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Old 02-01-07, 11:30 PM   #76
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lol... it's a banishment battle. Meaning, if you lose - you get the fuck outta here.
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Old 02-01-07, 11:44 PM   #77
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I torture lames, ya'll cats rhyme the same
And I ain't talking about pictures..
When I say fags like you get gauged and framed
Son..That's real wordplay induced into gunplay
Your career wouldn't take off..
If you propelled it off a fucking runway
I spit vicious rhymes that impale your spine
Your shits so out-dated..
The Lounge is recalling all your lines
So fall back, dude you get smacked relentlessly
Your lines wouldn't fit in..
Even if you literally condensed them g

Blah quick key, that's 07 style..faggots
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Old 02-01-07, 11:53 PM   #78
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O.k How Is Your Shit Different From My Shit Just Cause I got All This ~"!!......Don't Mean Shit At ALL

See I ''KILL~FOOL'S'',And ''CARRY~TOOL'S'',When Im ''BLASTIN~TWO//Shot's Ah Hit You,And Have You Dancin Crazier Then ''INDIAN'S~DO''//But You Face Want Be On Tha ''AMERCAN~NEW'S''!!.../
Cause My Bullet's 'Hittin~Dude's',It's Not Ah ''BIG~ISSUE''//I'll ''BLAM~PISTOL'S'',And Rip Yo Skin Open//Then Wipe My Ass Wit You ''STOMACH~TISSUE''(WHOA!!)!!.../
My lyrics Givin ''INDICTIONAL~SIGNAL'S''//And See I Then 'Killed~Fool's',And Left ''LYRICAL~SYMBOL'S''!!.../
But It's Go Be Then Ah Armageddon When I ''SEE~YOU''!!.../
Cause Ima Leave You on Yo Back Like Yo Fuckin ''CLAVICALE'S!!.../
I'll ''CLAP~AT~CREW'S'',Cuase Im ''INSTINCTUAL''!!.../
Wit ''SNIPER'S~ON~ROOF'S'',And My Bullet's Ah Stay In You Like ''KID'S~IN~SCHOOL'S''!!.../
Im Blessed Wit Ah Mean ''APTITUDE'',I Clap Wit ''TONE'S'',Plus "VOL~UME"//But That's Openin "WOUNDS'',And Tha Shot's Ah Leave You Heart ''OOZED'' And "IM~PURE"!!.../
And There's No "RESTORING~CURE" Fo' tha Pain You Ah ''ASSURE!!.../
I "PURSUER~THING'S" And When This Dude "See~Me",He Go Be Very ''AGUISHLY"!!.../
Cause My Word's Ah Have His Mind "TIME~CONSUMING"//Hold Up!Hold Up!Let Me Take Ah Moment.......!!.../
.....Naw Im back And "IM~BOOMIN",So Missile's "IM~USEIN" I Just Had To Make Ah Quick "CONCLUSION!!.../
Is These Big Word's "CONFUSIN",You Bet Not Make No Sudden "MOVEMENT'S"//Or Body Part's Ya'll Be "LOSEIN''!!.../Ez!!......
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Old 02-01-07, 11:59 PM   #79
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No offense but where are the punches? You rhyme words and put a whole bunch of symbols as if you are pointing something out, but you're not lol

Congradulations at being able to ryhme and type fast, but where are the concepts and punchlines?

Here's my representation of you..

I'm gruesomely ripping tissue from his membrane..issues I miss-used lyrically dissed you and popped ya frame..
I'm hot with flames, spit venemous rhymes that'll intwine
and connect to your DNA..fuck up your fibroptics and the mitochondria making your RNA..

*Minus all your fucking symbols*

See what I'm saying...dude you lack concepts and good punchlines, plus not including personals and shit.

Yea, you can word shit and make it rhyme, congradulations, but dude you can't battle.
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Old 02-02-07, 12:04 AM   #80
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Here's a good personal punchline with a good concept with name wordplay..

Lets' Beef?
Son..I'd physically smash the competition with one arm
If you're looking for wackness..
Visit www dot IBIT dot com
That's Real Talk, fuck Top Notch, these cats suck
Came to Rapverse..
But got called out and they all ran and ducked
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Old 02-02-07, 12:07 AM   #81
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O.k That's How I Do My Shit

O.k Im Just Bout To Put Out Some Bull Shit

And My Shot's Ah ''KILL~YO~CELL'S''...........I Ain't Talkin Bout Tha Phone!!.../
When I Say Young Alway's Go Be.............Ah ''NEX~TEL''!!../

See Me I Make Blood Start ''BOILIN"!!.../
And See Dawg You Couldnt Fuck Wit My Shit,If You Stuck Ya ''DICK~IN~MY~TOILET''!!.../

And Like I Keep Sayin Hop On Letsbeef.com And SCRAM At Some Of Our Hot Rapper's!!!
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Old 02-02-07, 12:09 AM   #82
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Here's a good personal punchline with a good concept with name wordplay..

