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Old 12-29-06, 10:13 AM   #8
okay
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i got 3 battles this week, and facing this guy twice ain't what i need
so expect a wack verse as a result of it being Keyed
dude don't you know about me, i'm the biggest nerd in this place
now watch me stream some punches 'n then download them to ure face
his folks hate him for bein' pussy, they know its a cripple that i'm wrestlin'
and when key threw his back out, his fucking dad threw out the rest o'him

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lemme start this out with insults..fuckin' listen to me man
screamed EARTH TO NICK<--then did it, over and over again
dudes missin' out on life..a girl? naw this dude slacks
works so hard to rack up a handful of wins..
..too bad he'll never win a handful a rack

V/king but by a little....keyed those lines i quoted where pretty decent but you feel off in most other parts of ya verse the opener was plaayyyed..king you had those lines i quoted that were funny i felt you took this by being a little bit more consistent with less played shit but you came way below ya normal verse's...but decent battle ya'll
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