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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3134141
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3134139

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beat sounds cool..but kinda reminds me of t-pain. hahaha. i hate him

adlibs sound bad..just the quality. but then again it kinda blends in with it.

verse 1 - quality could use some work. voice sounds kinda boring. flow is ok. simple but works. lyrics nothing special. sounds like your ordinary love song nothing that really stands out

hook - for me its boring. dude sounds like that dude lil rob

verse 2 - voice sounds kinda funny. a little animated or something. flow at times reminds me of Q so thats weird. a pause in the verse..strange. say something in there. lyrics are decent.



overall i just dont think the voices matched. it worked for what it was though...

Alright..

Nice vocals, the singing is most definitly hot..nice chorus. The beat is a nice chill vibed style..

You definitly got some kind of editing over your vocals, either that or distortion was left over from the microphone. The flow is nice and slow, not really my style, but it fits nice over this beat and feel for the song.

Second flow is decent, nice variation and lyrics are basic, but with the way he is flowing it will be hard for people enjoying the song to really focus on his lyrics. Unlike the first guy who's lyrics definitly stick out more because of his slow style..

Back to the first style, and it's a nice outing to this song...

For sure, this song is definitly nice, I like the vibe of this song. Props on ya song fam..

RTF. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239278

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For sure..but you should probably RTF so that people keep responding on your songs instead of just uppin lol

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did you buy this beat? I was gonna lease it, its solid.When you say "lets ride" it doesnt fit bro.. be better off just letting the original hook remain the same.

Quality isnt doing this beat justice bro, lyrics are simple as fuck, everythings very generic and monotone bro. Flows on though. Get rid a the "lets ride" in the hook, sounds wack as fuck.


second guy comes in strong, maybe to strong for the beat, should chill it out a bit, flows off in many spots, yeh ok um, you stopped oh k here you go again, lol, um, lyrics are simple.

3rd verse, ok this is getting broing now, your saying and doing what everyone has allready said before, man, this track is getting fucking broing, no hate, just own opinion.
man on the real, you didnt do this beat justice, step it up, this tracks very generic and poorly produced.

Alot of potential in the track though, but yeh, alot to work on, On a real tip. I could candy coat my comment to make you feel better, but that wouldnt help. SO yeh. Step it up, especially on a solid beat like this.

not sure who's on which verse..

first verse is coo im def feelin the dudes swagger...his lyrics are decent. flow is pretty much on lock. ya delivery kinda chillin which is okay but you could put a lil more emotion into it but thats really okay. decent verse..quality is meh could be better.

2nd verse is decent, flows pretty coo but ya voice a lil weird soundin maybe try deliverin it a bit different i dont know. ya lyrics decent, not bad actually.

3rd verse was pretty much same as the first. word

decent track yall...im feelin the hook and the beat, it's coo

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239248

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