yup, checkin' in

^^and last week i got the wackest punch, he even called me a newb.. so
how am i the contender???
......face the truth ^^pussys fixing matches up more than that TV show
and then I thought yo wait a minute ^^ that makes sense I see your plan


^^he never got back to me on this shit,
because he was already forming punches’fore he even wrote the ranks
Datrus a fake fuck and ya riders like naww I don’t believe that cant be true
well look at this


...........….i mean its hard to cracker smile, when im a nigga unlike you
And wit that attitude you trippin, cos k.a.c wouldn’t ride ya little dick,
Must be ego or some shit
Cos how are you the mod, If you don’t know beef MAKES a battle bitch

^^lies!
thats not what i saw come on faggot cant you even take a joke
nawww you just take it personal...cos Datrushurtz when your exposed


ten...ill drop links when theres enuff battles

How The Fuck Are You Undefeated Lol

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3WST.

Admittin' u respect me?!? This league gives me crap to do
But I answer everyone important...
... notice I never got back to you
Ur yet to get a real win n' u can say thats a low blow
They say the 3rd times a charm...
... but for you it was a no-show
Last mag I had advice of the week, u were listenin' to me
I feel like Ann Landers...
...you need some SERIOUS help in the league
Looks like I gave myself a free win n' thats cool
Ur not a threat, I passed the GRE when applyin' to grad school
Ur not worth any of my time so fuck this n' yo
I'd point my Glocks at u, but he dissed u enough on his own

ive never seen so many quotes in a battle. dude had more quotes than punchlines.

Admittin' u respect me?!? This league gives me crap to do
But I answer everyone important...
... notice I never got back to you

^ this was decent.

vs...

nothing.

there was way to many quotes in greviss's verse. shit made it weak.

vote -dth

DaTrus wins in a blowout.


GREVISS was wack and DaTrus wasn't. Not that he was that great - but it was still more than enough to win. Opener was enough to win it. Really not much to explain... GREVISS came with nothing. Those quotes hindered your verse opposed to help cause you didn't do anything with them.

Vote: DaTrus.

Vote : Datrus

Explaination? gimme a break! Other guy didn't even rhyme half the time. that's rule number one pimpin WTF?

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wtf at this

i can't even read greviss' verse. i think dth should win this by ko immediately. i mean damn son... post a few quotes and eliminate the bs

none'a that shit made sense to me. now, if it was a quote battle, you got it won. and i see you're trying to point things out, but damn, just use links in the verse wit the [url] code thing.

at least i see dth has readable material.

v-dth

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you wanna get better at this, read.

The votes are 5-0 in Andy's favour, however, due to him swaying in the LBL Magazine Thread he is deducted 2 votes.


3-0 to Andy....


Yes, we ALL have to play by the rules.

Admittin' u respect me?!? This league gives me crap to do
But I answer everyone important...
... notice I never got back to you
Ur yet to get a real win n' u can say thats a low blow
They say the 3rd times a charm...
... but for you it was a no-show

vs

Nothing

Wow...Greviss...at first I thought it was a verse...then it turned into you bitching and quoting a lot of shit we didn't care for...then at the end you said

"ten...ill drop links when theres enuff battles"

And then I was like WTF??? Are you sure that was a drop? Worst drop in LBL history fam. You didn't even rhyme at all. Were you expecting another no show??? Not smart against the guy who runs the league. its clear he's going to show man.

V/ DTH

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Admittin' u respect me?!? This league gives me crap to do
But I answer everyone important...
... notice I never got back to you
Looks like I gave myself a free win n' thats cool
Ur not a threat, I passed the GRE when applyin' to grad school

vs

GREVISS quotes....

for real im sure you;ve been hearing it all week about your verse fam....
you can use quotes in a battle to base a punch or two off, but you cant form a whole verse on quotes alone , you needed to concentrate on building a verse 1st THEN if you wanna add a quote or two go for it, but next week u can come back if you come with a more concrete verse

trus did what a LBL vet needed to do to win and he gets my vote
v/ DTH