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Old 09-25-06, 11:43 PM   #1
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Drained Emotions

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Can you please explain why you want me to change
to be somebody i ain't and end up causin me pain

I handed you my heart on a golden platter
You threw it back in my face, broken and battered

Now your actin like i wasn't lovin and carin
When i even introduced you to both off my parents

confessed my need to be with you until i decease
gave you all off my heart and not just a piece

You masked your face with a smile and told me the same
But all the while I was just a pawn in your game

So when I heard you cheated it felt like i got stabbed in the back
But this was no knife the pain came from an act

Theres no pill for my pain
To fix the thoughts in my brain

Permanently scaring my heart never have i felt a pain cut so deep
My eyes overflowed and tears left rivers flowin down my cheeks

Mind flashing past memorys of you and me
look how happy we once used to be

It's all to much, i collapse I'm crushed
I can't stand up my two feet won't budge

All I can do is lay there head in my hands
The hour glass is empty you've taken the sand


(Chorus x2)
Drained Emotions
Tears flowing like oceans
Pain and scars painting my heart
If love is a battlefield, I'm losing the war



You showed no signs off the inevitable end
We were the most incredible lovers and friends

When we kissed life as I knew it seemed to stand still
I thought we had something this illusion felt real

I was always there for you, but I had nothing to grip, you let me slip when I fell
I knew you were two faced somehow I could tell yet my softside always prevailed

Meanwhile I apeared to be fine guess I covered it well on the surface
Inside was another story you made me feel worthless
And maybe that was your purpose

You put me trough hell yet I couldn't leave
When you cried i provided a shoulder but me all i had was my sleeve


There is only so much I can take
Even the hardest glass breaks

You've taken it to far
And left me just a pile of shards



(Chorus x2)
Drained Emotions
Tears flowing like oceans
Pain and scars painting my heart
If love is a battlefield, I'm losing the war



Third verse now I'm fuckin heated
Save your fake appology I dont need it

Besides you wouldn't mean it
First time around you cheated
And if I took you back, you'd just repeat it

The tables turned now I dont give a fuck
I'ma make you wish you NEVER did this to us

Why would you do this I was so lovin
What were you thinkin? Nevermind guess you just wasn't

Guess you forgot who really loved you
How could I be so naive how could I trust you

Always sneakin behind my back and bein secretive
Hope next time your better at keepin it



(Chorus x1)
Drained Emotions
Tears flowing like oceans
Pain and scars painting my heart
If love is a battlefield, I've lost the war....
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Old 09-25-06, 11:47 PM   #2
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Old 09-26-06, 04:04 AM   #3
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pretty deep simple rhyme scheme but shit was put getha nice. had a lil bit of runnin lines but not 2 bad keep droppin homie peep my shit lyrical hustla
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Old 10-16-06, 08:56 PM   #4
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Thanks... Uppin
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Old 10-17-06, 04:12 AM   #5
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let me find out a bitch had your head fucked up nice shit. I liked the personal feel of it. wasn't too complex but it didnt need to be. tough shit.
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Old 10-17-06, 04:19 AM   #6
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nice drop here son...keep it up and keep it coming....nice emotion and nice overalll flow...though complexity is pretty basic still it was decent!
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Old 10-17-06, 07:48 PM   #7
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Thanks for the feed.. Fear wana collab?
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Old 10-18-06, 01:17 PM   #8
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This was great the flow lost me on the second verse as if you stretched it a little too far... but FINALLY

Something worth reading graced my eyes...unlike those other shits I replied to..I hope there are more cats like you on this site...shit its decent as I can be... I'm durable...

but what not you came and delivered and greatness has thoroughly been spread throughout this thread

nice one

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Old 10-18-06, 10:47 PM   #9
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Thanks man i appreciate that soon as you drop an OM let me know so I can return the favor
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