Lets' Beef?
Son..I'd physically smash the competition with one arm
If you're looking for wackness..
Visit www dot IBIT dot com
That's Real Talk, fuck Top Notch, these cats suck
Came to Rapverse..
But got called out and they all ran and ducked

^^^That's Some Basic SHIT!!
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Old 02-02-07, 12:10 AM   #83
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Right, but on any site it would beat the shit you just dropped and thought was hot lol
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Old 02-02-07, 12:12 AM   #84
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Faggot..Your stlye is past built, like Bob Hannahs
Plus you drop ape shit..
Shit..No wonder your fans go bananas
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Old 02-02-07, 12:19 AM   #85
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Right, but on any site it would beat the shit you just dropped and thought was hot lol

Those Were 2 Different Lines........Man If You Want To BAttle Get On LB POINT BLANK!!!Im Out Cause All Ya'll NIgga's On Here Is Just Fuckin TALK!!!
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Old 02-02-07, 05:15 AM   #86
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ya'll niggas was borin as fuck so i fell asleep, imma get at dis later on today when i get home from school. call it an afterschool special fo ya'll fuckas
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Old 02-02-07, 05:58 AM   #87
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and know what another thing, im not stupid, this is how we gon do it...

nick fletcher, imma do ur little battle wit 100% knowing that i wont get a single vote, just like that top-notch and u battle, so this is what we gon do. u gonna join up on letsbeef, and we gon battle both on there and on here wit 2 seperate flows (for yo dumbass, it means dont use da same flow again on here to over there or i will expose u) because what it is, we squad'n up against ya'll and we on ya'll turf so of course thers more of ya'll then there is of us and ya'll got dem 200 posts n shit cause ya'll b on erday n shit. so jump on letsbeef, hit me up wit a message, i'll send u a battle on letsbeef, and i'll come back over here n reply to da battle u got over here. u can do dat?? or do u even comprehend what im sayin? pretty much this is what im sayin...

I Wont Win Over Here And I'll Prove Why...

Wont Win : Too many of ya'll niggas against us, so we will get hate voted out da ass over here

Will Win : If ya'll stop dick riding each other so damn hard...which is like tellin rice to stop being white

now if u go to letsbeef this is whats gonna happen

Will Win//Wont Win: 100% fair wit da shit.

now if u cant do dat den i cant reply to da battle over here....so da choice is yours, is u man enough to handle me on letsbeef...on OUR FIELD?
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Old 02-02-07, 09:11 AM   #88
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hey,


write another essay plz.
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Old 02-02-07, 09:12 AM   #89
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Will Win//Wont Win: 100% fair wit da shit.
LOL. You guys are stuck in the middle ages and vote against anyone who doesn't put multies in capslocks.
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and know what another thing, im not stupid, this is how we gon do it...

nick fletcher, imma do ur little battle wit 100% knowing that i wont get a single vote, just like that top-notch and u battle, so this is what we gon do. u gonna join up on letsbeef, and we gon battle both on there and on here wit 2 seperate flows (for yo dumbass, it means dont use da same flow again on here to over there or i will expose u) because what it is, we squad'n up against ya'll and we on ya'll turf so of course thers more of ya'll then there is of us and ya'll got dem 200 posts n shit cause ya'll b on erday n shit. so jump on letsbeef, hit me up wit a message, i'll send u a battle on letsbeef, and i'll come back over here n reply to da battle u got over here. u can do dat?? or do u even comprehend what im sayin? pretty much this is what im sayin...

I Wont Win Over Here And I'll Prove Why...

Wont Win : Too many of ya'll niggas against us, so we will get hate voted out da ass over here

Will Win : If ya'll stop dick riding each other so damn hard...which is like tellin rice to stop being white

now if u go to letsbeef this is whats gonna happen

Will Win//Wont Win: 100% fair wit da shit.

now if u cant do dat den i cant reply to da battle over here....so da choice is yours, is u man enough to handle me on letsbeef...on OUR FIELD?




You are totally, 100% correct.

But, check this. You won't get a vote over... because, you are battling like its 2004. This site has evolved with the times and kept up with shit. So, no.. dudes won't vote for bars they were dropping back in '04.

And, I won't battle on LetsBeef.... why? because, that site is battling like its 2004. I won't get a vote because you feeble idiots can't comprehend my evolved bars. And, I can't really be bothered with forging a 2004 verse for your pathetic site.

Fuck you. Die. That is all.
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