Damn they got me battling sir smash a lot........hold up/
let me take a second to stash the rock/
cuz you know this kids a feind and he loves the cock/
like that dude in dont be a menace sucking dick for rock/
you cant even match wits....hold up.......ACHOO!!/
my bad see im alergic to bitch/
im burning the spliffs/watch it go from philly to ashes/
in a matter of 6 seconds puff puff then pass it/
i drop keys when i spit you cant even drop an ounce/
& my flow static like when you dry ya cloths wit no bounce/
ya see i do what i does cuz shit i do it my way/
and i done trafficed more coke then a busy highway/
ill shoot ya once and just let ya blood drip/
cuz since the tookie williams story everybodys a crip/
and you could battle me on audio but i know you couldnt hack it/
cuz my rhymes would keep you on the hush like whitneys drug habits/
so you battle on ya comp textn on R.V/
and you thought ya flow was hot till you met crime spree/
there you go thinking again/thinking youll win/
in your case i think that you thinking should be a sin/
so get on ya knees homie and start repenting/
cuz all you do is blow steam and i dont mean venting

community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=3099322#post3099322

community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=3099334#post3099334

community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=3099338#post3099338

community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=3099362#post3099362

my bad i fucked up on the links but i voted for those battles

check.. ill be done by thursday

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yah no doubt man take ya time homie im not in any rush aight good luck on the battle man

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votes please people..............

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crime

and you could battle me on audio but i know you couldnt hack it/
cuz my rhymes would keep you on the hush like whitneys drug habits/

so get on ya knees homie and start repenting/
cuz all you do is blow steam and i dont mean venting

smash alot

Fuck tryin im havin fun kid, cuz your verse is cheesy like nacho lunches
You musta thought this was a kick boxin match, you forgot the punches


This haters heart could stop,
Wait your good! not. The only people screamin crime is neighborhood watch


umm crime you bragged to much...talked bout you traficcing coke thats cool..but how is that dissing smash? ....gotta level your sights alittle...smash alot....words of advice...the space thing...you dont need it from experience and dont explain your punches if you dont have to...sole/soul and hood shit was obvious..you have some potential both of u...you both can come better next week

vote-smash


vote on the champ match

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3WST.

CRIME


and you could battle me on audio but i know you couldnt hack it/
cuz my rhymes would keep you on the hush like whitneys drug habits/


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SIR SMASH A LOT

Fuck tryin im havin fun kid, cuz your verse is cheesy like nacho lunches
You musta thought this was a kick boxin match, you forgot the punches

You talkin to who kid? You soft so stop talking hard on a computer
Nobody wants Crime in there crew like good kids who want a future

This haters heart could stop,
Wait your good! not. The only people screamin crime is neighborhood watch


V/ Sir smash a lot

The opener murked Crime’s whole verse. I quoted that whitney line cause it was the closet thing to an actual punch in that verse. Crime you didn’t really attack him, you was just sellin drugs the whole verse. That doesn’t diss the other guy

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v/ sir


good lord this sucked

crime sucks... sir sucks very slightly less

Rip ya face faster then flash hoe, I was worried about this battle you wack tho
You must be protestin gamecube illegaly, crime just aint fuckin with smash bro!

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Up over no-shows.

Lol I didnt try, ill go vote on that battle Roger

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You talkin to who kid? You soft so stop talking hard on a computer
Nobody wants Crime in there crew like good kids who want a future
This haters heart could stop,
Wait your good! not. The only people screamin crime is neighborhood watch

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Nothing

Crime, u seem to like writing so keep doin' it, but u gotta direct your lines towards your opponent more. Text battling isn't the streets, u don't need to act hard n' talk about guns n' shit. Just think of witty shit on ur opponent. Read battles by the better dudes around here to get the idea. Sir, ur concepts were pretty inconsistent, some really played shit ilke the soul line, but u had a few lines which were aight. Tip tho, don't center ur verse, don't explain ur lines, and don't put lines in between. It just makes u look newbish and hurts the quality of ur verse. Ya got this tho for better punches.

Vote - Sir Smash'Alot

Errr well it was obvious who won this although they both sucked badly, but for making attemps at some witty disses vote/Smash

Take some time to elevate in FL before you sign up or summat.