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12-08-06, 06:06 PM
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"We Got To Flow" ... MY BEST TRACK YET!!!
IP: 5A36 D0C3
yeahhh... shit is a perfect representative of my new persona, so everybody be sure and check it out and leave feed...
www.myspace.com/blayboymusic www.soundclick.com/blayboy Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238086 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238092
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12-08-06, 06:51 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 94E6 25F7
listening
aint heard from ya in a while... ok beat is iight..i'm feeling it but it dosentsound so so gd as in quality wise you are steady with your flow,delivery is iight but cud be worked on a lil bit! emotion is on point...and your mixing seems ok...volume is iight and all that!. hook is quite catchy and sound ok!
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12-08-06, 07:00 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 8B62 BDCA
feeling it bro. one thing i would do is record in segmants cause your presence falls off were most needed.
Also your breaths are mad clear, get a rid a them straight away. Definitly a decent track bro. |
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12-08-06, 07:17 PM
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IP: 5A36 D0C3
no doubt yall... preciate the feed
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12-09-06, 12:32 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
missed the lyrics on this
flow sounds good beat is aiight... something about the feel of this track that lacks excitement good effort tho man 1 |
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12-09-06, 04:32 AM
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-BTR-
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IP: F434 54A6
ayo its Done Deal back at it...hahaha
aint heard from you in a while. intro sounds wack. hook is cool. turn it up maybe just a little. verse comes in. you come in with a lot of energy. sounds alright so far. at parts it sounds a little choppy. i can hear you taking your breaths a little too much. you might want to fix that flow falls off a couple of spots in the second verse..lyrics were ehh. nothing special. |
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12-11-06, 11:25 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 94E6 25F7
Can you rtf hitting my sig?
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Hit This Up And I'll Hit Your's Too
Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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12-11-06, 06:39 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 6EF9 D8C6
I like pretty much most, of this.. except for those big dragon breaths you be dropping into the mic, I can hear them all.
But I do the same thing, just not as intense as u
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12-25-06, 07:54 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: A644 4EFD
im feelin the flow....u got that nice commercial sound...get it behind a little bit better of quality.......then wow this would be a really hot joint no lie
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12-27-06, 10:50 AM
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IP: 685C 0602
this was nice, you do got a good commercial sound, your voice flows wells over the beat. I agree with above, your breaths are very strong at times, not as bad as Immotal Technique, but still obvious. Lyricly its very nice, not amazing, but they are very solid.
The hook is hot, it is catchy and makes it memorable. The beat is also fits very well for the track. This is what hip-hop needs more of, you have a commercial appeal with the voice, beat, and hook, but the lyrics still have meaning and still sound great. Good Work! |
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