I coulda gave up, n' just let this be a disgrace
But I'm closin' the gap...hoody u got coverin' ur face
Ewwwwww Jack, ur gruesome, n' RV, this dude's done
My opponent last week was at a baby shower...
... my one this week could use one
Ur eyebrows are bushy as FUCK, the hell is that crap?
I could trim them... but I'd need an anvil, machete, and axe
Now I admit dawg, ur real hood, ur not some shit scum
Ur real gutta... is OBVIOUSLY where u got this bitch from
U can't outwrite me, ur fucked, just get ready to hurl geek
Ur in such a big hole, it was prolly dug by the mole on ya girl's cheek
She ain't stable, n' this whore's been given a label
Of havin' so many elements of ugly, she could form a periodic table
I glanced at ur girl's bed, n' that bitch's yellin' in grieve
Cuz she bought a comforter... just to fuckin' tell u to Leave!
She's flexin' it too, I checked her reflection n' dude
Ya girl's got that look... goin' in the opposite direction of you
You were in love with the hoe, but now your spark is gone
U guys have so little chemistry, ya girl put safety goggles on
^Those were the nicest IMO.32

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This fake aint known, for heavens sake get owned
Cuz Ripple drown ya ass til ya struggle and make ya own
I'll come frequent with blows until i've beatin' this hoe
My right uppercut to his chin'll leave him eatin' his nose
Just take the hard smack, dawg, know you are wack
So in this fight i'll draw blood, like a goth in art class
Smart ass, i'm equiped, you're in trouble now that i'm armed
So this cattle get butchered like a fucking cow at the farm
If you let ya words stray you gon' get the pound, dog
So gopher it!.. and get burried in the fucking ground, hog
I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day
She lets freaks ride her, whore, that's what she's handy for
Bitch has enough gum ontop of her teeth to open a candy store
But even your girl ignores ya, I doubt she's takin your time
The only way'd you'd get a lap dance is by shakin your thighs
Keep denyin it dawg, but you're fat, so you can cry and just sob
Plus ya girl must love Harley Davidson cuz she's used to ridin' on hogs
Dudes like "help i'm shook", got a blade and i'm a helpless crook
But when my knife gives you a cleancut it'll prolly help ya look
I'm definatly packin, and with a face like that ya girls definatly askin
She needs to tell her jaw to get it's act together cuz it's definatly slackin
Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
I'm the best so fear it, you lookin' at best a queer kid
And ya facial features ugly like it was makin a guest appearance
I'm whoring kids, your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace
She's rockin those black bags, are you clockin her man?
I'm sure you tried to Popeye... wich also explains why she's rockin his chin
^The nicest IMO.30

Overall/-This was a good read...an me personaly 'has a life'..but felt this was worthy of a breakdown...so i took the time..an personally TOOK time...an I got DTH winnin by a couple of lines..I felt JTR had sum that i didnt feel at all were funny nor witty,so it took away from the quote'n of those lines..an yeah mos def those lines would prolly beat me on my best day..lol..but In a voters viewpoint..I juss didnt feel'em...an DTH had sum kiddy lines i felt were funny but meh at the same time..but overall a good battle between u two.propz on that..

V/-DTH

an I hope yall respect my vote an not view it as hate or what not.

it's either 3-2 DTH, 4-2, or 5-2...

Iunno, there was 2 votes that were pretty homo, but it's wtv you feel

By the way, saweet f'kn battle dood!

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word, u too man... u inspired me to write what I think is the best verse I've ever written.. so thanks

DaTrusHurtz-I'm killin' the poor, n' I'm just gettin' rid of this whore
The light shed on ur face, is the only electricity u can afford
Now I coulda gave up, n' just let this be a disgrace
But I'm closin' the gap...hoody u got coverin' ur face
Dude ur shit stinks, n' I dunno what this bitch thinks
But u've Pucker'd up so much, ur face could make me a mixed drink

JTR-Just take the hard smack, dawg, know you are wack
So in this fight i'll draw blood, like a goth in art class
Nah but on the real, sometimes you get lucky, this time I feel ya sufferin son
Cuz you musta had a stroke of bad luck pickin up a girl who suffered from one
I'm the best so fear it, you lookin' at best a queer kid
And ya facial features ugly like it was makin a guest appearance

Sick batttle Like its supposed to be for the crownbut io gotta give it to JTR for juss havin a few morelines i liked
Vote-JTR