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Old 01-14-07, 12:05 PM   #1
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5. TEF (7-6) vs. 6. Comedian (11-2)

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Old 01-14-07, 07:32 PM   #3
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Yeah ok should be a good rematch


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Old 01-18-07, 06:22 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Comedian

Great mag, as per-usual. I'll try and focus on quotables this time 'round... thx for the adviiiiiiiice.


^ ^we don’t like your dry ass punches, we wanna sock you for spite
Only Quotes you’ll see in this weeks Mag…if Faime S, drop something tight
Won Cyphers cause Fletcher didn’t post, now fag I’ma beat cha
Actual battles you drop more BULLSHIT.. than when Ben Wallace has Diarrhea
Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines
Laid an egg your last title match ya wack flows made my head hurt
You champing this league, we'll neva see like Eskimo’s in the desert
You shoulda lost to Cocaine last week how did you get here rookie?
Votewise….
...you have a dickriding ring, Hey Comedian you get your Clit pierced pussy?
You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool
Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news
You no super hero bitch ass geek you gotta be startled
Sign out!!
Only Comics we know that's worth checking for is probably Marvel
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Old 01-19-07, 12:52 AM   #5
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i'm tearin his phase, you don't want it with me, i'll bury this gay
i'll get carried away with beating you... you'll just get carried away
take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch
and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it
i'll wreck ya shit - next to my thought is the fact he never gon' drop it
Secret to the day he dies... he'll be the gayest skeleton in the closet
i'd rock ya shit, but it's already fossilized, old concepts are wack man
drop the guise, those punches are a throwback... into the trash can
rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts
my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house
it's sad; only the lames'll doubt that you don't belong in this shit
since DaTrus is too scared to give you the boot, i'll stomp ya with it
those generic verses aren't working... you aren't taking this dyke
i've battered & bruised you before... that's why you aching to fight



excuse the lateness.
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Old 01-19-07, 01:10 AM   #6
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Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines

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i'll wreck ya shit - next to my thought is the fact he never gon' drop it
Secret to the day he dies... he'll be the gayest skeleton in the closet
rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts
my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house

This was an okay battle...Im sick as shit so I dont feel like quoting much. To me, the trailer home lines are ALWAYS funny...though its seems like a flip on the concept feebs used about 2 weeks ago...it was still funny. Tef had some weak lines with a lot of fillers n some bad wordplay. I wasn't really feeling the line I quoted from him too much. just a bit. str8 battle though

V/ Comedian

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Old 01-19-07, 01:11 AM   #7
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I gotta start reading more battles. Seems I think everything's played but my own stuff. Thx for voting. I'll hit up your battle tomorrow.

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Old 01-19-07, 03:01 AM   #8
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You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool
Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news
decent

vs...

take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch
and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it
witty
rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts
my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house
lmao

TEF didnt have a bad verse, but the poor wording really effected his punches. even though he only had one quotable, he had other decent punches. but comedian was pretty funny, he made me laugh a few times. so v - comedian for an entertaining verse.
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Old 01-19-07, 10:05 AM   #9
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Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines

vs

take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch
and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it
rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts
my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house

i seen alot of potential quotables in this battle that for wording issues or just straight irrelevant set ups didnt work, so this couldve been alot closer than the quotes say
comedian slightly edged it out cuz that trailer punch couldve easily been left out
but good shit from both
v/ com
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Old 01-19-07, 04:53 PM   #10
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Comedian:

"take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch
and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it"

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TEF:

"Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines

You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool
Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news"


This battle wasn't really that good, Comedian just used concepts
and I felt that his verse had no personals included. TEF actually
focused his concepts and punches towards Comedian with decent personals
but TEFs novice stage of wording took away from his verse.

Vote - TEF, his verse was just more hard hitting for me, and it
focused more on dissing Comedian, not just wording witty concepts.
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Old 01-19-07, 06:37 PM   #11
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TEF:
Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines
You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool
Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news

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Comedian:
i'm tearin his phase, you don't want it with me, i'll bury this gay
i'll get carried away with beating you... you'll just get carried away
take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch
and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it
i'll wreck ya shit - next to my thought is the fact he never gon' drop it
Secret to the day he dies... he'll be the gayest skeleton in the closet
rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts
my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house

I got Comedian dominatin' this battle. Even the lines I didn't quote, were harder than some of TEF's quotables in my eyes. TEF just needs better wording on his punches and set-ups.

V/ Comedian
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Old 01-19-07, 07:09 PM   #12
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nuthin

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i'd rock ya shit, but it's already fossilized, old concepts are wack man
drop the guise, those punches are a throwback... into the trash can
rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts
my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house

v/com....this wasnt a bad one i quoted shit i thought was above average..tef you are
get better fo'real but not on coms level ya'll had some nice lines but com came wit shit i thought was funnier an hit harder
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Old 01-19-07, 10:05 PM   #13
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Hey trus

I aint got time to link my votes I'ma be gone this weekend but I voted in
Keyed VS Eye Que
Faime S Quotez VS Phil Benjamin
The Champ match
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Old 01-21-07, 11:20 AM   #14
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5-1

Comedian WINS 12-2
TEF LOSES 7-7
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