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yeerrr quite liked this actually...beats nice...likin' that emotion a lot...flows really on-point...quality lets it down just a little, but its not amazingly bad...pretty short aswell, could make a full track outta it...good shit though man, keep it up

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I think I used this beat before...or at least this sample

yea...def. spit to this before...anyway, nice beat

would be nice if your vocal quality was crisper...it's muffled some


ur flow itself is all right...But, your delivery needs work. #1...it sounds like ur a lil scared on the mic...stiff...Up your swagger nigga...flow like u got a big ass dick!


interesting lyrics/rhyming

the lil pause in between ur 2 verses or w/e was awkward...should have inserted some ad libs or something


not bad...but needs work




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yea liken the beat man, ya flow and emotion hitten nice.. gotta lower ya adlibs though they almost over power ya verse ..
ya hook is pretty good too man feelin it.. liken the skits
some mixtape material right here man.. nice track

heres my link for mine
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239306

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ok ok.....quality is about as bad as mine mic wise, so me and u are in the same loop.....but the concept is nice....feelin, multis is coo.... like the voice inserts in the beginnin and end, fits the concept

my advice.....i wouldnt voice over the whole thing unless its macthes like exactly, thats what i do anyway......kinda sounded off when ud say the end of ur word and u ran outta breath but ur adlib finished it off for u...
emotion is def there, sense the emotion

the 2nd part i could tell the vocal sound difference, it was more faint....sounds like u turned them down there .......

do u use audacity?...hope u do

but anyway...lyrics - shyt u know they were good no question
delivery was coo.......i know its kinda hard to get the breath control down spittin as fast as u did, over time once u get used to spittin that fast, u should be good

overall....with the exception of the voice overs......decent track....good concept with that touch of emotion

look for my tracks