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01-10-07, 10:30 PM
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I don't lose
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I Try....deeper kinda track
IP: 7994 4630
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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01-10-07, 10:39 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3134058
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=239064&page=2 there u go sorry i did it the bum way this time but yea tell me what yall think
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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01-11-07, 12:06 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 2B95 0529
you sound nasally like your sick
lyrically its cool uhm wtf jsut happened it got to the hunger is comin and shut off lol what i heard was cool though
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01-11-07, 04:46 AM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: 5AB8 1212
Listenin'..
word at this beat, shit is real hot...sample gives you a feeling..you're on... soundin like a second Tito...flow seems to me off in some places, emotion is on the dot..that's good..delivery is decent..flow is way off 1/2 the time..lyrics is real talk... this is cool, Ive heard better..I mean emotion is right..but flow to me is off half the time, lyrics is good, n delivery is str8..so wrk on that flow there..holla back..-1-..
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01-11-07, 09:19 AM
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New to RV
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IP: F5A3 44EE
Beat Is Kinda Cool, ... Lyrics Are Nice, ... Haha Dope Sample, .... Like The Dude Above Said The Flow Fell Off At Points, ... But Other Then That This Was A Coo Track, Keep It Up Fam ,... `1
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01-11-07, 07:02 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
uppin for more opinions and suggestions
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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01-11-07, 09:45 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
I like the beat...nice
ur rhyming was slick and everything sounded pretty good keep it up 1 |
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