You needa change the link 2 ya sc in ure main post I had to click thru you're sig..

Quality is better..I remember this song...I like youre delivery in this, emotion is a lil better...some lyrics seems baby-ish, and some of them seem like fillers, jus to rhyme the 1 before..nah mean...and you give away the story from the beggining, and also I think ure making up words in some places lol so they rhyme, but yeah delivery n flow is pretty nice on this...and btw half the lyrics don/t make anysense like that virgin line lol..."don't sacrifice life to feel the delight" lol whats that?..but anyway decent track..

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