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Old 04-02-07, 09:40 PM   #1
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Sum New Fire....."Why U Wanna Talk Shit?" .....

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Verses and Hook = Enstinctz
Beat= shadowville

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Old 04-03-07, 12:25 AM   #2
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alright im listenin cuzz

nice intro, i'm def feelin ya flow. but yo man you talk gangsta way to much man, i dont care if you'se or you aint, i'd just like to hear you talk different man. try it for once man, it'd probably help you find some different style fans as well. but yo your hook is catchy and the beat is pretty good. overall its a good track fa sho but its just that you should really try somin diff

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Old 04-03-07, 02:45 PM   #3
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Listening: wow been a long time I posted anyway...beat is pretty cool, wouldnt be something id choose but still good, Flow is pretty good man, always liked your tracked ecko...quality is precent decent man what kinda man do u have ? Lyrically its pretty cool man...your getting better and better bro...keep it up...peace bro

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Old 04-03-07, 11:30 PM   #4
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you start off seperated.....not really your style....your voice sounds exasperated.....i feel the beat is a lil lame.....you just dont sound like you in this one...not nearly as good as other stuff...feels like a half assed song.....butt on the positive side i gotta ask what you do to your hooks, the reverb on em all make it sound real good they stand out in a good way
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Old 04-08-07, 02:22 PM   #5
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Beat is aight. U got good emotion but I dunno if I'm feelin ya delivery(it's more about taste, other people mite feel it). Lyrics were okay, nothin spectacular. Flow was aight too.
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