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Old 12-03-06, 09:05 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
Daubs (4-2) vs. PicturePerfect (4-2)

IP: 2AC9 5FB1

This is the final week of the season! Last week was absolutely pathetic, but with what should be only serious contendors left, this week should be better. I've gotten rid of groups for the final week, you all can now battle it out for a better playoff seeding. Top 4 get a bye, top 12 get in, drop your best

Battler #1: PicturePerfect
Battler #2: Daubs

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.
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Old 12-04-06, 10:11 AM   #2
M&rk
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From: Michigan
IP: 246F CF62

check.............................
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Old 12-05-06, 03:35 PM   #3
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
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Old 12-05-06, 07:30 PM   #4
Daubs
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From: Salford
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Quote:
Originally Posted by untold
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools


il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
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Old 12-06-06, 11:07 AM   #5
M&rk
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this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
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and i've never seen that concept before u posted that
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Old 12-07-06, 01:26 AM   #6
Cola
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
...i'd never seen that before either...and i was feeling it...good bar..
this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
....not really fully understandin this.....

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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
...hahah...great feed and bar ....
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
.....weak bar....didn't like it..

seeing as how....both did good one one bar...i really think that his feed just over took your closer...

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Old 12-07-06, 02:18 AM   #7
Diet Coke
 
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PicturePerfect
this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
Cool wordplay, not bad..
this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
Hmmm not too bad..

Daubs
il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
Pure ownage of his first punch, nice feed..
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
Not too bad..

This was actually a pretty close battle, but Daubs first punch took it in my eyes. Good battle guys..

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Old 12-08-06, 12:38 AM   #8
TonyTone
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From: Maryland
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yes Pic's 1st punch was played, seen the resort wordplay a dozen times and believe it or not daub's 1st punch is also played. seen ppl usin untold for personals too many times lol. so basically im just goin by each opponent's 2nd bar. liked both concepts equally buuuuut, daubs had better wording so yea.....

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Old 12-08-06, 01:42 PM   #9
Spektikul
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From: Canada
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
-this was decient wordplay

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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
-LMAO! that was dope!

and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
-meh, this was okay, not as good as the first bar.

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this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
-actually another decient concept.

-Both of you came pretty good this week, each had one good bar and one less bar. I loved Daubs Feed concept tho cso hes got the W from me in this one. Good job to both tho, word.

V/Daubzzz
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Old 12-09-06, 01:01 AM   #10
Te Ora
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
i feel this could've been set up better but it's a nice idea. not bad
this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
i wasn't feeling the wording on this one. decent enough idea though

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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
lmao. what is it with untold and dudes supposedly flipping his shit this week? nicely executed
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
yup. cool nameplay

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Old 12-10-06, 03:13 AM   #11
REMIS
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
played concept
this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
this was decent

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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
str8
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
yeah word

meh,

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Old 12-10-06, 11:50 AM   #12
N.Tavarez
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From: East Coast
IP: 2FB2 BF34

this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
this is cool decent delivery

this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
okish not really strong


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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
good feed
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
lol i like this one


pic had a good opener, but daubs countered niceley with the last two
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Old 12-10-06, 01:09 PM   #13
DaTrusHurtz
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation
okay, but its a bit played.. i had seen this before daubs came in with the link. Also, its a bit too statementish rather than really dissing him

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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you
lol, i used like an identical line this week in this league, but I wrote mine after yours so I know you didn't get it from me or anything.. so with that considered, a pretty nice find
and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit
this was okay... i dunno, not played or anything, but wasn't feelin' like it hit hard or anything

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this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door
this concept coulda been good, but the wording was really off on it and it read kinda awkwardly

Picture coulda won if he fixed his wording a bit, but Daubs got this.

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Old 12-10-06, 01:12 PM   #14
Roger Glocks
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this bitch is too pussy... and im just not that patient
so he'll resort to violence when i murder'em on vacation

^^aight played...but its ok for a first punch

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il move your line n' prove im hype when im stressin the truth
it should be untold,cause he executed the concept better than you

^ lol ya i juss read DTH use this line haha...cool line

and im teelin this fool im reppin the truth, im always perfect
so when rushin il be cuttin BP like a fault circuit

^^aight nice nameplay

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this british fuck always pays top price with the cheapest whore
y UK?... cuz thats what bitches pronouce when u enter a door

decent at best

vote-daubs...2 good lines against one
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Old 12-11-06, 12:26 AM   #15
DaTrusHurtz
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Daubs WINS 5-2
PicturePerfect LOSES 4-3
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