of course i understand that you flipped his bar, what are you suggesting i say that its a good punch because you flipped his bar... pffft, that punch was weak, you flipped his bar, yeah and ... that doesnt make it good.

lol, i'm not saying shit....other than i'm outtie until this league comes back after the play offs....so why don't you suck my fucking dick?? Would you like to hear that??

Or maybe i could flip it around for ya..and you can take my dick out of your mouth...??

what one works better??

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Tony
The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
And then of them... nice..
Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
Not the biggest fan of this one..


Don
Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
This is beyond stretched, ruins the punch..
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
This was whack..

Vote: Tony, his first punch killed Don.

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
nice wordplay never seen it before

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
nah not feeling love hurts wordplay

vs

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
good idea, the wording couldve made it ill, like the set up and shit but good

Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
anotehr good idea that needs better execution
you getting better though, just work on th e wording so the punch can hit harder and keep at it don

this is close cuz i aint feel tones last punch and dons last punch had potential but not executed right , so based on the 1st two bars i would hafta give it to tone
v/ tone

but don i see the improvements in you weekly, keep it up

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^

^^ya nice concept n cool wordplay

vs

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated

^^hmm nah

Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool

^^not feeling man

vs


Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person

^^ lol aight lil old but still effective

v/tony ....easy

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The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
like everyone said, fresh but wording was kinda forced

vs.

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
Jimmy Cricket idea was a good idea for a feed, but wording is off
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
nah, too stretched and not really a great nameplay

vs.

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
simple, not much really to this, but it was okay

Tha Don, work on making ya lines not as stretched and read better.

Vote - Tony Brown

aight, well thanks for the help...when does the next season come about?

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