I listened to this about 2-3 times. And it's on as Im writing. First off, the beat aint bad. I wouldn't mind making a track on something like this, but.. It's a bit slow tempo for me. Lyrically its a phat song, I like what you're saying, it all make sence, and stays on the topic you were shooting for. The flow is good, very good. Just a little to slow for me. Like the quality as well.

Overall I liked this song. I might even add it to my playlist. Lol. Wasn't to many flaws. The only thing that irritates me a bit is it's..... Slow. But that's your style. Do what you do. It's still a good song, regaurdless. Keep it up.

Rtf,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241113
Thanks bro.