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iight, 10 it is

iight something quick...


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I can’t remember this kid really, but you dropping good no1 can re call
N’ the last time ya went on a streak.. it was two other men were involved
It’s not time for regrets son, it’s time for the wackness to go so catch a fit
N’ your future is very bright to everyone & boot match can been seen in it
2-0 wow at that record son you must think you have done a lot, you undefeated.. so
n’ every1 needs a lame battle to test there skills, but you had them 2 weeks in a row
You can sit n’ think on why your so damn weak, I’m a keep dropping hot shit
N’ you’ll always be WAY below me, by the evidence that was left in the toilet
I really don’t know why you mite think your good, but that’s all under trail
N’ he’s shown his worth to the league, since every1 need a easy win once in awhile




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Nigga please, why try, you know that im kickin dweebs
But i cant say you suck. . . cuz then i`d be dissin feebs
You sickin` me, even your fuckin` cars are worse, kid
So i`ll bash lack . . .without needin` to call for insurance
And im lying, your shows stay bumpin` until there done
Cuz black doesn`t silence crowds
. . .I heard Z`s outta everyone
Faggots done, i waited awhile, parents wouldnt loan time
But I Didnt Care. . .
Cuz i doubted he`d come fresh, Or even write his own lines
So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day

Just A Key.
Thought You Were No Showin`.

2-0 wow at that record son you must think you have done a lot, you undefeated.. so
n’ every1 needs a lame battle to test there skills, but you had them 2 weeks in a row
I really don’t know why you mite think your good, but that’s all under trail
N’ he’s shown his worth to the league, since every1 need a easy win once in awhile

VS.

Nigga please, why try, you know that im kickin dweebs
But i cant say you suck. . . cuz then i`d be dissin feebs
And im lying, your shows stay bumpin` until there done
Cuz black doesn`t silence crowds
. . .I heard Z`s outta everyone
So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day


Yeah, this wasn't all that great. Blacksilence came with a played verse. I generously quoted his closer and that other bar because next to the rest they did actually stand out. He had decent worded punches but the fact is they were all on played concepts. Final dropped a decent key and had three decent bars. I thought the opener could've been a little rawer, but the closer was fucking tight.

V/ - Final

I can’t remember this kid really, but you dropping good no1 can re call
N’ the last time ya went on a streak.. it was two other men were involved
^Saw Hens use this last week...
It’s not time for regrets son, it’s time for the wackness to go so catch a fit
N’ your future is very bright to everyone & boot match can been seen in it
^Meh,but still aiight...
2-0 wow at that record son you must think you have done a lot, you undefeated.. so
n’ every1 needs a lame battle to test there skills, but you had them 2 weeks in a row
^Hee,hee..
You can sit n’ think on why your so damn weak, I’m a keep dropping hot shit
N’ you’ll always be WAY below me, by the evidence that was left in the toilet
^Nah.
I really don’t know why you mite think your good, but that’s all under trail
N’ he’s shown his worth to the league, since every1 need a easy win once in
^Meh.

vs.

Nigga please, why try, you know that im kickin dweebs
But i cant say you suck. . . cuz then i`d be dissin feebs
^Lol.ok,ok...pretty funny
You sickin` me, even your fuckin` cars are worse, kid
So i`ll bash lack . . .without needin` to call for insurance
^a bit forced...
And im lying, your shows stay bumpin` until there done
Cuz black doesn`t silence crowds
. . .I heard Z`s outta everyone
^awww,pretty playy'd...I used this last year..an plenty others too.Faggots done, i waited awhile, parents wouldnt loan time
But I Didnt Care. . .
Cuz i doubted he`d come fresh, Or even write his own lines
^ok
So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day
^u couldve ref'd the moviestar'n Vin an it wouldve made this better.IMO.
but aiigh at best

Overall/-I dunno,I felt Final Came out plenty decent,an Black came sorta played/meh-ish..but still had its moments...but Final just came more consistant with wording/ideas/concepts..

V/-Final.

2-0 wow at that record son you must think you have done a lot, you undefeated.. so
n’ every1 needs a lame battle to test there skills, but you had them 2 weeks in a row

Vs

Nigga please, why try, you know that im kickin dweebs
But i cant say you suck. . . cuz then i`d be dissin feebs
waited awhile, parents wouldnt loan time
But I Didnt Care. . .
Cuz i doubted he`d come fresh, Or even write his own lines

V/final i felt he took it with those lines an his verse was more consistent wit less played shit i like the own line..black you had that one line that i thought was good but you feel off in ya verse, the last bar coulda been dope if you worded it right

Nigga please, why try, you know that im kickin dweebs
But i cant say you suck. . . cuz then i`d be dissin feebs
And im lying, your shows stay bumpin` until there done
Cuz black doesn`t silence crowds
. . .I heard Z`s outta everyone
Faggots done, i waited awhile, parents wouldnt loan time
But I Didnt Care. . .
Cuz i doubted he`d come fresh, Or even write his own lines
So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day

This battle was alright. Wasn't feeling anything from BS. kids wording is terrible. He had some good concepts but his wording and punctuation was just out there. Final came more to my liking with actual punches and some ok concepts. I knew the jay Z punch was coming but I was really into the way he put it together. that was one of his best lines to me.

V/ Final

RTF with a vote on
contendership match vs DTH
Fuck you all Battle vs King Solo

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Meh...
Im Doin` Pretty Good For Keyin` Every Week.

4-0

vote on my battles dunny...before I get mad

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final your to cocky. you won but dont get to ahead of yourself junior your nothing nice to be talkin trash already. ive seen battlers who belong on a ezboard go 4-0, 5-0 in alot of leagues.

vote: final

better verse

nothin

sv

So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day

black has wordin problems. like serious wordin problems. grammatical wordin problems were sentences dont even make sense. "it was two other men were involved"...no. his verse had nothin notable. final came better. not by much tho. his quotable was clever n thats what got him this.

v/ final

Final-And im lying, your shows stay bumpin` until there done
Cuz black doesn`t silence crowds
. . .I heard Z`s outta everyone
So when i show mine, he`ll get mad and hate, so Kid pray
Before i pitch black. . . . . . . . . .in a ditch during mid day

Blacksilence-2-0 wow at that record son you must think you have done a lot, you undefeated.. so
n’ every1 needs a lame battle to test there skills, but you had them 2 weeks in a row

battle wasnt really that hott both guys could come wit better but Final had more quotables , well one more

Vote-Final